Comments received on poems by Alex PB



Grateful: For You
sorenbarrett said:

A poem full of pain and anguish. It bleeds raw and open. Sad

May 5th, 2025 06:41

Torture Me
dimpy said:

lovely...

May 5th, 2025 02:29

Torture Me
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 4th, 2025 12:19

Torture Me
sorenbarrett said:

It is the weak that we torture because the strong are too powerful, It is the chained dog that is beaten for it can not run and the caged bird because it can not fly. A sad poem of pain and I feel the plea from the victim that is not heard. Sell written

May 4th, 2025 12:12

My Own
Mourgana of the Fey said:

These short concise lines reach out and seem to be able to speak volumes, a nicely spun word web this is!

April 17th, 2025 01:29

My Own
sorenbarrett said:

We all can live on our own but it is not the same as with someone else. A powerful write

April 16th, 2025 18:54

You Put A Spell On Me
sorenbarrett said:

A love poem that is rather unconventional in its form but speaks as a song with lyrics. Very well done

April 13th, 2025 11:47

Tonight
sorenbarrett said:

Sensuous and an invitation for a sexual encounter. Well written

April 10th, 2025 17:42

Let Me Pt. 2
sorenbarrett said:

Very sweet and tender. A love poem. Very nice

April 9th, 2025 19:52

Don\'t Do It
Poetic Licence said:

To me that comes across as a female who is abusing and controlling their partner, believing that they have no other choice but to except it, nicely written and expressed

April 9th, 2025 02:11

Don\'t Do It
sorenbarrett said:

Revelations of what a person is and still expectations. A poem that is more open than closed and more observation than feeling. Lovely

April 8th, 2025 13:40

Navigate Contradictions
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write, everything is fragile under the surface, enjoyed the read

April 8th, 2025 01:05

Navigate Contradictions
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor in the crystal ball. Yes it can be valued but is fragile very nice

April 7th, 2025 13:49

She Said, She Can
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of someone fallen heavily for someone but is unsure if it will be reciprocated, enjoyed the read

April 6th, 2025 02:39

She Said, She Can
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of being struck and smitten. Whether this is enough to land the lady is at question. What is the line between obsession and perseverance? A poem that provokes thought.

April 5th, 2025 17:47

Circles
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting write looking at what we can do and what we can\'t do, everyone has limits to what they can offer, enjoyed the read

March 31st, 2025 02:19

Circles
sorenbarrett said:

Interesting recognition that there are limits to what we can do. A insightful write. Very nice

March 30th, 2025 19:04

Circles
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

March 30th, 2025 18:46

Let Me
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write around many questions being asked but as of yet unanswered, nicely written

March 30th, 2025 02:23

Let Me
sorenbarrett said:

Questions unanswered but being unanswered is the answer. A very good write

March 29th, 2025 18:24

Black Rose
Tony36 said:

Love it

March 20th, 2025 06:42

Black Rose
Poetic Licence said:

A statement of love and dedication, nicely expressed

March 20th, 2025 03:33

Black Rose
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of proposal and love. Nicely stated

March 19th, 2025 20:03

Black Rose
arqios said:

Good to see you back around the site 🙏🏻🕊

March 19th, 2025 19:53

Drunk But Sober
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 26th, 2025 20:59

Can\'t Stop
arqios said:

Powerful wording. An exquisite obsessional anguish. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

January 25th, 2025 18:49

Can\'t Stop
sorenbarrett said:

A great way of showing obcession and so well worded.

January 25th, 2025 18:38

Plea
arqios said:

There is such exquisite sadness in these words.

January 23rd, 2025 19:44

Eva
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 14th, 2025 18:30

All due to the girl I met
arqios said:

Such a learning curve!

November 20th, 2023 08:20

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