Comments received on poems by Ariel Perez
Forgetting you
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We’re sometimes worthy of more …
Nice writing ) I think sometimes we love people who might not treat us in the best way ? Sorry you were hurt by him
October 21st, 2021 01:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We’re sometimes worthy of more …
Nice writing ) I think sometimes we love people who might not treat us in the best way ? Sorry you were hurt by him
October 21st, 2021 01:23
Forgetting you
Goldfinch60 said:
One day the boy that will be yours forever will come into your life and your future will then be certain in that love.
August 15th, 2020 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
One day the boy that will be yours forever will come into your life and your future will then be certain in that love.
August 15th, 2020 00:07
I\'m Fine
jarcher54 said:
Bitter sweet, almost painful the way you capture all those insecurities and anxieties... I don\'t believe I have ever heard these doubts expressed so well: Am I the second choice of your little dreams? Wow.
July 27th, 2020 02:49
jarcher54 said:
Bitter sweet, almost painful the way you capture all those insecurities and anxieties... I don\'t believe I have ever heard these doubts expressed so well: Am I the second choice of your little dreams? Wow.
July 27th, 2020 02:49
For Once Say No
jarcher54 said:
Brave indeed! Compelling expression of the compulsion of love... you can\'t reason with it. We have all tried and failed. Thanks for baring your heart for a few lines.
July 27th, 2020 02:29
jarcher54 said:
Brave indeed! Compelling expression of the compulsion of love... you can\'t reason with it. We have all tried and failed. Thanks for baring your heart for a few lines.
July 27th, 2020 02:29
My business
G84 said:
I have to agree with tepo, the fanciest looking buildings will collapse without the proper foundations :)
April 12th, 2019 15:40
G84 said:
I have to agree with tepo, the fanciest looking buildings will collapse without the proper foundations :)
April 12th, 2019 15:40
Life is True
Louis Gibbs said:
Much wisdom reflected in your poem, Ariel. We all are in charge of our lives, and they become what we make them, as your poem states to me. Welcome to MPS! I look forward to more submittals.
July 28th, 2017 07:25
Louis Gibbs said:
Much wisdom reflected in your poem, Ariel. We all are in charge of our lives, and they become what we make them, as your poem states to me. Welcome to MPS! I look forward to more submittals.
July 28th, 2017 07:25
