Comments received on poems by a__pott



Windy
FredPeyer said:

Love these last two lines, Alex! And how many times does something temporary turn into something permanent!

February 4th, 2018 04:00

Moon on the Ground
FredPeyer said:

While this poem is incredibly well written, well rhymed, great metaphors, I would be lying if I said I understood it. Maybe it\'s my age or my befuddled brain, but I don\'t get it!

January 31st, 2018 01:26

Lovesick
FredPeyer said:

Yes, Alex, love can be terminal...at least it is in my case. It just won\'t go away! But it can also be like the common flu...a week and a few pills later you are ready for the next bug!

January 29th, 2018 02:03

Lovesick
dusk arising said:

LOL i love your spin on this. Of course it does get better and is rarely terminal. Hope to see happier writes from you but this sure is a cute verse.

January 28th, 2018 12:47

Lovesick
Lorna said:

Very clever!

January 28th, 2018 11:43

Disguised Rainbow
FredPeyer said:

I guess you could call it a disfunct family!
I like it Alex, short, to the point, very imaginative. You nailed it!

January 25th, 2018 13:57

Silver Charcoal
yellowrose said:

very good ! :-) this is so cleverly expressed , \'\' a silver future with a charcoal past \'\' very nice ! i love the wording here

January 20th, 2018 13:52

Sea & Sky
yellowrose said:

hello, interesting writing , i love the reference to the sea andn the sky ... sometimes the way we see people is not who they always truly are .. good piece of writing here

January 20th, 2018 13:49

Sea & Sky
FredPeyer said:

I like your metaphor of light as maybe replacement for \'good\', Alex. Your poem makes me think that sometimes we see another person reflected in the light we shine on them, mistaking it for their own light. Once that light is not there anymore we see that person for what he/she really is.

January 20th, 2018 13:25

A Question
FredPeyer said:

tepo said it all already!
Agree completely with him, Alex. Great poem!

January 3rd, 2018 00:19

Yesterday
FredPeyer said:

Alex, I have to assume you are talking about incontinence in the sense of Lack of moderation or self-control, especially related to sexual desire (Wikipedia). And believe me, NO moment will EVER come together quite the same way!
Very nicely penned, love that poem!

December 3rd, 2017 22:59

Silver Charcoal
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:

I like how you didn\'t have to say much to get your point across and leave a good imprint between the charcoal past and sliver lining of life. I also agree with (WHOWEARE) it was very easy to identify with. Great write \"Alex\"

November 28th, 2017 01:27

Silver Charcoal
whoweare said:

Good write, easy to identify with. Good job!

November 27th, 2017 22:10

Raging Flames
FredPeyer said:

Wow! You are messing around with me here. Flames inside the mind and flames outside on paper.

November 21st, 2017 03:26

The Fear of the Unknown
FredPeyer said:

Alex, well written! We keep on going in our rut simply because we are afraid to change. Great poem!

November 14th, 2017 02:23

Let it Sink
FredPeyer said:

Alex, your poems definitely float! Haven\'t read a sinker yet.
Good writing!

November 6th, 2017 03:04

Let it Sink
dusk arising said:

I love this... and it\'s so clever. Makes me smile each time i read it. A definate for my favourites.

November 5th, 2017 12:02

Even if
FredPeyer said:

I would call that \'love\', Alex.
Very well written, with a lot in-between the lines. Something else that came to my mind when reading was that you could also have added \'even if we don\'t talk\' or similar. Sometimes silence can be enjoyed together.
I do like the way you write, you always make me think, and I guess that is a good thing.

November 1st, 2017 15:26

Hear Me
FredPeyer said:

I hear you, Alex, but so many times we do not hear. I do like your poem, well written, and it does make me think!

October 18th, 2017 04:54

Original Sin
FredPeyer said:

Alex, I read it three times. Are you talking about Adam?

October 12th, 2017 03:44

Don’t Stop People in the Night
FredPeyer said:

Don\'t open your heart to strangers, no matter what time it is.
A very intriguing, well written poem. It made me think! Thanks Alex!

October 4th, 2017 01:48

From Venus to Mars
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, Alex. Beautifully written, with an interesting and very apt metaphor.
Sorry, but had to lol because the book Women are from Venus and Men are from Mars came to mind! :-)

September 25th, 2017 20:04

Falling Bodies
FredPeyer said:

Alex, you said it very well...love is timeless!

September 22nd, 2017 01:29

Phantom
FredPeyer said:

I love this poem, Alex! Did not expect the end, but it is perfect.

September 19th, 2017 20:54

Passengers
FredPeyer said:

Great, great write, Alex. There comes a time when we just have to let go, even if there is no safety net!

September 18th, 2017 12:04

Up and Out
myself and me said:

I wish I could fell up and out with you to reverse time.
Excellent writing.

September 5th, 2017 21:34

Up and Out
FredPeyer said:

Alex, you are living higher physics here, containing space/time.
Great poem, are you following in the footsteps of Einstein?

September 5th, 2017 21:30

Acid rain
FredPeyer said:

Alex, this is really well written. I do like the choice of \'acid rain\' to represent pain and maybe disaster. That is very imaginative and original. And to bring \'grace\' into it is a stroke of genius. It shows the inner strength to overcome that pain.
Great poem!

September 4th, 2017 03:51

Acid rain
dusk arising said:

I think the way santita sums this up is just right. Lot of us carry pains around making the best of life. Really nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.

September 3rd, 2017 15:09

Acid rain
BlueDays said:

I feel sympathy for whom the poem is about, though sad, it is written delicately and I like the contrast in the language. Soft vs hard...acid/rain, pain/grace

September 3rd, 2017 13:39

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