Comments received on poems by Syd
Unhealthy
C-pain said:
Beautiful message and I know that pain don\'t worry the right person is probably closer than you think.
February 26th, 2018 09:37
C-pain said:
Beautiful message and I know that pain don\'t worry the right person is probably closer than you think.
February 26th, 2018 09:37
I\'ve known
Lorna said:
I love simple clear messages Syd and this is just lovely.......
February 15th, 2018 05:09
Lorna said:
I love simple clear messages Syd and this is just lovely.......
February 15th, 2018 05:09
Hot and Cold
Vanz said:
A knight in shining armor for the princess who deserved so much better.
Glad that you are no longer attached to the bomb, safe and sound with a hero of your own.
February 13th, 2018 20:44
Vanz said:
A knight in shining armor for the princess who deserved so much better.
Glad that you are no longer attached to the bomb, safe and sound with a hero of your own.
February 13th, 2018 20:44
Humidity
Jo Middleton said:
Felt I could relate to this one.. and I love how nature was beautifully tied into the emotions.
Good work!
February 13th, 2018 17:58
Jo Middleton said:
Felt I could relate to this one.. and I love how nature was beautifully tied into the emotions.
Good work!
February 13th, 2018 17:58
Construction
dusk arising said:
Syd this is so beautiful. So uplifting and truly a pleasure to re-read again and again.
Most definately has to be in my favourites, thank you so much.
February 13th, 2018 17:28
dusk arising said:
Syd this is so beautiful. So uplifting and truly a pleasure to re-read again and again.
Most definately has to be in my favourites, thank you so much.
February 13th, 2018 17:28
Hot and Cold
Caring dove said:
loving you
is not a bomb,
its the diffusion of one\'\'
the bomb will no longer explode, you will be saved and rescued, i sense that in the end everything is calm and settled..
February 13th, 2018 04:50
Caring dove said:
loving you
is not a bomb,
its the diffusion of one\'\'
the bomb will no longer explode, you will be saved and rescued, i sense that in the end everything is calm and settled..
February 13th, 2018 04:50
Hot and Cold
Caring dove said:
hi syd , wow, i love this :-) seems quite a strong piece and deep too . bombs are always made to destruct unless of course we stop the bomb from exploding lol. so he explodes and snaps at you , but however explosive he is , he also has a warm side , and a gentle side .. really enjoyed this x
February 13th, 2018 04:45
Caring dove said:
hi syd , wow, i love this :-) seems quite a strong piece and deep too . bombs are always made to destruct unless of course we stop the bomb from exploding lol. so he explodes and snaps at you , but however explosive he is , he also has a warm side , and a gentle side .. really enjoyed this x
February 13th, 2018 04:45
What My Teacher Really Taught me
DeviLove said:
Yep, this is very true. True but sad.
October 8th, 2017 13:40
DeviLove said:
Yep, this is very true. True but sad.
October 8th, 2017 13:40
Forgiveness Is Not What I Deserve
Christina8 said:
I agree with sadpoet. Forgive yourself! Great write by the way, but you do deserve forgiveness.
October 5th, 2017 20:50
Christina8 said:
I agree with sadpoet. Forgive yourself! Great write by the way, but you do deserve forgiveness.
October 5th, 2017 20:50
I Can No Longer Feel The Sun
DeviLove said:
Awww, this makes me sad. But I have been in the same position many times before :(
October 4th, 2017 20:28
DeviLove said:
Awww, this makes me sad. But I have been in the same position many times before :(
October 4th, 2017 20:28
I Can No Longer Feel The Sun
Louis Gibbs said:
Fine poem describing your depression, SYD. It can be treated, but it\'s common at your age.
October 4th, 2017 16:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Fine poem describing your depression, SYD. It can be treated, but it\'s common at your age.
October 4th, 2017 16:39
What My Teacher Really Taught me
MendedFences27 said:
Very well written, very meaningful. A positive message about life and understanding. I guess we all have that one teacher who changed our outlook on life, who forced us to face reality, who taught us to see. It is difficult sometimes to see through the lies, to find the reality. to see things as they are, but we must keep on trying. Wonderful poem. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2017 16:03
MendedFences27 said:
Very well written, very meaningful. A positive message about life and understanding. I guess we all have that one teacher who changed our outlook on life, who forced us to face reality, who taught us to see. It is difficult sometimes to see through the lies, to find the reality. to see things as they are, but we must keep on trying. Wonderful poem. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2017 16:03
Humidity
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem. If I hadn\'t read the authors notes, I wouldn\'t have known it had anything to do with anger. To me, it just had to do with the \"dance\" of love. And you did a great job!
September 29th, 2017 06:36
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem. If I hadn\'t read the authors notes, I wouldn\'t have known it had anything to do with anger. To me, it just had to do with the \"dance\" of love. And you did a great job!
September 29th, 2017 06:36
Me VS. What You Deserve
Christina8 said:
Beautifully expressed. I am sure for someone you are exactly what you need them to be. This is a very touching poem. So sad things didn\'t work out. But I wanted to add that you are a blessing to the world too!
September 24th, 2017 13:11
Christina8 said:
Beautifully expressed. I am sure for someone you are exactly what you need them to be. This is a very touching poem. So sad things didn\'t work out. But I wanted to add that you are a blessing to the world too!
September 24th, 2017 13:11
9/21/17
trinhead said:
this actually physically hurt because of how much i could relate. amazing.
September 22nd, 2017 18:24
trinhead said:
this actually physically hurt because of how much i could relate. amazing.
September 22nd, 2017 18:24
