Comments received on poems by Jenna33308
My magical life
sorenbarrett said:
All or nothing no modulation. So I gather from the poem that there are many incidents in life that fit this pattern. Nicely stated
April 27th, 2025 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
All or nothing no modulation. So I gather from the poem that there are many incidents in life that fit this pattern. Nicely stated
April 27th, 2025 11:52
My magical life
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, now it\'s been a good eight years since the initial posting of this beautiful lament, assumedly you\'re on the other side of your twenties, long since married, with or without kids, and having perhaps by dint of all that, a different perspective on this existence? Like, for example, you\'ve lost yourself in him and that life together, the you that was eclipsed by that reality, no? Nevertheless, there\'s this desire to be heard. Ergo, thank you, seriously, so very much for sharing. I frankly love it. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, a haunting poignancy, and a winsome voice asking for...? Thank you again for sharing.
April 27th, 2025 10:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, now it\'s been a good eight years since the initial posting of this beautiful lament, assumedly you\'re on the other side of your twenties, long since married, with or without kids, and having perhaps by dint of all that, a different perspective on this existence? Like, for example, you\'ve lost yourself in him and that life together, the you that was eclipsed by that reality, no? Nevertheless, there\'s this desire to be heard. Ergo, thank you, seriously, so very much for sharing. I frankly love it. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, a haunting poignancy, and a winsome voice asking for...? Thank you again for sharing.
April 27th, 2025 10:47
My magical life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JENNA ~ WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for your epic first poem ! On MPS we are used to one liners and Haiku (575) and two or three quatrains at the most but have given us your AUTOBIOGRAPHY in an amazing free verse Bonanza that is so full of rhythm ~ it almost Rhymes. I am blessed with ONE SISTER (who i love like your Sis No. 3 and one BROTHER to redress the balance ! But THREE SISTERS ~ that is too much of a \"good\" thing I am tempted to say The LOST the PERFECT and the LOVELY but that would be rude as I\'ve never met them ! I like your ALL or NOTHING approach to life ~ I suppose I\'m a bit like that so i can empathise. Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 30th, 2017 14:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JENNA ~ WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for your epic first poem ! On MPS we are used to one liners and Haiku (575) and two or three quatrains at the most but have given us your AUTOBIOGRAPHY in an amazing free verse Bonanza that is so full of rhythm ~ it almost Rhymes. I am blessed with ONE SISTER (who i love like your Sis No. 3 and one BROTHER to redress the balance ! But THREE SISTERS ~ that is too much of a \"good\" thing I am tempted to say The LOST the PERFECT and the LOVELY but that would be rude as I\'ve never met them ! I like your ALL or NOTHING approach to life ~ I suppose I\'m a bit like that so i can empathise. Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 30th, 2017 14:07
My magical life
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s some powerful soulful words, I hope letting it out helps make some room to fill that empty space.
July 30th, 2017 13:04
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s some powerful soulful words, I hope letting it out helps make some room to fill that empty space.
July 30th, 2017 13:04
