Comments received on poems by thoughtxo

Do you hate him?
myself and me said:

No father wants to walk out of his child life. If he did for any reason, then he hurt as much or more than you. You did great, you did not hate him. A father is not a superman, he sometime needs help too.
Hope the writing help you.

September 5th, 2017 18:29

Are you next ?
Egyptianqt79 said:

Beautiful writing

August 23rd, 2017 19:06

Are you next ?
Jeff said:

This happens to be the story of my life....great write

August 23rd, 2017 14:20

Are you next ?
myself and me said:

The heart can be healed by love, but the scar will be there. Reading this hurts a lot. Why don\'t you start a new line with hope, I will be the first in the line.
Full of emotion.

August 23rd, 2017 14:17

I wonder
myself and me said:

Yes, for sure. Otherwise, the Sun can retired now.

August 23rd, 2017 14:11

Goldfinch60 said:

Good write on such a sad subject. Welcome to MPS.

August 9th, 2017 00:45

Louis Gibbs said:

A good poem about a sad subject, \'thought\'! Welcome to MPS. Keep writing.

August 8th, 2017 15:59

myself and me said:

Did you see any fear or worry in your four-month baby? Of course not, since he/she has faith in you. If this is the worst time in your life, then things will getting better everyday. You are a brave mom. nice writing.

August 8th, 2017 14:44

Brycycle said:

Well written poem, i feel like this is a true story? If it is, I wish all the best to you.

August 8th, 2017 14:33

ACS said:

Good use of the end rhymes in the work it ties each line together beautifully

August 8th, 2017 14:01


WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem which tells a tragic ! A deserting Father and a broken hearted \"single parent Mother\" with four mouths to feed ! The Authorities (in the UK) are short of Cash ~ but I am praying for you that GOD in His Mercy will provide ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

August 8th, 2017 13:40