Comments received on poems by Jordy L G
A star out of reach
onepauly said:
a genuine poet at last!
keep writing.
it is its own reward.
April 27th, 2018 18:30
onepauly said:
a genuine poet at last!
keep writing.
it is its own reward.
April 27th, 2018 18:30
The hands of time
peeter pewter said:
I really like the poem. About time someone wrote about time from time\'s own perspective. Good timing!
February 11th, 2018 14:06
peeter pewter said:
I really like the poem. About time someone wrote about time from time\'s own perspective. Good timing!
February 11th, 2018 14:06
Inner self
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hi jordy , oh wow , i truly find this amazing :-) you wrote this so very well and i enjoyed reading this . i love how you ended this with \'\' the inner strength of a warrior \'\' i love this line \'\' the shadows of my spirit were enlightened by such a uplifting breeze\'\'
January 27th, 2018 17:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hi jordy , oh wow , i truly find this amazing :-) you wrote this so very well and i enjoyed reading this . i love how you ended this with \'\' the inner strength of a warrior \'\' i love this line \'\' the shadows of my spirit were enlightened by such a uplifting breeze\'\'
January 27th, 2018 17:32
A Shooting Star
SunSearcher said:
Beautiful! I am sure the lady which inspired this loved it as well.
November 18th, 2017 17:47
SunSearcher said:
Beautiful! I am sure the lady which inspired this loved it as well.
November 18th, 2017 17:47
The Girl In My Dreams
MaddieJ said:
I often dream about the perfect man for me. Then I realize that no man is perfect. He is only in my dreams. I know how it feels to want to see that person in your dreams again. Great write! Welcome to MPS!
September 5th, 2017 00:05
MaddieJ said:
I often dream about the perfect man for me. Then I realize that no man is perfect. He is only in my dreams. I know how it feels to want to see that person in your dreams again. Great write! Welcome to MPS!
September 5th, 2017 00:05
The Girl In My Dreams
myself and me said:
There was a saying \" If you can dream it, you will have it\".
\"So to the girl in my dreams,
I hope we meet again. \"
Your dream will come true one day.
Nice poem. Welcome to this site.
September 4th, 2017 19:05
myself and me said:
There was a saying \" If you can dream it, you will have it\".
\"So to the girl in my dreams,
I hope we meet again. \"
Your dream will come true one day.
Nice poem. Welcome to this site.
September 4th, 2017 19:05
The Girl In My Dreams
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JORDY ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem ! In keeping with the topic (DREAM GIRL) it has great flow (metre) augmented by ample rhyme ! It is a PROPER POEM ~ easy both to read and recite ! There is a single theme so it is well accommodated in a single verse ! Most of us can empathise because we have ALL dreamed of our perfect DREAM PARTNER & SOUL MATE ! My current GF (Angela) is also my Dream Girl ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.
September 4th, 2017 14:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JORDY ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem ! In keeping with the topic (DREAM GIRL) it has great flow (metre) augmented by ample rhyme ! It is a PROPER POEM ~ easy both to read and recite ! There is a single theme so it is well accommodated in a single verse ! Most of us can empathise because we have ALL dreamed of our perfect DREAM PARTNER & SOUL MATE ! My current GF (Angela) is also my Dream Girl ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.
September 4th, 2017 14:51
