Comments received on poems by just a girl.



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brokenmirrors said:

What you’ve written is very real. Hang in there.

April 1st, 2018 18:36

Slut
malubotelho said:

I know what you mean. It is good that you pointed this out. People get aggressive sometimes just because they are jealous 😒for me no one should be called names. I have a question though: is slut and bitch the same thing? Better ask google. Thanks for your great writing.

July 11th, 2017 21:16

Slut
Nicholas Browning said:

I don\'t really know. I call a girl a slut when I know she\'s been in bed with at least three different guys in a week, and if I know her. A girl that cheats can be called a slut. But for dressing a certain way, or taking a photo in a mirror? Nah, I I don\'t think so.

July 11th, 2017 17:09

Slut
burning-embers said:

In the manner you describe the use of the word it is i think a shortened version of \"wow she looks too good doing that, i wish i could be like that, i wish my legs looked as nice etc.\"

July 11th, 2017 16:19

Slut
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 11th, 2017 12:27

I wish
FredPeyer said:

Well written poem. I like how you use the repetition of \"I wish you knew\" to hammer away at the point. Very well written, very emotional, very personal.

July 11th, 2017 11:53

Slut
FredPeyer said:

Here is the actual meaning of \"slut\" according to wikipedia:
Slut is generally a term for a woman or girl who is considered to have loose sexual morals or who is sexually promiscuous.[1][2] It is usually used as an insult, sexual slur or offensive term of disparagement (slut shaming).[2][3] It originally meant \"a dirty, slovenly woman\",[2] and is rarely used to refer to men, generally requiring clarification by use of the terms male slut or man whore.[4][5]

I think it is great that you bring this up in a well written poem. And all the examples in your poem do NOT add up to the word \"slut\", so to answer your last line question: NO!
No confusion here, justconfusedgirl :-)


July 11th, 2017 11:35

When I\'m low
kevin browne said:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKTU4AarZ7A

July 5th, 2017 21:27

When I\'m low
FredPeyer said:

I do like your poems, the way they are written, your images (...as satisfying as taking off tight clothes...), but have to say that I don\'t know anything about \"cutting\". Guess have to check it out on Wikipedia.

July 5th, 2017 20:48

When I\'m low
burning-embers said:

Passion, deceit, anticipation, guilt, exhilaration, all there crafted into a dark read. Thrilling. Can you do scary voice too?


July 5th, 2017 20:43

When I\'m low
lostgirl24 said:

This is a wonderful poem! I admire your confidence; you go girl!

July 5th, 2017 20:05

I wish
Krystal Brewington said:

Really liked this. Good job on the writing. I felt your pain while reading this. Hope to read more by you

July 4th, 2017 14:39

I wish
kendra_dawnn said:

I honestly love this.. I can really relate to it and it shows that you are brave enough to express how you actually feel. When I was in a deep stage of depression, there was no way I could have mustered up the courage to do that!

July 4th, 2017 12:25

Through my eyes
Gary Edward Geraci said:

God knew you before creation when he formed you in his image. Whether \'worldly standards\' of beauty would agree or not is your hurdle, I understand. Fortunately, that\'s a much smaller hurdle to get across. Through my eyes, I see beauty in your pen -

July 3rd, 2017 22:01

Through my eyes
FredPeyer said:

Well written! You know beauty really is in the eye of the beholder. I think my wife of 40 years is the most beautiful woman in the world and I don\'t care at all whatever anybody else thinks. I don\'t know how you look like, but I KNOW you are beautiful, because only a beautiful person could write like that. Welcome to the forum. Am looking forward to read more from you.

July 3rd, 2017 21:31