Comments received on poems by mvvenkataraman



I Avoid the Web and Bliss is the Grub
orchidee said:

Good write M.

March 22nd, 2024 09:14

My Begging Action to Obsession for a Leaving Decision
Silver Spark said:

We are born with empty hands, so why should be obsessed on something, and be said when it is lost?

September 2nd, 2023 14:02

Men Act Like Demon
Peter Pan - The Rock said:

Hope you don\'t mind...

If you do... all apologies.

Like in all things...

Good men or women.

Neutral men or women.

Selfish, narcissistic... men or women.

Terrible, really bad... men or women.

But... in many things... even more so... this present time...

Very good point.

And for some...

Very real... indeed.

March 23rd, 2023 20:04

Men Act Like Demon
2781 said:

Not all of them, surely.

March 22nd, 2023 04:09

Men Act Like Demon
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true mv. When will man realise they are just ruining our world.

Andy

March 22nd, 2023 03:44

Men Act Like Demon
Samprikta Paul said:

so well written!

March 22nd, 2023 03:31

My Begging Action to Obsession for a Leaving Decision
L. B. Mek said:

\'Make my life a fine garden,\'
Voltaire\'s wisdom still enlightens our way, to that wisdom we seek
(from Candide:
\'all that is well, but let us cultivate our garden...\')
what a wonderfully philosophical poem, dear poet
love the humility

March 21st, 2023 02:31

Quotes Formed while Going on Life\\\\\\\'s Routes
mvvenkataraman said:

The three lines after life is a boon,
Lord Balaji of Hinduism\'s symbol,
It is indeed a blessing in disguise,
Thanks my poetic side, I love you!

March 19th, 2023 10:30

Admonition is an Unnecessary Action
2781 said:

There is nothing better for a man, than that he should eat and drink, and that he should make his soul enjoy good in his labor. This also I saw, that it was from the hand of God. Eccl

March 11th, 2023 08:25

Those Who Love Must Get Rose
2781 said:

Better still love your enemies

March 6th, 2023 22:01

Self-Control Achieves the Goal
2781 said:

What controls us? Who is clever, where your hearts is there\'s our treasure.

March 2nd, 2023 18:41

Some Resent Our Comment and Become Absent
Neville said:


I like to think in a world of such complexity as ours most surely is .. a little give and take makes it spin around sweeter and more comfortably .. Neville

March 1st, 2023 11:00

Some Resent Our Comment and Become Absent
Doggerel Dave said:

Waste of time.

February 28th, 2023 21:49

Some Resent Our Comment and Become Absent
Doggerel Dave said:

Focus on your title, which is easier to understand than all that \'patting\':
If the poem has many words but says nothing, why should I encourage? I\'ve clicked (poet gets the score) read and wasted my time.

February 28th, 2023 17:57

Some Resent Our Comment and Become Absent
David Wakeling said:

Commenting is a greater art than actually writing a poem. Sadly most people have no idea about the difference between genuine criticism of a poem and meaningless praise.This poem raises these questions. I am not sure there are any answers

February 28th, 2023 17:26

Birth and Death on this Earth
Addy said:

This poem is sooooo true

February 23rd, 2023 09:20

Heart and Brain, Let Love Chain!
Neville said:


it is a gift we all have .. let\'s not waste a single moment of it ...... Neville

February 21st, 2023 06:32

Heart and Brain, Let Love Chain!
2781 said:

It\'s a narrow path.

February 21st, 2023 03:53

Use Love to Muse, Hearts be Tied by Love-Tide
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful goals and admonishments to a world that has more often neglected them and often has no interest in them.

February 19th, 2023 09:06

In World\'s Peace, Find Bliss Please!
Iva Hotko said:

Everything starts with you first, then the rest can follow - the truth worth to be called the truth 🤍

February 17th, 2023 12:12

Short or Long, Must be a Good Song
Menaga said:

It\'s written in an elegant manner ✨

January 26th, 2023 08:30

Give me God to Happily Live
orchidee said:

Good write M.

January 11th, 2023 03:07

Giving Up Won\'t Help Develop
mvvenkataraman said:

I feel you are my guru in this connection,
I am learning a lot from your action,
Please take care of your health please
To live happily for a long life-lease!

January 5th, 2023 03:28

Giving Up Won\'t Help Develop
Goldfinch60 said:

I have now been retired for 10 years and I am doing the things that I want to do without ever quitting, it is great life.

Andy

January 5th, 2023 03:11

Happiness and Calmness are Holiness
PurpleGlasses said:

Great poem! How unfortunate that the body takes it aging deed so seriously though.

January 4th, 2023 05:29

வளம் பொங்க வருது பொங்கல்!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Tamil looks so beautifully artistic. Maybe try translating it.

December 29th, 2022 13:34

வளம் பொங்க வருது பொங்கல்!
mvvenkataraman said:

I thank you deeply my poetic side,
I am surprised over this facility,
This seems to be a real boon,
I salute your noble service,
You have blessed we Tamils!

December 29th, 2022 13:10

Let Deep Sleep Soon Peep
hzugman said:

Extremely well put from one who struggles with the sleep issue. At 83 and retired it is fortunately not such a great issue.

December 6th, 2022 10:14

Bury Worry, Carry Merry, To Help, Hurry
hzugman said:

These kind thoughts are echoes back to the sender. Is there perhaps a little TM in the blender?

October 28th, 2022 10:38

Happiness and Calmness are Holiness
deney77 said:

Beautiful poem

July 1st, 2022 12:10

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