Comments received on poems by just a girl.
Slut
malubotelho said:
I know what you mean. It is good that you pointed this out. People get aggressive sometimes just because they are jealous 😒for me no one should be called names. I have a question though: is slut and bitch the same thing? Better ask google. Thanks for your great writing.
July 11th, 2017 21:16
malubotelho said:
I know what you mean. It is good that you pointed this out. People get aggressive sometimes just because they are jealous 😒for me no one should be called names. I have a question though: is slut and bitch the same thing? Better ask google. Thanks for your great writing.
July 11th, 2017 21:16
Slut
Nicholas Browning said:
I don\'t really know. I call a girl a slut when I know she\'s been in bed with at least three different guys in a week, and if I know her. A girl that cheats can be called a slut. But for dressing a certain way, or taking a photo in a mirror? Nah, I I don\'t think so.
July 11th, 2017 17:09
Nicholas Browning said:
I don\'t really know. I call a girl a slut when I know she\'s been in bed with at least three different guys in a week, and if I know her. A girl that cheats can be called a slut. But for dressing a certain way, or taking a photo in a mirror? Nah, I I don\'t think so.
July 11th, 2017 17:09
Slut
burning-embers said:
In the manner you describe the use of the word it is i think a shortened version of \"wow she looks too good doing that, i wish i could be like that, i wish my legs looked as nice etc.\"
July 11th, 2017 16:19
burning-embers said:
In the manner you describe the use of the word it is i think a shortened version of \"wow she looks too good doing that, i wish i could be like that, i wish my legs looked as nice etc.\"
July 11th, 2017 16:19
I wish
FredPeyer said:
Well written poem. I like how you use the repetition of \"I wish you knew\" to hammer away at the point. Very well written, very emotional, very personal.
July 11th, 2017 11:53
FredPeyer said:
Well written poem. I like how you use the repetition of \"I wish you knew\" to hammer away at the point. Very well written, very emotional, very personal.
July 11th, 2017 11:53
Slut
FredPeyer said:
Here is the actual meaning of \"slut\" according to wikipedia:
Slut is generally a term for a woman or girl who is considered to have loose sexual morals or who is sexually promiscuous.[1][2] It is usually used as an insult, sexual slur or offensive term of disparagement (slut shaming).[2][3] It originally meant \"a dirty, slovenly woman\",[2] and is rarely used to refer to men, generally requiring clarification by use of the terms male slut or man whore.[4][5]
I think it is great that you bring this up in a well written poem. And all the examples in your poem do NOT add up to the word \"slut\", so to answer your last line question: NO!
No confusion here, justconfusedgirl :-)
July 11th, 2017 11:35
FredPeyer said:
Here is the actual meaning of \"slut\" according to wikipedia:
Slut is generally a term for a woman or girl who is considered to have loose sexual morals or who is sexually promiscuous.[1][2] It is usually used as an insult, sexual slur or offensive term of disparagement (slut shaming).[2][3] It originally meant \"a dirty, slovenly woman\",[2] and is rarely used to refer to men, generally requiring clarification by use of the terms male slut or man whore.[4][5]
I think it is great that you bring this up in a well written poem. And all the examples in your poem do NOT add up to the word \"slut\", so to answer your last line question: NO!
No confusion here, justconfusedgirl :-)
July 11th, 2017 11:35
When I\'m low
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poems, the way they are written, your images (...as satisfying as taking off tight clothes...), but have to say that I don\'t know anything about \"cutting\". Guess have to check it out on Wikipedia.
July 5th, 2017 20:48
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poems, the way they are written, your images (...as satisfying as taking off tight clothes...), but have to say that I don\'t know anything about \"cutting\". Guess have to check it out on Wikipedia.
July 5th, 2017 20:48
When I\'m low
burning-embers said:
Passion, deceit, anticipation, guilt, exhilaration, all there crafted into a dark read. Thrilling. Can you do scary voice too?
July 5th, 2017 20:43
burning-embers said:
Passion, deceit, anticipation, guilt, exhilaration, all there crafted into a dark read. Thrilling. Can you do scary voice too?
July 5th, 2017 20:43
When I\'m low
lostgirl24 said:
This is a wonderful poem! I admire your confidence; you go girl!
July 5th, 2017 20:05
lostgirl24 said:
This is a wonderful poem! I admire your confidence; you go girl!
July 5th, 2017 20:05
I wish
Krystal Brewington said:
Really liked this. Good job on the writing. I felt your pain while reading this. Hope to read more by you
July 4th, 2017 14:39
Krystal Brewington said:
Really liked this. Good job on the writing. I felt your pain while reading this. Hope to read more by you
July 4th, 2017 14:39
I wish
kendra_dawnn said:
I honestly love this.. I can really relate to it and it shows that you are brave enough to express how you actually feel. When I was in a deep stage of depression, there was no way I could have mustered up the courage to do that!
July 4th, 2017 12:25
kendra_dawnn said:
I honestly love this.. I can really relate to it and it shows that you are brave enough to express how you actually feel. When I was in a deep stage of depression, there was no way I could have mustered up the courage to do that!
July 4th, 2017 12:25
Through my eyes
Gary Edward Geraci said:
God knew you before creation when he formed you in his image. Whether \'worldly standards\' of beauty would agree or not is your hurdle, I understand. Fortunately, that\'s a much smaller hurdle to get across. Through my eyes, I see beauty in your pen -
July 3rd, 2017 22:01
Gary Edward Geraci said:
God knew you before creation when he formed you in his image. Whether \'worldly standards\' of beauty would agree or not is your hurdle, I understand. Fortunately, that\'s a much smaller hurdle to get across. Through my eyes, I see beauty in your pen -
July 3rd, 2017 22:01
Through my eyes
FredPeyer said:
Well written! You know beauty really is in the eye of the beholder. I think my wife of 40 years is the most beautiful woman in the world and I don\'t care at all whatever anybody else thinks. I don\'t know how you look like, but I KNOW you are beautiful, because only a beautiful person could write like that. Welcome to the forum. Am looking forward to read more from you.
July 3rd, 2017 21:31
FredPeyer said:
Well written! You know beauty really is in the eye of the beholder. I think my wife of 40 years is the most beautiful woman in the world and I don\'t care at all whatever anybody else thinks. I don\'t know how you look like, but I KNOW you are beautiful, because only a beautiful person could write like that. Welcome to the forum. Am looking forward to read more from you.
July 3rd, 2017 21:31
