Comments received on poems by Alex PB
My Henry
arqios said:
That was a truly inspiring read. Brings up many an account over hundreds of years of Henry’s.
November 20th, 2023 06:25
arqios said:
That was a truly inspiring read. Brings up many an account over hundreds of years of Henry’s.
November 20th, 2023 06:25
The Story of a French Girl and an English Boy: Part 2
Jay-Lee Jane said:
Ahhh! yes! a part two!!! another great twist...maybe even bigger then part 1!!!
February 8th, 2022 22:56
Jay-Lee Jane said:
Ahhh! yes! a part two!!! another great twist...maybe even bigger then part 1!!!
February 8th, 2022 22:56
The Story of a French Girl and an English Boy: Part 1
Rocky Lagou said:
Yo! This is witty-witty. Good job! Why love gotta be so complicated?!?!💖👍
February 7th, 2022 14:03
Rocky Lagou said:
Yo! This is witty-witty. Good job! Why love gotta be so complicated?!?!💖👍
February 7th, 2022 14:03
The Story of a French Girl and an English Boy: Part 1
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully expressive, and really like all the modern cultural references
thanks for sharing
February 7th, 2022 07:25
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully expressive, and really like all the modern cultural references
thanks for sharing
February 7th, 2022 07:25
The Story of a French Girl and an English Boy: Part 1
Jay-Lee Jane said:
wow...just wow..
I\'ve studied Shakespeare for a few years and this reminds me of a modern Romeo and Juliet with a surprising twist. I admire your storytelling and unique ability to draw an audience in...
A really refreshing view on love (young love even) and \'dumb\' mistakes or self-sabotaging behaviors we can too easily make or slip into by getting into our heads. I love how you did something slightly unexpected by making the boy the insure one who was in his head, as many things ive read are about how the girl is insecure and up in her head - really makes you think. and how often we dont realize our mistakes or what we\'ve lost until its too late...
thank you for sharing!! keep up the amazing work.
February 7th, 2022 07:19
Jay-Lee Jane said:
wow...just wow..
I\'ve studied Shakespeare for a few years and this reminds me of a modern Romeo and Juliet with a surprising twist. I admire your storytelling and unique ability to draw an audience in...
A really refreshing view on love (young love even) and \'dumb\' mistakes or self-sabotaging behaviors we can too easily make or slip into by getting into our heads. I love how you did something slightly unexpected by making the boy the insure one who was in his head, as many things ive read are about how the girl is insecure and up in her head - really makes you think. and how often we dont realize our mistakes or what we\'ve lost until its too late...
thank you for sharing!! keep up the amazing work.
February 7th, 2022 07:19
Do they actually care?
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s was so gut feeling cold then I read your authors not and there became an instant glow.
Thank you for these memories I still need to heal and remember to love
Much peace and respect
April 11th, 2019 01:25
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s was so gut feeling cold then I read your authors not and there became an instant glow.
Thank you for these memories I still need to heal and remember to love
Much peace and respect
April 11th, 2019 01:25
Love is poison
Ivory said:
Writing is always a wonderful outlet to help get through the tough times.. Thanks for sharing
March 21st, 2018 18:19
Ivory said:
Writing is always a wonderful outlet to help get through the tough times.. Thanks for sharing
March 21st, 2018 18:19
All due to the girl I met
Christina8 said:
Oh that is heartbreaking! So beautiful up till the last line! But it\'s great. Just remember the love.
October 10th, 2017 14:55
Christina8 said:
Oh that is heartbreaking! So beautiful up till the last line! But it\'s great. Just remember the love.
October 10th, 2017 14:55
Where Thou Extended
orchidee said:
I extend thou appreciation for a fine write. Not fine-ish! Thou hast expressed it well. Similar to my attempt, well sort of:
\'Hey, where ya going?\'
\'Wot? Mind ya own business!\'
Heehee.
October 7th, 2017 08:53
orchidee said:
I extend thou appreciation for a fine write. Not fine-ish! Thou hast expressed it well. Similar to my attempt, well sort of:
\'Hey, where ya going?\'
\'Wot? Mind ya own business!\'
Heehee.
October 7th, 2017 08:53
Where Thou?
orchidee said:
Thou hast waxed archaic and lyrical Alex! A fine write. It can give a choice of more rhyming words if lines end in \'thee\', \'thou\', etc.
October 2nd, 2017 14:45
orchidee said:
Thou hast waxed archaic and lyrical Alex! A fine write. It can give a choice of more rhyming words if lines end in \'thee\', \'thou\', etc.
October 2nd, 2017 14:45
Little Bird
Ravenssongbird said:
Great tempo 😉 Sweetly visualized and inspired. Lovely piece!
September 30th, 2017 16:09
Ravenssongbird said:
Great tempo 😉 Sweetly visualized and inspired. Lovely piece!
September 30th, 2017 16:09
