Comments received on poems by Faye99

Muddy Boots
JC said:

Great poem, I really enjoyed how you expressed the difference between the \"you\" that people see, and the real you inside. Keep up the wonderful writing.

November 26th, 2017 14:50

FredPeyer said:

Very well written, Faye. You know, we all have scars and bruises, some more than others. But time is the greatest healer, and your last line says it all: One day you will thrive!!!!!

August 26th, 2017 22:05

Trapped in the Day
FredPeyer said:

Good writing, tight, letting the emotions seep through the words.
Great poem, Faye!

August 26th, 2017 22:03

Soaring Wings
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful writing, Faye. It is the age-old question of \'what if\' and you will never know. Better to look forward.

August 26th, 2017 22:01

Same Old Town
FredPeyer said:

A sad story, but beautifully written!

August 26th, 2017 21:59

Soaring Wings
Accidental Poet said:

Pain does not mean you\'re guilty of anything. Your innocence has matured as it should. Love yourself Faye and give yourself back those wings you had as a child. Beautifully written piece Faye. ; )

August 26th, 2017 17:58

Trapped in the Day
dusk arising said:

Amazing the things we were when we look back. Great writing.

August 24th, 2017 21:30