Comments received on poems by Dulcinea91



Strangers again
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

I love your rhyming, it really makes it flow well and its so satisfying to read! Also, the message is very clear and I can somewhat relate to this struggle myself. Keep going strong queen!

February 23rd, 2022 15:42

Miss you
Accidental Poet said:

Near the beginning of my poems, I wrote one called, \"This Is Not Good-bye\". I think you might relate to it. ; )

July 11th, 2021 09:11

Draco E
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love be there forever.

Andy

December 29th, 2020 01:36

Draco E
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read. Happy New Year.

December 28th, 2020 17:58

Lil Draco
Goldfinch60 said:

May your souls combine into that one love.

December 28th, 2020 01:44

Lil Draco
Trenz Pruca said:

Good one. Thank you

December 27th, 2020 18:19

Us
Verta said:

Amazing! Job well done to you! I read that with so much strength, as I\'ve been in that situation.

October 25th, 2017 23:21

Same place
burning-embers said:

Just keep sitting there and let events take their course.

August 17th, 2017 12:35

Same place
Nicholas Browning said:

Amen to that. Why try if you know it\'s all for nothing? That\'s life\'s greatest question. To live means to find the answer. Good work.

August 17th, 2017 01:20

Dark time
myself and me said:

Who ever told you to communicate, they do not understand what you are suffering. Go outside, take a long walk. Yes, one day you will find the master key. Be patient, be strong. Well expressed.

August 15th, 2017 20:49

Her
ACS said:

nice

August 13th, 2017 21:53

Her
FredPeyer said:

Raquel, I do hope this poem is from your imagination and does not involve you personally. It is very well written, with a lot of emotion and feeling. Great poem!

August 13th, 2017 18:14

Death
Goldfinch60 said:

Death is a very long way away, you have so much in your life to do first. Good write.

August 12th, 2017 00:47

Judge
Lizzy Renee said:

Fine write. I can tell the effort put into this. Nice Job!

August 11th, 2017 07:40

Killed that one
Louis Gibbs said:

Abortion must be one of the hardest decisions a woman is sometimes called upon to make. My sympathy, Raquel, and my congratulations on this courageous poem describing what it entails emotionally!

August 9th, 2017 08:26

Smell
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks DULCINE ~ for a beautiful picture (elegant !) and beautiful sentiments in an equally elegant poem ! Love is guided (and guarded !) by our senses especially the sense of smell. Sight just provides generalities ~ Gender ~ Age ~ Attractiveness ~ Style etc (I\'m already half in Love with just her picture ~ like on an Asian cyber dating site ?) ~ BUT ~ If I was close enough to actually scent and taste her (the two senses are linked) only then would I know the Chemistry was right. However it \"Takes two to Tango\" and only if her response to my scent and savour ~ would it be the beginning of a Match ! Thank GOD it does happen ~ and more often than we expect ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

August 7th, 2017 19:02

Closed
myself and me said:

Do not know what to say. It is a tragedy for everyone. It requires the whole society to help. Such a heart touching poem.

August 6th, 2017 21:29

Innocence lost
FredPeyer said:

Like your last poem, well written, with powerful emotions. The reader gets drawn into the poem and then wonders what really happened.
Good writing!

August 5th, 2017 19:24

These pills
FredPeyer said:

Strong emotional writing Dulcinea, well written. But is this really the solution?

August 5th, 2017 19:22

Without you
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 3rd, 2017 10:14

Without you
whisperingquill said:

A really nice tribute nice flow
My condolences 🌹

August 3rd, 2017 00:32

THEY
orchidee said:

This should be ticked \'For over 18\'s I think\' (a check box appears when you type up poems).

August 2nd, 2017 05:23

Understand
Louis Gibbs said:

Welcome to MPS, Dulcine, where we all share our afflictions without fear of judgment. Thank you for sharing yours in this strong poem.

August 1st, 2017 08:36

Understand
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME DULCINE ~ You will find MPS a very empathetic site ~ we do have members with a variety of problems ~ including Mental Health. We do care ! Thanks for your first poem which is very personal and descriptive. I trust you found sharing it CATHARTIC ~ OK. Thinking of you Praying for you ~ Blssings ~ BRIAN. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

August 1st, 2017 03:52