Comments received on poems by parisinwonderland7



Live For you
Lorna said:

I loved this and the quirky little ending that is sadly funny.......

July 29th, 2018 05:15

How can I be [so] selfish?
orchidee said:

A good write P. it may seem controversial saying this, but there is a part where the person needs to \'pull themselves together\', even if depressed. I don\'t mean in a \'soldier on\' type of way.
You are not responsible for other people\'s choices, though you want to help of course.

September 12th, 2017 08:38

Are words just words?
Poetic Dan said:

Definitely not, they are the beginning and the end, or actions are in between.

Great work, thank you for your words

September 11th, 2017 16:18

Are words just words?
lasergraph said:

Words can threaten, console and explain. They can express joy and sorrow, love and hate. The pen is mightier than the sword.

September 11th, 2017 15:54

Are words just words?
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:

Great poem. A good poetic expression of the power of words. Simply words are \"karma.\"

September 11th, 2017 13:34

Are words just words?
florence arla said:

As poets, words are the way in which we can communicate our emotions, our thoughts, feelings and perceptions. I love how you have highlighted this with the obvious irony. Absolutely fantastic.

September 11th, 2017 12:08

If This Is Love...
Accidental Poet said:

Yes dear girl, this is love. But even without this man, you must see yourself as the beautiful person you are inside AND outside. Welcome to MPS. ; )

September 7th, 2017 03:52

On The Horizon
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write. May your light brighten your days ahead. Welcome to MPS.

September 5th, 2017 02:56