Comments received on poems by a__pott



Im Worthless (and that’s on me)
GON said:

Was just listening to Just by Radiohead... Just remember in what ever you do, it isn\'t everything you are. You can change for the better.

June 12th, 2020 09:15

Im Worthless (and that’s on me)
peto said:

Changing it is possible Alex
And
Has begun with this write
Good to see you

June 12th, 2020 03:59

What holds us together
Crystal Hope said:

awe. this is beautiful.

June 18th, 2019 13:10

What holds us together
Neville said:

how very lovely indeed...

June 18th, 2019 06:03

Goodbye Our Lady
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing ~ A very sad day in the History of PARIS (my fave European Capital) and EUROPE and The WORLD ! Notre Dame was a Symbol of Mans devotion to GOD ~ JESUS & His Mother ~ Our Lady, The STONE REMAINS and Unlike the New York Trade Center ~ The TWIN TOWERS of Notre Dame did not FALL and the WOODEN ROOF etc can readily be relaced ~ even if the FULL RESTORATION takes FIVE YEARS ! I will only be 42 in 2025 so i will be able to visit her once again ~ AMEN ! God allowed the Flames (Man\'s neglect) but not the DESTRUCTION ! The message is for US all to be aware of all the negatives of the 21st Century and to turn BACK to GOD ~ AMEN !
Blessings Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
Please check my Tribute Poem ~ NOTRE DAME ~ THANKS

April 16th, 2019 18:18

Love and Her Ivory Tusks
Nicholas Browning said:

Last line is awesome! I dare say, a fine write and a good read.

March 24th, 2019 20:45

Home Is a Time
dusk arising said:

So many people cannot move with the times. Is it because today is a less rewarding existence than what was before. Time to get off ones ass and inject a bit of enthusiasm for the time which remains here on Earth. How many lives do you think you get,,,, just the one i think.

January 31st, 2019 02:45

I’m Shit
orchidee said:

Surely you can\'t be all s*** or there would be none left to hit the fan! (oohh lol). Probably a bit of a bad-hair day. lol.

January 28th, 2019 07:06

I’m Shit
sylviasearcher said:

I think this is raw and some may find it difficult to read. These feelings are honest and I think saying it exactly how it is without sugar coating is bold and brave and beautiful in itself.

We are all shit some days.
But dishonest.
💜

January 28th, 2019 07:02

Rose Colored Heartbreak
psychofemale said:

love it :) gave it a fav!

January 24th, 2019 17:25

Rose Colored Heartbreak
Neville said:

a delightful little poem and true

January 24th, 2019 13:34

TGIF
Theta the scholar said:

ITS WEDNESDAY, jokes aside great write keep up the good work

December 12th, 2018 16:38

379 Miles
kevin browne said:

The scent of leaving home leaves behind many memories and comforts which now you have to rebuild. Good luck for your future.

October 9th, 2018 02:46

379 Miles
MaddieJ said:

I understand.... Thanks for sharing these thoughts!

October 8th, 2018 23:29

Error
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive write.

October 3rd, 2018 00:57

Where?
sylviasearcher said:

💜

September 28th, 2018 09:51

True and False
sylviasearcher said:

I enjoyed this, it flows well with gentle cynicism

September 24th, 2018 01:26

Give me more time
Mirrorphen said:

Enjoyed.

September 18th, 2018 12:31

Drawing the Room
kevin browne said:

Ah, the echoing of our voices. Are they loud enough to hear your beautiful poem. I certainly hear you and your depth of thoughts. I think their strong, correct and thought provoking.

July 31st, 2018 01:56

Sisters
i.am.here.now said:

This is amazing! I wish I could write like this! ~ Georgia xx

July 28th, 2018 14:13

Clarinets and Clouds
Lorna said:

Beautiful beautiful .... I could read this 100 times........

May 2nd, 2018 10:00

Far too personal
midnight drive said:

I love it!

April 24th, 2018 09:25

An Oasis in a Desert.
yellowrose said:

hello a, pott..
i really love this .. the contrast of highs and lows are made very clear here.. they are all high on alcohol and music whilst you are clearly drowning in your own sorrow. i love the ending to this.. the guy in the room who feels just the same as you .

\'\'an oasis in a desert \'\' this is such a good line...
in a crowded room of people who are all drinking alcohol.. no wander the room seems dry.

i love this line
But the rain won\'t come and your heart sinks more.
It finds its way on down and it hits the floor.
Sinks down and hits the dirt,

it sounds to me like the situation is causing you distress and that ache for something different is causing you pain .. the rain outside of the window wont even appear and hence your heart sinks to the floor.

oh , to be the only one who is hurting , its not nice to feel alone in your hurt but at least you could relate to the guy in the back of the room


March 15th, 2018 07:19

Missing You
FredPeyer said:

Good poem and you finish with a great line!

February 23rd, 2018 17:04

I’m sorry
FredPeyer said:

Sometimes not knowing why is worse than the loss. Sometimes there is no why.
Your poem, Alex, is not only well written, but addresses something that troubles many people.

February 23rd, 2018 16:28

Seriously
FredPeyer said:

Alex, it seems as if you wrote this poem about me, or for me. It fits so well I made it a favorite AND it will go on my wall of great poems, right beside Charles Bukowski!!!
You see, I take you seriously!!!

February 20th, 2018 21:45

Seriously
Lorna said:

Sweet and funny little poem..... made me smileA

February 19th, 2018 16:10

Crystal Clarity
FredPeyer said:

Love the twists and turns in this poem. Alex, this sounds like magic. You could have called it \'crystal ball\'. Tried to make it about myself, but you are right, it is not, it is definitely for you! Great imaginative writing!!!

February 14th, 2018 14:50

Crystal Clarity
dusk arising said:

My but this is a clever piece of thinking put into verse beautifully. A pleasure to read stuff of this quality. Goes into my favourites.

February 13th, 2018 17:18

Windy
Lorna said:

And everything is temporary! Good poem.

February 4th, 2018 07:02

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