Comments received on poems by Faye99
Muddy Boots
JC said:
Great poem, I really enjoyed how you expressed the difference between the \"you\" that people see, and the real you inside. Keep up the wonderful writing.
November 26th, 2017 14:50
JC said:
Great poem, I really enjoyed how you expressed the difference between the \"you\" that people see, and the real you inside. Keep up the wonderful writing.
November 26th, 2017 14:50
Scar
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Faye. You know, we all have scars and bruises, some more than others. But time is the greatest healer, and your last line says it all: One day you will thrive!!!!!
August 26th, 2017 22:05
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Faye. You know, we all have scars and bruises, some more than others. But time is the greatest healer, and your last line says it all: One day you will thrive!!!!!
August 26th, 2017 22:05
Trapped in the Day
FredPeyer said:
Good writing, tight, letting the emotions seep through the words.
Great poem, Faye!
August 26th, 2017 22:03
FredPeyer said:
Good writing, tight, letting the emotions seep through the words.
Great poem, Faye!
August 26th, 2017 22:03
Soaring Wings
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, Faye. It is the age-old question of \'what if\' and you will never know. Better to look forward.
August 26th, 2017 22:01
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, Faye. It is the age-old question of \'what if\' and you will never know. Better to look forward.
August 26th, 2017 22:01
Soaring Wings
Accidental Poet said:
Pain does not mean you\'re guilty of anything. Your innocence has matured as it should. Love yourself Faye and give yourself back those wings you had as a child. Beautifully written piece Faye. ; )
August 26th, 2017 17:58
Accidental Poet said:
Pain does not mean you\'re guilty of anything. Your innocence has matured as it should. Love yourself Faye and give yourself back those wings you had as a child. Beautifully written piece Faye. ; )
August 26th, 2017 17:58
Trapped in the Day
dusk arising said:
Amazing the things we were when we look back. Great writing.
August 24th, 2017 21:30
dusk arising said:
Amazing the things we were when we look back. Great writing.
August 24th, 2017 21:30
