Comments received on poems by roudan
The curency of dreams
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
I am so glad that you are writing poetry! It is really great that you put pen to paper. The only two things that I can say about this poem is that I know you worked really hard on it, and that you did a good job. Also there is one grammatical error in the line
I remember you once ask me to be real and then I got lost in your smile
It should read I think
I remember you once askED me to be real and then I got lost in your smile.
Other than that keep up the great work and keep writing!
July 5th, 2017 18:09
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
I am so glad that you are writing poetry! It is really great that you put pen to paper. The only two things that I can say about this poem is that I know you worked really hard on it, and that you did a good job. Also there is one grammatical error in the line
I remember you once ask me to be real and then I got lost in your smile
It should read I think
I remember you once askED me to be real and then I got lost in your smile.
Other than that keep up the great work and keep writing!
July 5th, 2017 18:09
The curency of dreams
burning-embers said:
Two magnificent pieces of work come to mind 1) Cliff Richard singing Theme for a dream 2) hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle, the cow jumped over the moon.
July 5th, 2017 17:59
burning-embers said:
Two magnificent pieces of work come to mind 1) Cliff Richard singing Theme for a dream 2) hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle, the cow jumped over the moon.
July 5th, 2017 17:59
The curency of dreams
Poetic Dan said:
Wow. I think I\'ll be reading a few times even to complexed to say all that in my mind.
Fantastic work
July 5th, 2017 17:28
Poetic Dan said:
Wow. I think I\'ll be reading a few times even to complexed to say all that in my mind.
Fantastic work
July 5th, 2017 17:28
The other you the other me.
FredPeyer said:
Roudan, I think I have to read it a few more times to get the deeper meaning, but it is beautifully written!
June 26th, 2017 23:17
FredPeyer said:
Roudan, I think I have to read it a few more times to get the deeper meaning, but it is beautifully written!
June 26th, 2017 23:17
Lets run
FredPeyer said:
We all would like to run away sometimes, we just don\'t have your so incredible way of saying it.
June 25th, 2017 03:40
FredPeyer said:
We all would like to run away sometimes, we just don\'t have your so incredible way of saying it.
June 25th, 2017 03:40
What if you can?
Louis Gibbs said:
I love your last stanza in particular. Good poem, well done, roudan!
June 23rd, 2017 21:13
Louis Gibbs said:
I love your last stanza in particular. Good poem, well done, roudan!
June 23rd, 2017 21:13
What if you can?
malubotelho said:
Great poem. Loved to read. Fascinating, enchanting.
June 23rd, 2017 19:17
malubotelho said:
Great poem. Loved to read. Fascinating, enchanting.
June 23rd, 2017 19:17
What if you can?
FredPeyer said:
Roudan, this is a great poem. I certainly would love to read more.
June 23rd, 2017 18:04
FredPeyer said:
Roudan, this is a great poem. I certainly would love to read more.
June 23rd, 2017 18:04
What if you can?
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem, just so very
Good. Wonderful flow to it
Well done....
June 23rd, 2017 17:52
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem, just so very
Good. Wonderful flow to it
Well done....
June 23rd, 2017 17:52
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