Comments received on poems by draculazy



addiction
Moom said:

Wow very nice

January 29th, 2018 18:46

bad girls who do bad things
Gary Edward Geraci said:

You’re not really a bad girl; perhaps a bit confused as was I; especially while under the influence of copious quantities of alcohol. Thanks for the good write bad girl.

January 10th, 2018 23:48

bad girls who do bad things
Edthepoet said:

Great poem, a horrific act cleverly disguised within the pace of misleading text.

January 10th, 2018 20:00

bad girls who do bad things
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI BECCA ~ I guess we all do BAD things when we\'re 18 ~ I know I did ~ I have had Irish Girl Friends and they are very Lovely ! When we are bad there\'s always a price to pay so I tried not to be too bad ~ and I always treated Coleens with respect ! I like your last line ~ is that your NY Resolution ? Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK)

January 10th, 2018 19:51

decrucify
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great write! I agree with Hood. Great surface read; however, there is something far deeper beneath the surface. Excellent work!

December 16th, 2017 00:38

Heirloom
FineB said:

Thanks Draculazy.

A wonderful poem. I loved it.

Keep writing
FineB


December 14th, 2017 16:18

travelling
Isabel Chelisia Villa said:

Interesting to say the least about this poem. Please keep writing, There is such imagery in your writing
-FH

October 13th, 2017 15:22

your 6 lovers and me
Nicholas Browning said:

Can\'t say much about the theme, but the style is nice. Another good one. Keep it up.

August 17th, 2017 07:06

pyre
Nicholas Browning said:

Well holy crap this is some deep stuff we have here. I like it. The words used were simple, and the references were precise. Good work.

August 16th, 2017 06:31

origami
Louis Gibbs said:

I think I may be too young to be reading this one, d! You paint a sensuous picture indeed. Thanks for sharing.

August 15th, 2017 16:40

origami
Nicholas Browning said:

This is mysterious. The feeling it gives while you read it is pleasant.

August 15th, 2017 09:11

decrucify
Accidental Poet said:

A wonderful write here Draculazy. Leaves the reader to want to know the rest of the story. But, maybe that\'s for another write?

August 13th, 2017 08:22

decrucify
orchidee said:

Ooh I say, what\'s going on there?! Swoon! Hee hee. And on your birthday too - Good Wishes!

August 13th, 2017 06:58

molten silver
FredPeyer said:

Welcome to MPS, Becca!
\'I am painting the sheets with a coat of myself\', wonderful writing. Your poem drew me in and did not let go to the last line.

August 12th, 2017 13:24

molten silver
Louis Gibbs said:

Dark and juicy, this one. I like it. Congratulations, and welcome to MPS!

August 12th, 2017 12:19