Comments received on poems by Krystal Brewington
Sweet baby
Goldfinch60 said:
Very hard for your friends. We have friends who lost their young baby, it was many years ago but the pain they went through was heartbreaking. May the Peace and the Love of the Lord be with the child and the family.
June 30th, 2017 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very hard for your friends. We have friends who lost their young baby, it was many years ago but the pain they went through was heartbreaking. May the Peace and the Love of the Lord be with the child and the family.
June 30th, 2017 00:52
Sweet baby
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A heartbreaking poem to have to write. Sounds like your friends are part of your faith community? These losses are hard to put words to and yet you have done just that here. May God assist your community as you come to terms with this most difficult loss. Peace and blessings.
June 29th, 2017 22:57
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A heartbreaking poem to have to write. Sounds like your friends are part of your faith community? These losses are hard to put words to and yet you have done just that here. May God assist your community as you come to terms with this most difficult loss. Peace and blessings.
June 29th, 2017 22:57
You made me
Gary Edward Geraci said:
It sounds like you found a true complementary soul to your own. Best of luck to your family and a long happy marriage until \'death do us part.\' Peace and blessings!
June 27th, 2017 22:35
Gary Edward Geraci said:
It sounds like you found a true complementary soul to your own. Best of luck to your family and a long happy marriage until \'death do us part.\' Peace and blessings!
June 27th, 2017 22:35
You made me
FredPeyer said:
I like your poems Krystal, is there a way to turn this font into something I can read?
June 27th, 2017 19:04
FredPeyer said:
I like your poems Krystal, is there a way to turn this font into something I can read?
June 27th, 2017 19:04
How Can One Be So Cruel
FredPeyer said:
Bless your heart. You are doing the right thing. The number one job for any parent is to take care of their offspring. It is so unfortunate and maybe a sign of the times that so many people, mostly men, but also some women, lack this basic instinct.
June 26th, 2017 14:13
FredPeyer said:
Bless your heart. You are doing the right thing. The number one job for any parent is to take care of their offspring. It is so unfortunate and maybe a sign of the times that so many people, mostly men, but also some women, lack this basic instinct.
June 26th, 2017 14:13
How Can One Be So Cruel
Heather T said:
This is tragic, and unfortunately everywhere. My heart and prayers go out to you and yours.
June 26th, 2017 07:12
Heather T said:
This is tragic, and unfortunately everywhere. My heart and prayers go out to you and yours.
June 26th, 2017 07:12
How Can One Be So Cruel
Poetic Dan said:
Reading this was more than sad
Was really close to the one I had
A mum can watch her kids get hit
Choosing him over all three
The tears that just run down my face
Are ones I\'ve dealt with everyday
Although it\'s been a scary place
To really feel, why was I made
I\'ll thank the two that got me here
They aren\'t the ones I hold dear
The lesson that was put on me
Ready to use with my kids
I may now be divorced
Having to split time and space
They know why they were made
Because adventures await every day
To sing, dance, make music and play
Learn together with loves embrace
I\'ve shared my heart so you will know it\'s love like yours that still holds my hand on those dark memories and feelings.
Thank you for a wonderful write
Plus being who you are
Take care
June 26th, 2017 02:12
Poetic Dan said:
Reading this was more than sad
Was really close to the one I had
A mum can watch her kids get hit
Choosing him over all three
The tears that just run down my face
Are ones I\'ve dealt with everyday
Although it\'s been a scary place
To really feel, why was I made
I\'ll thank the two that got me here
They aren\'t the ones I hold dear
The lesson that was put on me
Ready to use with my kids
I may now be divorced
Having to split time and space
They know why they were made
Because adventures await every day
To sing, dance, make music and play
Learn together with loves embrace
I\'ve shared my heart so you will know it\'s love like yours that still holds my hand on those dark memories and feelings.
Thank you for a wonderful write
Plus being who you are
Take care
June 26th, 2017 02:12
How Can One Be So Cruel
Goldfinch60 said:
I just cannot understand why a mother abandons, yes that is what it is, her son in this way. I have absolute praise for you in looking after your nephew, I do hope that all will be fine for both him and you.
June 26th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
I just cannot understand why a mother abandons, yes that is what it is, her son in this way. I have absolute praise for you in looking after your nephew, I do hope that all will be fine for both him and you.
June 26th, 2017 01:10
What Do You Say?
FredPeyer said:
The absolute worst thing that can happen to a parent is to loose his/her child. I am glad you wrote this beautiful poem.
June 25th, 2017 04:46
FredPeyer said:
The absolute worst thing that can happen to a parent is to loose his/her child. I am glad you wrote this beautiful poem.
June 25th, 2017 04:46
I Am Always By Your Side
Louis Gibbs said:
An obviously heartfelt expression of love. Can\'t have too much of that!
June 24th, 2017 08:42
Louis Gibbs said:
An obviously heartfelt expression of love. Can\'t have too much of that!
June 24th, 2017 08:42
We Belong With Each Other
FredPeyer said:
Krystal, nice write. I think the only together pair you left out is \"Twins\".
June 23rd, 2017 12:19
FredPeyer said:
Krystal, nice write. I think the only together pair you left out is \"Twins\".
June 23rd, 2017 12:19
We Belong With Each Other
Caley03 said:
I love this poem... It describes me and my best friend perfectly. Thank you
June 23rd, 2017 04:21
Caley03 said:
I love this poem... It describes me and my best friend perfectly. Thank you
June 23rd, 2017 04:21
We Belong With Each Other
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your life together go on forever.
June 23rd, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your life together go on forever.
June 23rd, 2017 01:25
My Life (1)
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you ask so much. Hour you like the rest of what this was, which I just added it all tonight.. And as me and my kids lives moves on I\'ll be writing a second part to this. Of hopefully how much better our lives have gotten. And thank you I do hope I can work through all my problems. Yes writing does help A LOT. And nice to have support from every one on here...
June 21st, 2017 02:05
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you ask so much. Hour you like the rest of what this was, which I just added it all tonight.. And as me and my kids lives moves on I\'ll be writing a second part to this. Of hopefully how much better our lives have gotten. And thank you I do hope I can work through all my problems. Yes writing does help A LOT. And nice to have support from every one on here...
June 21st, 2017 02:05
My Life (1)
FredPeyer said:
Krystal I read all your poems and they moved me. I do hope you can work through some of your pain by writing. I am new here, but it seems to me that there is a lot of support from all of us fellow writers. And by the way, I was born on April 3 as well, only many many moons before you!
June 20th, 2017 21:50
FredPeyer said:
Krystal I read all your poems and they moved me. I do hope you can work through some of your pain by writing. I am new here, but it seems to me that there is a lot of support from all of us fellow writers. And by the way, I was born on April 3 as well, only many many moons before you!
June 20th, 2017 21:50
My Life (1)
Krystal Brewington said:
Not finished. Something happened where I can\'t finish it. But I\'ll edit it tomorrow and finish writing the rest.
June 20th, 2017 01:55
Krystal Brewington said:
Not finished. Something happened where I can\'t finish it. But I\'ll edit it tomorrow and finish writing the rest.
June 20th, 2017 01:55
How I Feel Deep Inside....
Krystal Brewington said:
OK I changed it. That sound better? Thanks again for the advice. And the feedback
June 17th, 2017 14:02
Krystal Brewington said:
OK I changed it. That sound better? Thanks again for the advice. And the feedback
June 17th, 2017 14:02
How I Feel Deep Inside....
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you for the advice. I really appreciate that. I will change it. That does sound better. Thanks to you both
June 17th, 2017 13:59
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you for the advice. I really appreciate that. I will change it. That does sound better. Thanks to you both
June 17th, 2017 13:59
How I Feel Deep Inside....
swingline said:
You need to leave your abuser . It only gets worse .
June 17th, 2017 04:34
swingline said:
You need to leave your abuser . It only gets worse .
June 17th, 2017 04:34
How I Feel Deep Inside....
John Gover said:
I can really feel your emotions in this piece. Might I suggest when referencing a number in an emotional poem it\'s sometimes better to use a hyperbole instead. \"100 pieces\" come on Krystal! Try \"A million pieces\" or something to really make the reader feel your pain. All in all good work though :) Great use of negative energy to create something artistic!
June 17th, 2017 03:41
John Gover said:
I can really feel your emotions in this piece. Might I suggest when referencing a number in an emotional poem it\'s sometimes better to use a hyperbole instead. \"100 pieces\" come on Krystal! Try \"A million pieces\" or something to really make the reader feel your pain. All in all good work though :) Great use of negative energy to create something artistic!
June 17th, 2017 03:41
I Want To Be the one..
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you so much.. And I\'ll be your friend. If you like. And once I\'m a friend I am for life and I\'ll be there any time you need me
June 13th, 2017 12:58
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you so much.. And I\'ll be your friend. If you like. And once I\'m a friend I am for life and I\'ll be there any time you need me
June 13th, 2017 12:58
How He Makes Me Feel...
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you so much. Ya it is and yes I know I do. But for what ever reason I love him and still put up with it. It\'s not as bad as it use to be. But it all does still happen often
June 13th, 2017 12:57
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you so much. Ya it is and yes I know I do. But for what ever reason I love him and still put up with it. It\'s not as bad as it use to be. But it all does still happen often
June 13th, 2017 12:57
How He Makes Me Feel...
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad write, you deserve better.
June 13th, 2017 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad write, you deserve better.
June 13th, 2017 07:57
I Want To Be the one..
The Invisible said:
Most great. I know I want that, I wish for someone to be like in my life, even if it\'s as friends. Great writing.
June 12th, 2017 20:04
The Invisible said:
Most great. I know I want that, I wish for someone to be like in my life, even if it\'s as friends. Great writing.
June 12th, 2017 20:04
How....
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you so much. And so sorry for your loss. Good bless you hunny. And yes that is very true. And God knows I can\'t wait till that day. My kids is the only thing that gives me a reason to live and that helps me get through this. Good bless them
June 12th, 2017 13:39
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you so much. And so sorry for your loss. Good bless you hunny. And yes that is very true. And God knows I can\'t wait till that day. My kids is the only thing that gives me a reason to live and that helps me get through this. Good bless them
June 12th, 2017 13:39
How....
Jeff said:
A very nice poem...and i also know how it feeos to lose someone so close...my wife was killed 18 yrs ago by a drunk driver and to this day...i cant NOT feel pain...but it does become managable and things will get better...just keep your head up and remember this...each day that passes, is another day closer to seeing them again. I LIVE by this. Thank you for sharing such a personal and painful write...very well done
June 12th, 2017 12:31
Jeff said:
A very nice poem...and i also know how it feeos to lose someone so close...my wife was killed 18 yrs ago by a drunk driver and to this day...i cant NOT feel pain...but it does become managable and things will get better...just keep your head up and remember this...each day that passes, is another day closer to seeing them again. I LIVE by this. Thank you for sharing such a personal and painful write...very well done
June 12th, 2017 12:31
How....
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you both so much. SBC your right, it doesn\'t get easier with time. You just learn to live with it a little better and more at a time. I\'m so dirty for both of your losses. May God be with you both and bless you both. And I feel you Heather T. Mr and my fiance was just one month away from getting married and also I was 4 months pregnant with our baby girl. She is now 6 fixing to turn 7 come August. And it\'s so hard for her. She don\'t understand why she don\'t have a daddy... I pray for you both
June 12th, 2017 12:20
Krystal Brewington said:
Thank you both so much. SBC your right, it doesn\'t get easier with time. You just learn to live with it a little better and more at a time. I\'m so dirty for both of your losses. May God be with you both and bless you both. And I feel you Heather T. Mr and my fiance was just one month away from getting married and also I was 4 months pregnant with our baby girl. She is now 6 fixing to turn 7 come August. And it\'s so hard for her. She don\'t understand why she don\'t have a daddy... I pray for you both
June 12th, 2017 12:20
How....
Heather T said:
I lost my fiance and first love in a car accident in January of 94. We were six months away from our wedding. I feel your heart. Blessings of peace and mending to you.
June 10th, 2017 18:48
Heather T said:
I lost my fiance and first love in a car accident in January of 94. We were six months away from our wedding. I feel your heart. Blessings of peace and mending to you.
June 10th, 2017 18:48
How....
Krystal Brewington said:
Hope you all enjoy reading this poem.. Y\'all and one other site is the first people I have shared any of my writing with.
June 10th, 2017 14:00
Krystal Brewington said:
Hope you all enjoy reading this poem.. Y\'all and one other site is the first people I have shared any of my writing with.
June 10th, 2017 14:00
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