Comments received on poems by ForeverJesus6



Beware
orchidee said:

I know what you mean. No use just waving things - Bible or whatever it may be. Nor \'Bible-bashing\' (horrible phrase!) if we only make it mean what we want it to mean.
Yep, I heard - the devil tricks you at the front door. Then goes to the back door, and says, \'Why you thinking that?\' (the original lies he told you at the front door!).

January 31st, 2018 09:47

Beware
FineB said:

Hi ForeverJesus6,

2 Colossians 2:10

And in Christ you have been brought to fullness. He is the head over every power and authority.

In God/Christ

We are complete and not through Satan and his lies.

Thank you for this excellent poem highlighting an everlasting problem for any spriritual believer. Satan and his weapons of attack.

Keep writing
FineB


January 31st, 2018 05:03

The Woman On The Plane
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 30th, 2018 09:43

The Woman On The Plane
dusk arising said:

What a great story with a really nice ending.

January 30th, 2018 07:04

The Woman On The Plane
Lorna said:

This was fun... a nice feel-good poem

January 30th, 2018 04:27

The Woman On The Plane
orchidee said:

Good write Forever. Yes, we can\'t get off a train/boat/plane, etc until it stops/lands/comes into port, etc. So we\'re in an enclosed world for the duration of the trip.

January 30th, 2018 02:45

Criticism
Aislinn Wilson said:

You will never meet someone without bias no matter how much they may boast it.

January 29th, 2018 13:51

Criticism
dusk arising said:

Quite nicely presented. Some people just have to be negative don\'t they and then there are those who just proffer a pointless positive comment. Until one can make a judgement upon where the critic stands in this regard there is little point in bothering to acknowledge any criticism.
Constructive criticism is ok but..... in my book i\'d say just get on with it and do it your way. Nobody else has your viewpoint or your particular style. Be you.

January 29th, 2018 12:55

Criticism
orchidee said:

But I know what you mean. I don\'t feel you are being \'preachy\' in your poem, which is good. I mean, preaching is preaching, and poetry is poetry!

January 29th, 2018 07:56

Criticism
orchidee said:

I\'m only gonna criticise that I never seen it spelt as \'critisize\' before! (heehee).

January 29th, 2018 07:55

How Did We Get This Far 2
orchidee said:

Well, I may know when it all started - with Adam and Eve, and the forbidden tree. Dunno if it was an apple tree or what. The record (the Bible) does not say.
I don\'t think it\'s suddenly become \'The bad days\'.

January 28th, 2018 14:07

My Only Regret
orchidee said:

He knows there\'s only one of each of us! That\'s enough for Him - one of each of us! And God our Creator too :)

January 26th, 2018 14:41

At Peace
orchidee said:

Good write Forever,

January 21st, 2018 02:57

A Revival Is...
Aislinn Wilson said:

This was fascinating

January 15th, 2018 21:46

The Curse This Country Has
FredPeyer said:

An epic, very well written!

January 7th, 2018 15:08

The Curse This Country Has
orchidee said:

Good write Forever.

January 7th, 2018 03:00

An Ugly Patch Of Grass
w c said:

loved it

January 4th, 2018 17:07

An Ugly Patch Of Grass
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2018 17:03

Win Her Heart
orchidee said:

Good write Forever. Erm I would like everything to be copastetic - I think. After I\'ve looked it up in my dictionary, that is! heehee.

December 31st, 2017 03:36

Win Her Heart
Christina8 said:

You do have a point here. Good write! Personality takes ya farther than looks, at least to me. Interesting topic.

December 30th, 2017 22:21

Win Her Heart
Jayce Elliot said:

I like this :)

December 30th, 2017 16:08

The Only Peaceful Night
orchidee said:

Good write Forever.

December 25th, 2017 03:16

The Only Peaceful Night
Goldfinch60 said:

May he soon return to us to lead us once more.

December 25th, 2017 02:39

The Inn keeper
orchidee said:

See what you mean, Forever. Could he have squeezed them in somewhere? Or asked someone else to give up a room?
Yet maybe he was compassionate in at least offering a stable? - \'that\'s all I have, I\'m afraid\'

December 24th, 2017 03:11

With Jesus On My Side
orchidee said:

A fine write Forever.

December 21st, 2017 14:20

Never Give Up
orchidee said:

A fine write Forever. Sometimes we (or I at least) may not even attempt some things to start with. So then I\'ve given up before I\'ve started. doh!

December 17th, 2017 02:58

Stood The Test of Time
Moom said:

Very sweet. :)

December 15th, 2017 14:06

Good Scenes From A Highway Man
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 7th, 2017 09:21

He Always Hears Me
orchidee said:

Maybe it\'s oppression then?

December 4th, 2017 14:19

He Always Hears Me
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Glory to the Lord!

December 4th, 2017 09:57

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