Comments received on poems by PenguinPoetess
\"Cadaver\"
FredPeyer said:
Your poem is quite graphic, but it fits. Your writing is well thought out, fluid, building up to a surprise ending: \"This type of love is an art\". It made me wonder, who is \"They\"?
June 27th, 2017 19:49
FredPeyer said:
Your poem is quite graphic, but it fits. Your writing is well thought out, fluid, building up to a surprise ending: \"This type of love is an art\". It made me wonder, who is \"They\"?
June 27th, 2017 19:49
Tiny Little Soldier
FredPeyer said:
Thank you for a great poem. We do sometimes forget that kids are like sponges, absorbing everything.
June 26th, 2017 14:21
FredPeyer said:
Thank you for a great poem. We do sometimes forget that kids are like sponges, absorbing everything.
June 26th, 2017 14:21
Tiny Little Soldier
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ALYSSA for another elegantly structured and composed \"free verse\" Poem. Children are a \"Gift from God\" and should be treated as such ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN ~ please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
June 26th, 2017 10:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ALYSSA for another elegantly structured and composed \"free verse\" Poem. Children are a \"Gift from God\" and should be treated as such ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN ~ please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
June 26th, 2017 10:06
The Shaking
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALYSSA ~ Thank you for an excellent first Poem . A very elegant free verse structure and a content that has touched everyone\'s heart. I was in the USA (IOWA) on 911 and it brought back vivid and horrific memories of the Twin Towers when 3000 innocent people perished ~ My Friends Son worked in the N TOWER but was out on Business that day. I was in CUBA when the LONDON fire happened but we had full coverage on CNN ~ I live near London so it was doubly horrific and we knew the death toll would approach 100 many are still unaccounted for and some jumped ! .Your poem captures the hopelessness of the situation before ~ during and after. Thanks for caring and sharing from the USA. Please pray for Theresa May (UK PM) ~ she is a Godly Woman but at the moment is under unbearable strain with no political majority and having to lead a divided Party ~ and cope with Fire & Terrorism and the intricacies of BREXIT ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
June 25th, 2017 18:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALYSSA ~ Thank you for an excellent first Poem . A very elegant free verse structure and a content that has touched everyone\'s heart. I was in the USA (IOWA) on 911 and it brought back vivid and horrific memories of the Twin Towers when 3000 innocent people perished ~ My Friends Son worked in the N TOWER but was out on Business that day. I was in CUBA when the LONDON fire happened but we had full coverage on CNN ~ I live near London so it was doubly horrific and we knew the death toll would approach 100 many are still unaccounted for and some jumped ! .Your poem captures the hopelessness of the situation before ~ during and after. Thanks for caring and sharing from the USA. Please pray for Theresa May (UK PM) ~ she is a Godly Woman but at the moment is under unbearable strain with no political majority and having to lead a divided Party ~ and cope with Fire & Terrorism and the intricacies of BREXIT ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
June 25th, 2017 18:11
The Shaking
Heather T said:
We all watched in horror and tears as this tragedy unfolded. Heart-felt penning.
June 25th, 2017 08:33
Heather T said:
We all watched in horror and tears as this tragedy unfolded. Heart-felt penning.
June 25th, 2017 08:33
The Shaking
Fay Slimm. said:
A write full of vivid compassion for friends who lost loved ones in this tragic disaster. Sad indeed but thank you Alyssa for composing this memorial verse.
June 25th, 2017 05:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A write full of vivid compassion for friends who lost loved ones in this tragic disaster. Sad indeed but thank you Alyssa for composing this memorial verse.
June 25th, 2017 05:47
The Shaking
FredPeyer said:
Alyssa, this is a very moving poem. Reminds me of 9/11 in the States. Thank you for sharing it!
June 25th, 2017 03:24
FredPeyer said:
Alyssa, this is a very moving poem. Reminds me of 9/11 in the States. Thank you for sharing it!
June 25th, 2017 03:24
The Shaking
kevin browne said:
thank you for writing this. I live in Somerset in the uk and when this disaster happened there was so many tears flowing and still are. a great write here, well done x
June 25th, 2017 02:41
kevin browne said:
thank you for writing this. I live in Somerset in the uk and when this disaster happened there was so many tears flowing and still are. a great write here, well done x
June 25th, 2017 02:41
