Comments received on poems by ali.louise
HIM.
burning-embers said:
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. A celebration of enduring love. A stolen moment to rejoice in what was and what has become buried in familiarity and the day to day. Never seen this expressed with such sensitivity and romance. +fav\'s
July 15th, 2017 08:56
burning-embers said:
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. A celebration of enduring love. A stolen moment to rejoice in what was and what has become buried in familiarity and the day to day. Never seen this expressed with such sensitivity and romance. +fav\'s
July 15th, 2017 08:56
HIM.
FredPeyer said:
What an incredible first line!
I do like your poem ali.louise
Feed us some more!
July 15th, 2017 04:06
FredPeyer said:
What an incredible first line!
I do like your poem ali.louise
Feed us some more!
July 15th, 2017 04:06
Time is nothing
mbird72 said:
It seems that everyone is looking into me tonight. Only sleep is elusive too many demons waiting for me. Thank you
July 14th, 2017 03:50
mbird72 said:
It seems that everyone is looking into me tonight. Only sleep is elusive too many demons waiting for me. Thank you
July 14th, 2017 03:50
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FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site ali.louise.
A very nice first contribution here, especially like the last line.
July 13th, 2017 19:18
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site ali.louise.
A very nice first contribution here, especially like the last line.
July 13th, 2017 19:18
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Louis Gibbs said:
Good first poetic contribution. ali! My only suggestion is that you chose a larger font, about a #12, to make it much easier to read. Welcome!
July 13th, 2017 15:18
Louis Gibbs said:
Good first poetic contribution. ali! My only suggestion is that you chose a larger font, about a #12, to make it much easier to read. Welcome!
July 13th, 2017 15:18
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Nicholas Browning said:
This is nice. A lot of potential. When you get more experience your style and flow will become refined. Good stuff. I like the title, and the word \"Prism\". Bravo.
July 13th, 2017 15:06
Nicholas Browning said:
This is nice. A lot of potential. When you get more experience your style and flow will become refined. Good stuff. I like the title, and the word \"Prism\". Bravo.
July 13th, 2017 15:06
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOUISE - It is well written with lots of Rhythm. It also tells a story. We all need light and mirrors and spectra (colour) to tell us who we are are and what we are ! BUT A mirror can lie and lead us into false self-assurance and confidence. Mirrors can captivate and reassure us that everything is OK - BUT they can also captivate and destroy - Love your poem - more please - Yours BRIAN
July 13th, 2017 14:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOUISE - It is well written with lots of Rhythm. It also tells a story. We all need light and mirrors and spectra (colour) to tell us who we are are and what we are ! BUT A mirror can lie and lead us into false self-assurance and confidence. Mirrors can captivate and reassure us that everything is OK - BUT they can also captivate and destroy - Love your poem - more please - Yours BRIAN
July 13th, 2017 14:44
