Comments received on poems by Lizzie Lara
Her Again
L. B. Mek said:
a simplified depiction of introspection using a relatable metaphor, good read
though for me, it seems in your laudable effort to make your writing accessible, there are some aspects you\'ve chosen to omit, hopefully I\'m wrong,
still - always remember: write for yourself, prioritise your \'voice\' and let everything else, take care of itself
January 28th, 2021 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
a simplified depiction of introspection using a relatable metaphor, good read
though for me, it seems in your laudable effort to make your writing accessible, there are some aspects you\'ve chosen to omit, hopefully I\'m wrong,
still - always remember: write for yourself, prioritise your \'voice\' and let everything else, take care of itself
January 28th, 2021 04:08
Her Again
FredPeyer said:
Self-discovery is a beautiful thing....and you said it well, Lizzie!
January 27th, 2021 11:34
FredPeyer said:
Self-discovery is a beautiful thing....and you said it well, Lizzie!
January 27th, 2021 11:34
Her Again
Doggerel Dave said:
So you invite suggestions and concerns both here and in your last poem.
Trouble is, you have no control over who might pop in...In this case It\'s me and I have to confess that beyond your encounter with a girl with eye trouble, and a hint of gender fluidity, I\'m not quite sure about the nature of your encounter. I like the observation that the world is in a deep hole - perhaps you can make some commentary about that next time.....
Dave
January 27th, 2021 05:37
Doggerel Dave said:
So you invite suggestions and concerns both here and in your last poem.
Trouble is, you have no control over who might pop in...In this case It\'s me and I have to confess that beyond your encounter with a girl with eye trouble, and a hint of gender fluidity, I\'m not quite sure about the nature of your encounter. I like the observation that the world is in a deep hole - perhaps you can make some commentary about that next time.....
Dave
January 27th, 2021 05:37
Her Again
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is waiting for you Lizzie and all will be wonderful.
Andy
January 27th, 2021 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is waiting for you Lizzie and all will be wonderful.
Andy
January 27th, 2021 01:46
It Is Her
Neville said:
twice as much trouble then.... I enjoyed your \'It Is Her\'.... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 13:14
Neville said:
twice as much trouble then.... I enjoyed your \'It Is Her\'.... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 13:14
Abstract
dtyrrell145 said:
i really do understand, you write so beautifully and so carefully juxtapose your writing x
November 4th, 2017 19:34
dtyrrell145 said:
i really do understand, you write so beautifully and so carefully juxtapose your writing x
November 4th, 2017 19:34
Abstract
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. You are still there although you may be hidden from sight. Welcome to MPS.
August 25th, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. You are still there although you may be hidden from sight. Welcome to MPS.
August 25th, 2017 00:58
Abstract
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LIZZIE ~ Thanks for your very poignant first poem. I find as I grow older (I\'m 33) the quality of a relationship fades and fails and we just become a (BLANK) CANVAS. I am relieved you inform us this is in the past and that you have \"moved on\" but it\'s never easy for Men or Ladies. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ I trust you found it cathartic. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
August 24th, 2017 19:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LIZZIE ~ Thanks for your very poignant first poem. I find as I grow older (I\'m 33) the quality of a relationship fades and fails and we just become a (BLANK) CANVAS. I am relieved you inform us this is in the past and that you have \"moved on\" but it\'s never easy for Men or Ladies. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ I trust you found it cathartic. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
August 24th, 2017 19:30
