Comments received on poems by Abigail_
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myself and me said:
Not a poet myself, I like reading and I do enjoy this piece. Welcome to this site.
September 4th, 2017 20:09
myself and me said:
Not a poet myself, I like reading and I do enjoy this piece. Welcome to this site.
September 4th, 2017 20:09
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ABIGAIL (lovely name) Thanks for your first Poem ~excellent. A neat quatrain (4 lines) good rhyme (aaaa) and good rhythm ! Many of us can empathise with the subject and the dilemma it poses ~ the infernal triangle of LOVE ! MPS is an Open University of Poetry ! People post their poems as Haiku & Senryu ~ Sonnets ~ Acrostics etc so you can study a learn new Classical Styles of Poetry ~ if you want any help just ask ! We are very gentle critics ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours Brian (UK). Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 4th, 2017 04:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ABIGAIL (lovely name) Thanks for your first Poem ~excellent. A neat quatrain (4 lines) good rhyme (aaaa) and good rhythm ! Many of us can empathise with the subject and the dilemma it poses ~ the infernal triangle of LOVE ! MPS is an Open University of Poetry ! People post their poems as Haiku & Senryu ~ Sonnets ~ Acrostics etc so you can study a learn new Classical Styles of Poetry ~ if you want any help just ask ! We are very gentle critics ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours Brian (UK). Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 4th, 2017 04:02
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Michael Edwards said:
Well this is a lovely piece and although I\'ve read it several times I can\'t find any suggestions as to how it could be improved - it\'s great as it is. And I do applaud you for the courage to ask for crits - not something many of us do - sadly.
Oh yes - and a warm welcome to the site - hope to see more of your work soon.
September 4th, 2017 02:48
Michael Edwards said:
Well this is a lovely piece and although I\'ve read it several times I can\'t find any suggestions as to how it could be improved - it\'s great as it is. And I do applaud you for the courage to ask for crits - not something many of us do - sadly.
Oh yes - and a warm welcome to the site - hope to see more of your work soon.
September 4th, 2017 02:48
