Comments received on poems by Des
My Baby girl
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, my baby girl has gien us two more baby girls the younger of which is at University and still they are all our baby girls.
August 12th, 2017 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, my baby girl has gien us two more baby girls the younger of which is at University and still they are all our baby girls.
August 12th, 2017 00:41
My Baby girl
FredPeyer said:
Desiree, thank you! You mirrored my exact feelings for my baby girl, who btw is now a woman and will give birth to a baby boy around end November. She too will always be my baby girl. (And she knows it too!) :-)
August 11th, 2017 23:32
FredPeyer said:
Desiree, thank you! You mirrored my exact feelings for my baby girl, who btw is now a woman and will give birth to a baby boy around end November. She too will always be my baby girl. (And she knows it too!) :-)
August 11th, 2017 23:32
I AM...
Heather T said:
The enemy of our souls whispers lies in our ears, tells us we\'re no good. You are a fearfully and wonderfully made daughter of the most high God. Isn\'t it amazing that we couldn\'t be good enough, so Jesus made it where we don\'t have to be? Keep writing, sister.
July 30th, 2017 15:12
Heather T said:
The enemy of our souls whispers lies in our ears, tells us we\'re no good. You are a fearfully and wonderfully made daughter of the most high God. Isn\'t it amazing that we couldn\'t be good enough, so Jesus made it where we don\'t have to be? Keep writing, sister.
July 30th, 2017 15:12
Stars
rrodriguez said:
Nicely done! You\'re a shining star! I\'m reading you poems, right?
July 30th, 2017 13:49
rrodriguez said:
Nicely done! You\'re a shining star! I\'m reading you poems, right?
July 30th, 2017 13:49
I AM...
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed reading your poem Des. Keep writing and your dream will come true. Writing is the way to go.
July 30th, 2017 13:48
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed reading your poem Des. Keep writing and your dream will come true. Writing is the way to go.
July 30th, 2017 13:48
No One Hears Me...
Micalina said:
Well written and yes sometimes I feel like that too. I have written poems about my feelings in that regard. You expressed it so well. Love your writing.
July 25th, 2017 04:50
Micalina said:
Well written and yes sometimes I feel like that too. I have written poems about my feelings in that regard. You expressed it so well. Love your writing.
July 25th, 2017 04:50
No One Hears Me...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS DES ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ love the \"free verse\" style and spacing ~ very elegant ! Love the message the poem sends out ! We all experience feeling ignored and unheard (Thank GOD the LAMB always knows us and listens to us !) Joining a Poetry Site is an excellent way of \"Stating your case\" and MPS is very supportive and empathetic ! Thanks for your comment on my HOLIDAY FUSION ~ love the idea of going back in time ! I love SAN DIEGO ~ and you can pop over to TIJUANA MX for the day ! However I thought the PYRAMIDS were more photogenic ~ so I posted a photo of them as promised ! I will check your fusion. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK What US State are you living in ~ they are all so so different ? B.
July 25th, 2017 02:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS DES ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ love the \"free verse\" style and spacing ~ very elegant ! Love the message the poem sends out ! We all experience feeling ignored and unheard (Thank GOD the LAMB always knows us and listens to us !) Joining a Poetry Site is an excellent way of \"Stating your case\" and MPS is very supportive and empathetic ! Thanks for your comment on my HOLIDAY FUSION ~ love the idea of going back in time ! I love SAN DIEGO ~ and you can pop over to TIJUANA MX for the day ! However I thought the PYRAMIDS were more photogenic ~ so I posted a photo of them as promised ! I will check your fusion. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK What US State are you living in ~ they are all so so different ? B.
July 25th, 2017 02:33
No One Hears Me...
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site Desi!
Your poem is so well written. First you show the problem, then the solution.
I do like it, and I think that a lot of people who are feeling like that will take great solace in reading it.
July 25th, 2017 02:03
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site Desi!
Your poem is so well written. First you show the problem, then the solution.
I do like it, and I think that a lot of people who are feeling like that will take great solace in reading it.
July 25th, 2017 02:03
