Comments received on poems by roudan
Speckles of a dead sun
Songbird said:
Beautiful!! Very expressive and exquisitely written!
September 25th, 2018 14:58
Songbird said:
Beautiful!! Very expressive and exquisitely written!
September 25th, 2018 14:58
The game I lose
Lorna said:
Wonderful thoughts and some beautiful lines here! Great read!
March 17th, 2018 06:37
Lorna said:
Wonderful thoughts and some beautiful lines here! Great read!
March 17th, 2018 06:37
The game I lose
Ivory said:
I agree that so much more can be done with this piece. I enjoy how you paint a vivid picture with your words.
Good write.
March 16th, 2018 20:48
Ivory said:
I agree that so much more can be done with this piece. I enjoy how you paint a vivid picture with your words.
Good write.
March 16th, 2018 20:48
The game I lose
Jamie said:
Great imagery. \"a wish of a small spring who wants to be the Nile\"; \"even lost my shadow\"; \"add some color to this persistent black\"
Each one of these even stands well alone as a poem.
March 16th, 2018 20:09
Jamie said:
Great imagery. \"a wish of a small spring who wants to be the Nile\"; \"even lost my shadow\"; \"add some color to this persistent black\"
Each one of these even stands well alone as a poem.
March 16th, 2018 20:09
I do believe in meditation
Noah Malice said:
Regardless of what you think of meditation, it can be really helpful.
March 10th, 2018 22:00
Noah Malice said:
Regardless of what you think of meditation, it can be really helpful.
March 10th, 2018 22:00
You\'re not afraid.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem about this very special place only lovers can experience.
August 29th, 2017 21:42
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem about this very special place only lovers can experience.
August 29th, 2017 21:42
From where to when
myself and me said:
Love like a circle with an open end.
From stranger to friend to lover then reverse, and searching to a new circle.
Love this.
August 18th, 2017 20:19
myself and me said:
Love like a circle with an open end.
From stranger to friend to lover then reverse, and searching to a new circle.
Love this.
August 18th, 2017 20:19
Who are You ?
FredPeyer said:
As for your question: Nothing!
Great poem, great reading, great writing, great subject!
August 15th, 2017 17:23
FredPeyer said:
As for your question: Nothing!
Great poem, great reading, great writing, great subject!
August 15th, 2017 17:23
Who are You ?
Poetic Dan said:
\"I\'ve been given a life and I\'ll walk it my way
knowing that the end is not far away.
I am my own you and you are my own me\"
Nothing I will do but everything will change!
This is outstanding...
August 15th, 2017 17:13
Poetic Dan said:
\"I\'ve been given a life and I\'ll walk it my way
knowing that the end is not far away.
I am my own you and you are my own me\"
Nothing I will do but everything will change!
This is outstanding...
August 15th, 2017 17:13
Awaking Reality
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Sex as the be all, end all to our being and identity is the greatest deception ever lived - yet our culture still places it at the pinnacle of the lived experience. Much carnage in the wake of this failed, sexual revolution and your poem strikes that nerve. See the Ruth Institutue for survivor stories and a better way...
August 14th, 2017 22:58
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Sex as the be all, end all to our being and identity is the greatest deception ever lived - yet our culture still places it at the pinnacle of the lived experience. Much carnage in the wake of this failed, sexual revolution and your poem strikes that nerve. See the Ruth Institutue for survivor stories and a better way...
August 14th, 2017 22:58
Alone in your head
eyeamsoule said:
What I get from this poem is; I feel like it can represent society and how us as a society have lost connection/feeling with one another. We have strayed away from our true purpose on this planet. It can also represent being disconnected with yourself and the internal battle of not accepting you for you.
August 5th, 2017 16:38
eyeamsoule said:
What I get from this poem is; I feel like it can represent society and how us as a society have lost connection/feeling with one another. We have strayed away from our true purpose on this planet. It can also represent being disconnected with yourself and the internal battle of not accepting you for you.
August 5th, 2017 16:38
Alone in your head
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes it takes a lot to convince somebody that what they need is standing right in front of them.
Nice poem!
August 5th, 2017 14:25
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes it takes a lot to convince somebody that what they need is standing right in front of them.
Nice poem!
August 5th, 2017 14:25
Life of a smile
FredPeyer said:
Nicely written roudan. And the life of a smile is.......eternal.
July 29th, 2017 23:58
FredPeyer said:
Nicely written roudan. And the life of a smile is.......eternal.
July 29th, 2017 23:58
Life of a smile
Accidental Poet said:
A smile is universal. Everyone needs it, and everyone has it.
July 29th, 2017 19:51
Accidental Poet said:
A smile is universal. Everyone needs it, and everyone has it.
July 29th, 2017 19:51
At Peace
AAA said:
i got chills reading it! the ending fills my soul with pleasure!
July 20th, 2017 23:00
AAA said:
i got chills reading it! the ending fills my soul with pleasure!
July 20th, 2017 23:00
Inspire
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic my head was dancing away while reading.
Second time round loads of new meanings!
July 18th, 2017 17:29
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic my head was dancing away while reading.
Second time round loads of new meanings!
July 18th, 2017 17:29
queen of two worlds
Nicholas Browning said:
Last line\'s a little confusing. I pretty much just read it how I wanted to. It\'s good, without a doubt. Keep it up.
July 13th, 2017 15:09
Nicholas Browning said:
Last line\'s a little confusing. I pretty much just read it how I wanted to. It\'s good, without a doubt. Keep it up.
July 13th, 2017 15:09
Standing alone
FredPeyer said:
I like the poem, but am not sure if I get the meaning you intended. What I get from it is the loneliness of a writer. Am I way off here?
July 8th, 2017 19:06
FredPeyer said:
I like the poem, but am not sure if I get the meaning you intended. What I get from it is the loneliness of a writer. Am I way off here?
July 8th, 2017 19:06
Naked clown
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Now is important always appreciate it as it will not last long.
July 8th, 2017 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Now is important always appreciate it as it will not last long.
July 8th, 2017 00:18
Naked clown
FredPeyer said:
Love the lead-in, the visual, and the content. Great great poem!
July 7th, 2017 20:22
FredPeyer said:
Love the lead-in, the visual, and the content. Great great poem!
July 7th, 2017 20:22
Naked clown
Poetic Dan said:
...... Wow I\'m honestly lost for words but emotions felt with it is going to have an everlasting affect.
Truly goosebumping outstanding, thank you
July 7th, 2017 18:08
Poetic Dan said:
...... Wow I\'m honestly lost for words but emotions felt with it is going to have an everlasting affect.
Truly goosebumping outstanding, thank you
July 7th, 2017 18:08
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