Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion
To Convince You of My Love
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love in this poem sweetly written.
October 31st, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love in this poem sweetly written.
October 31st, 2025 12:34
Freedom’s Debt
NinjaGirl said:
\"For those who fought for it--freedom has a flavor the protected will never know.\" So many fought and lost for it. How honorable is it to die for one\'s country when both sides send young teens to fight each other?
October 20th, 2025 21:02
NinjaGirl said:
\"For those who fought for it--freedom has a flavor the protected will never know.\" So many fought and lost for it. How honorable is it to die for one\'s country when both sides send young teens to fight each other?
October 20th, 2025 21:02
Freedom’s Debt
sorenbarrett said:
A write of soldier valor and gratitude due. Well done
October 20th, 2025 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
A write of soldier valor and gratitude due. Well done
October 20th, 2025 19:40
Pay Attention
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written warning to people to follow and adhere to the word of their Lord
October 11th, 2025 15:09
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written warning to people to follow and adhere to the word of their Lord
October 11th, 2025 15:09
Pay Attention
sorenbarrett said:
A religious warning in poetic form admonishing all to adhere to the word of the Lord. Well written
October 11th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
A religious warning in poetic form admonishing all to adhere to the word of the Lord. Well written
October 11th, 2025 11:15
YOU
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and joy over another. Most lovely and well worded it cries out for others to hear. Well done
October 7th, 2025 16:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and joy over another. Most lovely and well worded it cries out for others to hear. Well done
October 7th, 2025 16:44
Silent War
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write in metaphor of all that we fight and face each day. Nicely expressed in poetic form
October 7th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write in metaphor of all that we fight and face each day. Nicely expressed in poetic form
October 7th, 2025 03:59
Enchanting Call
sorenbarrett said:
So well rhymed and with such good flow this poem speaks of worship beyond love. Well done
September 15th, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
So well rhymed and with such good flow this poem speaks of worship beyond love. Well done
September 15th, 2025 15:48
Birth of Mothergaia
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted spritual write around the well being of this wonderful planet and all its life forms, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 06:44
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted spritual write around the well being of this wonderful planet and all its life forms, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 06:44
Birth of Mothergaia
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritual poem that embodies the health of the planet and its life forms. Nicely written it feels surreally green. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritual poem that embodies the health of the planet and its life forms. Nicely written it feels surreally green. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:14
Deepest Confession
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a strong governing force pervades this poem. Lovely
August 10th, 2025 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a strong governing force pervades this poem. Lovely
August 10th, 2025 19:55
Without You
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt and passionate declaration of ongoing love for their wife, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 13:56
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt and passionate declaration of ongoing love for their wife, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 13:56
Without You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing someone that is a part of life. A lovely write of need and desire for another. Lovely
August 5th, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing someone that is a part of life. A lovely write of need and desire for another. Lovely
August 5th, 2025 13:53
What I pray for
sorenbarrett said:
A highly religious piece it speaks to the heart of the believer. Nicely penned
April 5th, 2025 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
A highly religious piece it speaks to the heart of the believer. Nicely penned
April 5th, 2025 05:39
What I pray for
orchidee said:
Sounds like a prayer that will be answered. So too the somewhat shorter prayer \'Help, please Lord!\'
April 5th, 2025 02:17
orchidee said:
Sounds like a prayer that will be answered. So too the somewhat shorter prayer \'Help, please Lord!\'
April 5th, 2025 02:17
I prayed
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of prayer, one of good wishes and faith. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 03:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of prayer, one of good wishes and faith. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 03:01
Set me free
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and desire to be free, Lovely
February 23rd, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and desire to be free, Lovely
February 23rd, 2025 08:18
Can\\\\\\\'t sleep
L. B. Mek said:
\'And by the morning I\'m more tired than when I started\'
this is worded so relatable
I hope you find a solution
till then, remember
go easy on yourself
try to imagine
each and every
regret, event or happening
you experience
as one instance, of life
in and of itself
do not let them pile up
till, they become unmovable blockades
in your mind..
go easy on yourself, try to imagine
someone, somewhere
has experienced something similar
and survived...
stay strong! dear poet
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'And by the morning I\'m more tired than when I started\'
this is worded so relatable
I hope you find a solution
till then, remember
go easy on yourself
try to imagine
each and every
regret, event or happening
you experience
as one instance, of life
in and of itself
do not let them pile up
till, they become unmovable blockades
in your mind..
go easy on yourself, try to imagine
someone, somewhere
has experienced something similar
and survived...
stay strong! dear poet
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 06:08
Can\\\\\\\'t sleep
Christina8 said:
Sounds like the horrors of PTSD, I have that too....probably why I\'m awake too...Hope you feel better! Christina
January 27th, 2023 03:21
Christina8 said:
Sounds like the horrors of PTSD, I have that too....probably why I\'m awake too...Hope you feel better! Christina
January 27th, 2023 03:21
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