Comments received on poems by a__pott
Falling Bodies
FredPeyer said:
Alex, you said it very well...love is timeless!
September 22nd, 2017 01:29
FredPeyer said:
Alex, you said it very well...love is timeless!
September 22nd, 2017 01:29
Phantom
FredPeyer said:
I love this poem, Alex! Did not expect the end, but it is perfect.
September 19th, 2017 20:54
FredPeyer said:
I love this poem, Alex! Did not expect the end, but it is perfect.
September 19th, 2017 20:54
Passengers
FredPeyer said:
Great, great write, Alex. There comes a time when we just have to let go, even if there is no safety net!
September 18th, 2017 12:04
FredPeyer said:
Great, great write, Alex. There comes a time when we just have to let go, even if there is no safety net!
September 18th, 2017 12:04
Up and Out
myself and me said:
I wish I could fell up and out with you to reverse time.
Excellent writing.
September 5th, 2017 21:34
myself and me said:
I wish I could fell up and out with you to reverse time.
Excellent writing.
September 5th, 2017 21:34
Up and Out
FredPeyer said:
Alex, you are living higher physics here, containing space/time.
Great poem, are you following in the footsteps of Einstein?
September 5th, 2017 21:30
FredPeyer said:
Alex, you are living higher physics here, containing space/time.
Great poem, are you following in the footsteps of Einstein?
September 5th, 2017 21:30
Acid rain
FredPeyer said:
Alex, this is really well written. I do like the choice of \'acid rain\' to represent pain and maybe disaster. That is very imaginative and original. And to bring \'grace\' into it is a stroke of genius. It shows the inner strength to overcome that pain.
Great poem!
September 4th, 2017 03:51
FredPeyer said:
Alex, this is really well written. I do like the choice of \'acid rain\' to represent pain and maybe disaster. That is very imaginative and original. And to bring \'grace\' into it is a stroke of genius. It shows the inner strength to overcome that pain.
Great poem!
September 4th, 2017 03:51
Acid rain
dusk arising said:
I think the way santita sums this up is just right. Lot of us carry pains around making the best of life. Really nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 15:09
dusk arising said:
I think the way santita sums this up is just right. Lot of us carry pains around making the best of life. Really nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 15:09
Acid rain
BlueDays said:
I feel sympathy for whom the poem is about, though sad, it is written delicately and I like the contrast in the language. Soft vs hard...acid/rain, pain/grace
September 3rd, 2017 13:39
BlueDays said:
I feel sympathy for whom the poem is about, though sad, it is written delicately and I like the contrast in the language. Soft vs hard...acid/rain, pain/grace
September 3rd, 2017 13:39
This is She
FredPeyer said:
This is awesome writing, a-pott. While the last one (Golden grey silence) was more difficult for me to understand, this one is easier to read, flows well. Every line has meaning, love the Humanity and simplicity combination, and like how you end it. Life and love is built on \'little things\'. It is the little things that make us love another one or that drive us crazy.
September 1st, 2017 18:35
FredPeyer said:
This is awesome writing, a-pott. While the last one (Golden grey silence) was more difficult for me to understand, this one is easier to read, flows well. Every line has meaning, love the Humanity and simplicity combination, and like how you end it. Life and love is built on \'little things\'. It is the little things that make us love another one or that drive us crazy.
September 1st, 2017 18:35
Golden Gray Silence
FredPeyer said:
The picture is awesome, kind of scary though.
The poem seems to tell me that even though we may lose somebody, we always have the memories.
How far off the mark am I?
I do like the writing, but am maybe a little bit too dense to understand the underlying meaning.
August 31st, 2017 17:00
FredPeyer said:
The picture is awesome, kind of scary though.
The poem seems to tell me that even though we may lose somebody, we always have the memories.
How far off the mark am I?
I do like the writing, but am maybe a little bit too dense to understand the underlying meaning.
August 31st, 2017 17:00
Felo-de-se
FredPeyer said:
\'...it will burry deep into the chassis of your being\'
I am challenged to wonder how come you write so well at such a young age!
Well I guess I am like that old dog who can still learn some tricks :-)
August 30th, 2017 11:19
FredPeyer said:
\'...it will burry deep into the chassis of your being\'
I am challenged to wonder how come you write so well at such a young age!
Well I guess I am like that old dog who can still learn some tricks :-)
August 30th, 2017 11:19
Oblivious
FredPeyer said:
a__pott, the more I read, the more I like your writing. You have a knack of cutting through to the essentials, no bs, no talking around the bush. Love it!
August 30th, 2017 11:14
FredPeyer said:
a__pott, the more I read, the more I like your writing. You have a knack of cutting through to the essentials, no bs, no talking around the bush. Love it!
August 30th, 2017 11:14
A S p a c e
FredPeyer said:
Another great poem!
What you say is true, but you are now also in the other person\'s space. The question is whether or not you are giving up more than you gain.
August 30th, 2017 11:11
FredPeyer said:
Another great poem!
What you say is true, but you are now also in the other person\'s space. The question is whether or not you are giving up more than you gain.
August 30th, 2017 11:11
Vs. Nature
FredPeyer said:
We kill, we maim, we change, without any regard, but every once in a while nature does come back to teach us a lesson.
Great writing a__pott!
August 30th, 2017 11:07
FredPeyer said:
We kill, we maim, we change, without any regard, but every once in a while nature does come back to teach us a lesson.
Great writing a__pott!
August 30th, 2017 11:07
9 weeks
FredPeyer said:
Somehow missed your poems but realized after reading your latest one from August 30th that I should read all of them. Am not disappointed. This one is good too!
August 30th, 2017 11:01
FredPeyer said:
Somehow missed your poems but realized after reading your latest one from August 30th that I should read all of them. Am not disappointed. This one is good too!
August 30th, 2017 11:01
Say Something Nice
FredPeyer said:
I will say something nice: YOUR POEM IS OUTSTANDING!
Short, to the point, true, no fancy language. You definitely deserve it. In these few lines you perfectly captured one of the tenets of the human condition, the need to be accepted and acknowledged for who we are.
Definitely a favorite, and going up on my wall of great poems.
August 30th, 2017 10:57
FredPeyer said:
I will say something nice: YOUR POEM IS OUTSTANDING!
Short, to the point, true, no fancy language. You definitely deserve it. In these few lines you perfectly captured one of the tenets of the human condition, the need to be accepted and acknowledged for who we are.
Definitely a favorite, and going up on my wall of great poems.
August 30th, 2017 10:57
Life is Short So Be Swift to Love..
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes love is like a gamble. You have to know when to run.
August 29th, 2017 21:47
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes love is like a gamble. You have to know when to run.
August 29th, 2017 21:47
Life is Short So Be Swift to Love..
myself and me said:
\"I could wait forever...
but I won\'t.\"
Very well addressed. Life is short, why wait.
Nice writing.
August 29th, 2017 21:28
myself and me said:
\"I could wait forever...
but I won\'t.\"
Very well addressed. Life is short, why wait.
Nice writing.
August 29th, 2017 21:28
Life is Short So Be Swift to Love..
Louise Knight said:
Love is a paradox! Well put.
August 29th, 2017 16:44
Louise Knight said:
Love is a paradox! Well put.
August 29th, 2017 16:44
A S p a c e
burning-embers said:
Aaaah relationships. Don\'tcha just love \'em. Gone is ya freedom and privacy and u have to share the john. Aren\'t we humans disusting. Great writing by the way.
August 21st, 2017 22:23
burning-embers said:
Aaaah relationships. Don\'tcha just love \'em. Gone is ya freedom and privacy and u have to share the john. Aren\'t we humans disusting. Great writing by the way.
August 21st, 2017 22:23
Vs. Nature
burning-embers said:
Join the club. There has to be a better way for us to occupy our beautiful planet than out continual rape. I have no answers, but i do call out for change as you do here. I recently wrote something similar.
Your writing is good and thought provoking.
August 20th, 2017 19:41
burning-embers said:
Join the club. There has to be a better way for us to occupy our beautiful planet than out continual rape. I have no answers, but i do call out for change as you do here. I recently wrote something similar.
Your writing is good and thought provoking.
August 20th, 2017 19:41
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