Comments received on poems by Noah
Paragon
Laura🌻 said:
Noah,
A very interesting and intriguing write!
A great read...
indeed!
~Laura~
April 2nd, 2018 11:28
Laura🌻 said:
Noah,
A very interesting and intriguing write!
A great read...
indeed!
~Laura~
April 2nd, 2018 11:28
Gearbox
Resa71 said:
“ His head like a gear box
Always in motion.” Cramming parts
Inside his cranial ocean “
I really like this!
March 31st, 2018 03:28
Resa71 said:
“ His head like a gear box
Always in motion.” Cramming parts
Inside his cranial ocean “
I really like this!
March 31st, 2018 03:28
Electro-Dynamo
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is filled with movement and intention, I absolutely love that
March 27th, 2018 10:21
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is filled with movement and intention, I absolutely love that
March 27th, 2018 10:21
Broncospasm
Eugene S. said:
You have my total sympathy. Experienced not being able to take in air with the flu this year. Scary. Great poem.
March 25th, 2018 15:36
Eugene S. said:
You have my total sympathy. Experienced not being able to take in air with the flu this year. Scary. Great poem.
March 25th, 2018 15:36
Broncospasm
Resa71 said:
I don’t suffer from chronic asma.
But I have “ stress induced asma”
I remember the first time it happened, I literally thought I might die!
Good descriptive writing ✍️
Resa.
March 25th, 2018 12:33
Resa71 said:
I don’t suffer from chronic asma.
But I have “ stress induced asma”
I remember the first time it happened, I literally thought I might die!
Good descriptive writing ✍️
Resa.
March 25th, 2018 12:33
Pipework
kitcat said:
Wow! Loved it :-) so different sort of weird and deep Superb
March 23rd, 2018 14:52
kitcat said:
Wow! Loved it :-) so different sort of weird and deep Superb
March 23rd, 2018 14:52
Noise Bomb
Lorna said:
We have to stay away from \"them\" as best we can.......
March 23rd, 2018 07:25
Lorna said:
We have to stay away from \"them\" as best we can.......
March 23rd, 2018 07:25
Gutterhead
Lorna said:
And funnily enough I am Year of the Rat in Chinese calendar..... And now I AM out of the rat race..... and over the moon about it! I hope everyone gets your message.........
March 19th, 2018 03:08
Lorna said:
And funnily enough I am Year of the Rat in Chinese calendar..... And now I AM out of the rat race..... and over the moon about it! I hope everyone gets your message.........
March 19th, 2018 03:08
Box Jellyfish and the Blue Ring Octopus
Lorna said:
This could be an analogy for the dangers on dry land as well!
March 17th, 2018 14:11
Lorna said:
This could be an analogy for the dangers on dry land as well!
March 17th, 2018 14:11
Regenerate
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes time does march on in our earthly lives but is meaningless to Our Spirit.
March 17th, 2018 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes time does march on in our earthly lives but is meaningless to Our Spirit.
March 17th, 2018 01:26
Sondling
Lorna said:
Good one Noah..... he\'s always an option - nice to know if things get too bad!
March 16th, 2018 04:06
Lorna said:
Good one Noah..... he\'s always an option - nice to know if things get too bad!
March 16th, 2018 04:06
Livin\' la Vida de Angustia
willyweed said:
deep with good flow, rhyme and structure! nice work ww
March 13th, 2018 12:22
willyweed said:
deep with good flow, rhyme and structure! nice work ww
March 13th, 2018 12:22
Lost Souls
Lorna said:
Very intriguing Noah...... wish it told us more about what\'s happening!
March 10th, 2018 10:26
Lorna said:
Very intriguing Noah...... wish it told us more about what\'s happening!
March 10th, 2018 10:26
Philosophy II
Lorna said:
That first stanza is so wise Noah! Good message....... it\'s \"not all about us\" is it.....
March 7th, 2018 07:01
Lorna said:
That first stanza is so wise Noah! Good message....... it\'s \"not all about us\" is it.....
March 7th, 2018 07:01
Philosophy I
Lorna said:
This simple message is one of the secret\'s of life! We get so swallowed up in stuff that absolutely doesn\'t matter as time goes by.......
March 6th, 2018 04:42
Lorna said:
This simple message is one of the secret\'s of life! We get so swallowed up in stuff that absolutely doesn\'t matter as time goes by.......
March 6th, 2018 04:42
War Brought Peace
dusk arising said:
Noah, you just get better and better. This is a great piece. Goes into my favs
February 18th, 2018 21:40
dusk arising said:
Noah, you just get better and better. This is a great piece. Goes into my favs
February 18th, 2018 21:40
Quaking Waters
dusk arising said:
Class. Sometimes its a no win isn\'t it and our ship sinks. But somehow the ocean of life doesn\'t want to be full of wreckage so it throws us back into the waves where once again with a broken mast and a ripped sail we continue the voyage to wherever.
I really liked this piece.
February 13th, 2018 18:23
dusk arising said:
Class. Sometimes its a no win isn\'t it and our ship sinks. But somehow the ocean of life doesn\'t want to be full of wreckage so it throws us back into the waves where once again with a broken mast and a ripped sail we continue the voyage to wherever.
I really liked this piece.
February 13th, 2018 18:23
Head First Into History
Lorna said:
I am passionate about everything WWII. This had me with the soldiers storming Normandy and the beaches in the Pacific. It had my imagination going full tilt. It must be what soldiers have to put in their heads before a battle to do the things they have to do......
February 8th, 2018 05:26
Lorna said:
I am passionate about everything WWII. This had me with the soldiers storming Normandy and the beaches in the Pacific. It had my imagination going full tilt. It must be what soldiers have to put in their heads before a battle to do the things they have to do......
February 8th, 2018 05:26
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