Comments received on poems by ForeverJesus7



Thank God For Poetry
dusk arising said:

How come i write poetry and publish on here more often than you do and don\'t acknowledge that your \'god\' even exists!!!

Your god didn\'t gift me sonny.

Why do so many christians attempt this patronising stance which shines through your writing. You\'re nothing more than deluded from childhood into fearing not to believe in a man made fairy tale.

October 29th, 2019 19:52

Thank God For Poetry
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thnaks ZION for sharing your concept of WHAT Poetry is and also what it ACHIEVES ! ANGELA & I can express our feelings for EACH OTHER (& GOD !) through poetry that would look narcisstic in Prose. Poetry is also CATHARTIC we can open our hearts pain & fears ina POEM ~ contributors to MPS often do ! Because Poetry is so so expressive it AMERLIORATES any subject it chances on ! A WORLD without poetry would be like Strawberries & Cream (favourite food at Wimbledon Tennis Tournament) without the STRAWBERRIES ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love in Spirit ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

October 29th, 2019 09:18

Thank God For Poetry
Lamar Cole said:

Reading and writing poetry is a good thing.

October 29th, 2019 07:12

Thank God For Poetry
orchidee said:

Well, yes, all poetry I think is a reflection of ourselves to greater or lesser degree.
I would like to understand \'boasting\' in a spiritual sense, not in a selfish or bragging sense of \'look at me; don\'t I write great poems; just see me, me, me!\'

October 29th, 2019 02:45

During This Month
dusk arising said:

Interesting rant, but far too repetitive. Have you considered editing down the number of repeated points? It wouldn\'t be a rant if you did you know.

Which church are you a member of, i\'d be interested in their direction?

October 21st, 2019 19:14

During This Month
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS DION ~ For all your TESTIMONIES for JESUS ~ AMEN ! HALLOWEEN is Satanic & Its not just gripped the USA ~ the UK has also been well & truly HALLOWEENED ! In our CHURCH Angela & I arrange a LIGHT PARTY (It is ALL SAINTS DAY) and we celebrate JESUS as the LIGHT of the WORLD. We have Craft & Hymns & Choruses and BBQ ~ the Kids (about 50 aged 5 to 14) love it and some bring their PARENTS ! We have balloons with Lights in and a Scripture ~ and release them @ the end of the Party ! There are now 100\'s of LIGHT PARTIES in the UK and they all follow a similar pattern !

Every Blessing on ALL SAINTS DAY
Love in the SPIRIT BRIAN & ANGELA
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก
Please check our site ~ Thanks


October 21st, 2019 08:05

A Beautiful Work Of Art
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING ZION ~ Greetings from HONOLULU in the most beautiful STATE if HAWAII ! 86F (30C) ad not a touch of Autumn in sight ! We stopped over in HAWAII on our way back to the UK from NEW ZEALAND ! Loved the Poem - til the last line I thought AHHHH ZION is waxing lyrical again about the Love of His Life again ! BUT NO it was only his OMEGA WRIST WATCH ! First smile of the Day !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love in the Spirit ANGELA & BRIAN
๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก
Please check BLUE HAWAII !



October 18th, 2019 03:02

Tears And Old Bitterness Of Fortune
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING DION ~ BRIAN HERE ~ I too have an elder BROTHER and we have been in many scrapes together ~ like staeling ~ diving cars uninsured etc. I loved my Bother & still do ! Fortunately we always escaped the LAW ! However like in your STORY my brother always said if the LAW was involed HE would take the rap and swear I was innocent ~ OK ! In one sense JESUS is our Big Brother ~ SPIRITUALLY ~ and took the rap and paid the Atonement Price for ALL our SIN !

WHY did they nail HIM to Calvars Tree ?
WHY tell me WHY was HE there ?
JESUS the Helper the Healer the Friend
WHY tell me WHY should HE care .........?

All my iniquity on HIM was laid
HE bore it all to the TREE
JESUS the Debt of My Sin fully paid
HE bore the RANSOME FOR ME !

Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love in the SPRIT B & A
๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™
Please check *BEYOND THE SUNSET* ~ Thanks

October 6th, 2019 15:42

Tears And Old Bitterness Of Fortune
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

What if your brother was proud to do this for you Dion?

Ex animo, Alan

October 6th, 2019 01:26

He Must Increase, As I Must Decrease
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening ZION ~ Thanks for this Poem ~ AWESOME. Our interpretation is that as we grow more Christlike ~ in our everyday lives (not just on a Sunday) people will see less of us (we must decrease !) and more of JESUS ( HE MUST INCREASE !) ~ AMEN. Thnaks for caring !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love in the SPIRIT - Angela & Brian
๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

September 21st, 2019 13:23

He Must Increase, As I Must Decrease
orchidee said:

A fine write Forever.

September 21st, 2019 01:37

Cleanliness, Tidiness, And Organization
Bragee said:

Good Message!
Confusion has been the downfall of many men.

September 13th, 2019 09:24

Cleanliness, Tidiness, And Organization
H.M. Reynolds, hmrwrites said:

I love how simple and straight to the point this is, works well with the themes you are discussing. :)

September 13th, 2019 08:56

Cleanliness, Tidiness, And Organization
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing & caring ZION ! When Peple know we are Christians they have high expectations ! Consequently I think we should be *Living Epistles known & read of all MEN & LADIES* Clenliness ~ Tidiness ~ Organisation should be the hallmarks of every committed Christian ~ AMEN ! Please check PARADISE !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

September 13th, 2019 07:55

Another Valley
JWKP98 said:

Great poem! I was at an extreme low a couple years ago, but He never failed in seeing me through.

August 23rd, 2019 03:52

How Did We Get This Far (Part 6)
dusk arising said:

Well written and excellent question raised. Have you considered that the fault lies within the various christian churches because they have diversified into so many different side shoots and methods of worship.
It is OK to call oneself a christian regardless of which of these churches practices one follows?
Which christian church are you a proud devotee of?

August 19th, 2019 06:46

Those Who Live With No Light
dusk arising said:

The gospel of Thomas, The gospel of Philip, The gospel of Truth, all written at same time as Matthew, Mark, Luke and John show who is being lied to. These are accepted by christian theologians as authentic gospels. Education persists for the intelligent.

August 16th, 2019 23:56

Only So Much
dusk arising said:

Goodness me. There you go again talking FEAR of christ. A man made fear by religions who sought to gain power over the masses. Looks like you have been frightened into spirituality.

Get rid of stupid notions that god wants you to fear. God is love and goodwill SO WERE ALL OF HIS TEACHINGS.... man invented fear of god.

August 12th, 2019 02:12

With Christ I Have
orchidee said:

A good sincere write Forever. Some won\'t understand - if not having spiritual understanding. Also - I know one who put on an application form to: nationality? \'Citizen of heaven\'. Which is what he is! But the world said \'Erm, yes; we don\'t have that in our drop-down list of options online though\'.

August 2nd, 2019 02:01

What Do You Think
orchidee said:

I sense your sincerity here Dion. There will be opposition we know, from those who are \'anti\'.
Better being passionate, at least to some degree, then being dull as dish-water At least you\'re \"alive\". It\'s tricky to tell with some folk, maybe! Me too at times, when I get into a dull state.


August 2nd, 2019 01:59

Man\'s Best Friend
dusk arising said:

Lovely tribute to your best friend. Dogs are quite quite wonderful people. I\'d love to have one here with me but sadly my lifestyle would not allow. I couldn\'t bear to leave such a fine beast locked up in my home whilst i work.

July 24th, 2019 01:27

In My Spare Time
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing ZION ~ you raise an intersting point about time ! The Richest & the Poorest man on Earth gets the same time allocation every day ~ no more & no less and you cant BUY TIME ! Its what we do with those 24 hours each day that Counts ! As single Poeple not living @ HOME (Thank GOD for Mums & Dads !) ANGELA & I are masters of & responsible for our own DESTINIES ! We are both in mid-career so we have to work & study hard ! Im responsible for my own FLAT (UK) and Angela & Ruth responsible for theirs (NZ) it all takes time. To be an ACTIVE MEMBER of a Church takes time and any other Club or Society we belong too and Friends & Family all take time ! The bottom line for ANGELA & MYSELF is that if were honest in any DAY or WEEK recently ~ WE JUST DONT HAVE ANY SPARE TIME ~ AMEN ! Remember The DEVIL finds things for IDLE HANDS to DO !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love in the SPIRIT A & B ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก
Please check ANGELAS POEM Today
Dream A Little Dream of ME ! (MAMA CASS)

July 11th, 2019 15:27

In My Spare Time
orchidee said:

I fuss sometimes if I have not written at least something every day. But not to worry - it matures, develops, etc. Then we may write 1, 2 or 3 poems even, on other days.

July 11th, 2019 10:55

In My Spare Time
Michael Edwards said:

It might not be your best piece but it\'s still pretty darn good. Something we can all associate with from time to time.

July 11th, 2019 05:55

The Glory Days
Suresh said:

You find yourself in a good place now, and while the past is never truly forgotten, the present has subdued it. Fine write.

July 8th, 2019 12:30

The Glory Days
orchidee said:

A fine write Forever.

July 7th, 2019 01:36

What Builds A Nation
Suresh said:

I am repeating my comments to A&B


I believe that those courageous people drafted a document so powerful that it was meant for humanity at large and not just one nation or one people. It was not perfect, as they themselves exclaimed, but it gave people the right, a right that we must today enforce, as we gave traversed far from the true meaning of those words.


July 4th, 2019 10:45

What Builds A Nation
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks ZION we all need to be Proud of our Nation and Nationals and of Course our Ladies Soccer Team ! Al the AMERICANS Ive met from Bill Clinton to Boots Randolf and Billy Graham to Kris Kristoferson have all been real nice and have treated me like a Friend ~ AMEN. I am a Student of the USA in the 18th 19th & 20th Century ! Please check our Poem today *American Declaration of Independence*

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love in the Lord BRIAN & ANGEL ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

July 4th, 2019 05:41

Land Of Liberty
Suresh said:

Teach us again, what it means to be free, for we have chipped away so much of it.

July 3rd, 2019 10:36

Land Of Liberty
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

YES INDEED DION ~ THE FOURTH OF JULY IS *INDEPENDENCE DAY* Marked by *The Declaration of Independence* from Great Britain JULY 4th 1776 You didn\'t like British Rule & British Taxes so you rejected KING GEORGE III and replaced him (as Thomas Jefferson said) with KING GEORGE WASHINGTON ~ Now 243 years later you have KING DONALD TRUMP ! You could have had QUEEN ELIZABETH II for the last 66 years ~ I KNOW WHO I WOULD CHOSE TO SERVE ! BUT You chose to be INDEPENDENT so my Prayer is *GOD BLESS AMERICA and ALL WHO SAIL IN HER ~ AMEN*

Blessing & Peace & Joy & Love in the Spirit
Yours ANGELA BRIAN ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿงก

July 3rd, 2019 09:37



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