Comments received on poems by Miss Xtraordinary



Betrayal
yellowrose said:

\'\'tricked\'\' stabbed \'\' erased \'\' \'\' betrayed \'\' sounds painful , i enjoyed reading this, a well thought out poem

January 30th, 2018 04:04

Our Mysterious World
yellowrose said:

i loved reading this . interesting , thought provoking and well expressed .... i like the questions throughout this , of what if\'\'

January 30th, 2018 04:01

Failure
Isabel Chelisia Villa said:

truly a work of a great writer

October 13th, 2017 15:24

It Is Not Over
FredPeyer said:

A strong, sad poem, well written. One question though: If you are dead (last stanza) why is it NOT over? (Title). Sorry, I am probably a little bit slow.

July 28th, 2017 15:06

It Is Not Over
jazzy factory said:

I feel this poem deep in my soul.

July 28th, 2017 10:26

Our Mysterious World
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, but this world can also be so wonderful and colourful. Look for the light.

July 2nd, 2017 00:55

Our Mysterious World
Miss Xtraordinary said:

Thank you all for these comments! :)

July 1st, 2017 14:35

Our Mysterious World
FredPeyer said:

Love your poem Miss X, great imagination, great writing. Each stanza could be the beginning of a new poem!

July 1st, 2017 12:15

Our Mysterious World
Louis Gibbs said:

Congratulations, Miss X! You have asked some deep questions about life, questions some never reach the point of asking themselves. A worthy poem, keep seeking answers!

July 1st, 2017 09:17

Our Mysterious World
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

B & W ~ Equal ~ Frozen ~ Loveless ~ Senseless ~ Eternal ? Throughout its existence Planet Earth has experienced all those phases ~ BUT Sweetheart ~ we live in the 21st C and we have to face things as they really are ! Inequality ~ Wars & rumours of Wars ~ Human trafficking and sexploitation ~ Global Warming and Population Explosion etc. What can you and I do ? Be more GREEN and love everybody and brighten the corner where we are ! Thanks for raising the Q\'s ~ Hugs BRIAN XOX

July 1st, 2017 07:06

Our Mysterious World
niallprideaux said:

Love, love, love!

July 1st, 2017 06:37

My Old Best Friend
FredPeyer said:

Well Miss X, you wrote a great poem about friendship and human suffering. Don\'t worry about \"exaggerating\" once in a while. Sometimes it is to get a point across, other times because it rhymes. I like the opening best.

June 30th, 2017 11:11

Failure
FredPeyer said:

Miss X, after reading this poem I started to worry about you, then I saw your reply and felt relief. It is a great poem, you do have the ability to put yourself into somebody else\'s shoes. Sometimes I feel like an actor when writing about something I did not experience myself.

June 29th, 2017 19:36

Failure
alisha said:

this poem basically explains my life rn... :(

June 29th, 2017 19:18

Failure
Miss Xtraordinary said:

Remember, if a poet writes something, its doesn\'t have to be about them. This poem is actually what my friend described what she is feeling when I asked what\'s wrong when she was sad. Thanks anyway though x

June 29th, 2017 10:38

Drowning
Jeff said:

I love this....great write

June 28th, 2017 14:55

Drowning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW \"X\" ~ we all hit an all time low from time to time and you sure got low in this ode ! Pleased you climbed on to higher ground ! It is important when you reach such a low ebb not to reach for a BLADE or a BOTTLE ~~ but to remember the good days and KNOW (from experience ?) it can\'t last for ever ! Thanks for sharin\' an\' scarin\' ! Thinkin\' of you Love BRIAN X

June 28th, 2017 11:22

Drowning
Miss Xtraordinary said:

Woah 4 comments and 8 views in 10mins... wow. Thank you all for your opinions, and yes I am glad that I have moved on too :)

June 28th, 2017 11:12

Drowning
Louis Gibbs said:

A beautifully expressed poem of depression ... a feeling we all entertain occasionally. Well done, Miss X!

June 28th, 2017 11:04

Drowning
FredPeyer said:

The choice of words, the way you describe depression, the flow....is just \"Xtraordinary\". You are doing your pseudonym proud! Glad that you are feeling better now. As such a gifted writer, you should!

June 28th, 2017 11:02

Do I know you?
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. Love has its ups and downs but when trust is destroyed it is almost impossible to get back. I am glad that you have moved on, the one for you is out there somewhere.

June 28th, 2017 00:47

Do I know you?
niallprideaux said:

Loved every single piece of this x

June 27th, 2017 14:07

Do I know you?
Miss Xtraordinary said:

Thank you all for these comments! :)

June 27th, 2017 11:29

Do I know you?
FredPeyer said:

Ahh, the happiness and agony of love. You expressed this roller-coaster of the heart really well.

June 27th, 2017 11:08

Do I know you?
Louis Gibbs said:

A well expressed lesson ... we learn from our experiences. Why else would we be here? Good poem, Miss X!

June 27th, 2017 10:50

Do I know you?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks \"X\" for a very experiential poem on the Ecstasy and Agony of LOVE ! In my experience Love does not always run smooth and I too have had my share of UPS & DOWNS ! However my philosophy is \"Better to have Loved & Lost ~ than never to have Loved at all !\" Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

June 27th, 2017 10:42

How Madness Killed Me
Miss Xtraordinary said:

Thank you all for the awesome comments! Makes me love this website! :) xxx

June 27th, 2017 10:23

How Madness Killed Me
Xxxplicit said:

I like it. Unique and with a smooth rhyme scheme and I absolutely dig the subtle darkness.
Well done that\'s wassup.

June 26th, 2017 21:27

How Madness Killed Me
P.H.Rose said:

Just brilliant
Absolutly love it

June 26th, 2017 17:44

How Madness Killed Me
Christina8 said:

Graphic but well written! Great job!

June 26th, 2017 17:41

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