Comments received on poems by BLACKGOLDKING



Firefly
BLACKGOLDKING said:

The heart can live and breath anywhere ocean floor or skies,
Love is an Ensemble of emotions and feelings, it\'s not bound by laws, its limitless.

February 8th, 2019 11:12

Firefly
BLACKGOLDKING said:

Your imagination is everything words can\'t come into being without it,
Don\'t be so harsh on yourself
We\'re writing a symphony daily
All real
All accountable for what we put out into the world
God bless you all x x x

February 7th, 2019 21:30

Firefly
psychofemale said:

lovely and i loved the rhyme
it is really cool how you put the title last, that is something you don\'t see very often, love the idea :)

February 7th, 2019 20:16

Firefly
BLACKGOLDKING said:

The heart can live and breath anywhere ocean floor or skies,
Love is an Ensemble of emotions and feelings, it\'s not bound by laws, its limitless.

February 7th, 2019 20:13

Firefly
Diamond said:

A Poetry of satin-flow with the honey-breeze!

The read nearly eludes my eyes!

Wonderful job!

February 7th, 2019 11:16

Firefly
sylviasearcher said:

I hadn\'t thought of a firefly like this.
I\'m not sure they do live in the ocean floor though.

Your poem reminded me of a spark I used to know/imagine.

Now I\'m just like the girl with matches.

February 7th, 2019 11:14

Train to Heaven
Diamond said:

Brilliant write...it has got the conversational tone with oneself. That makes the read effortless and flowing in your stream of thoughts!

January 31st, 2019 22:30

The Raging Wind
sylviasearcher said:

Back and forth
Resembling the endless flow of beauty and enchantment...

Until \'the raging wind\' took my breath.

Good write

January 31st, 2019 15:24

Train to Heaven
BLACKGOLDKING said:

Yes the last stop in this life, The beginning in heaven

January 31st, 2019 15:12

The Raging Wind
Diamond said:

Nice write, Enjoyed! Thanks for sharing!

January 31st, 2019 15:06

Train to Heaven
aRCane said:

I like the layered depth, with a strong sense of gratitude and destiny that shines through.

April 10th, 2018 05:26

Train to Heaven
BLACKGOLDKING said:

Thank you

August 9th, 2017 02:53

Train to Heaven
orchidee said:

A certain department store has \'toodle-pip\' on a notice at present, as you leave the store. Relating to a bit of seasonal advertising. They locked some doors for a trial period - now open again. I dunno about toodle-pip then. More like \"I ***** just walked into that locked glass door\"! lol. Well, pointless really. It didn\'t save on electricity or anything

August 9th, 2017 02:32

Train to Heaven
orchidee said:

A fine, erm, happy birthday write there! Tally-ho, and all that rubbish, as they say! Toodle-pip until next time! heehee.

August 9th, 2017 02:28

Train to Heaven
Goldfinch60 said:

May your destination be filled with hope, wonder and light. Good write. Welcome to MPS.

August 9th, 2017 00:57

Train to Heaven
BLACKGOLDKING said:

Thank you for your much appreciated time, I hope you enjoyed it.

August 8th, 2017 19:59

Train to Heaven
BLACKGOLDKING said:

We\'re all first class, you can\'t put a stamp on a life, no man or woman is any greater then the other. We\'re no more significant then Ants, life is life. The only difference is we were made in the image of God. But it doesn\'t mean we walk Godly. We are far from it.

August 8th, 2017 19:47

Train to Heaven
myself and me said:

You do not need the heavy bag on the train to heaven. Is your ticket first class? Well done.

August 8th, 2017 19:33

Train to Heaven
BLACKGOLDKING said:

Thank you,

August 8th, 2017 18:58

Train to Heaven
ACS said:

deep poem, pal. nice work

August 8th, 2017 18:54