Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion
Things The Silence Taught Me
sorenbarrett said:
A belief and faith in a god. Well done
November 9th, 2026 19:01
sorenbarrett said:
A belief and faith in a god. Well done
November 9th, 2026 19:01
What Faith Knows
sorenbarrett said:
A poem on faith and reliance on belief. Nicely done Joseph
November 8th, 2026 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem on faith and reliance on belief. Nicely done Joseph
November 8th, 2026 14:42
The Breath You Are Taking Right Now
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt message clearly sent and a reminder not to procrastinate what can be done now. Well said
November 7th, 2026 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt message clearly sent and a reminder not to procrastinate what can be done now. Well said
November 7th, 2026 07:13
I Will Follow The Lord
sorenbarrett said:
No longer religious in a formal sense I still see the beauty in this poem. It reads so well with proclaimed strength in a conviction and has such good balance in meter and rhyme. It is well organized from beginning to end and ends so nicely. A fave my friend.
November 4th, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
No longer religious in a formal sense I still see the beauty in this poem. It reads so well with proclaimed strength in a conviction and has such good balance in meter and rhyme. It is well organized from beginning to end and ends so nicely. A fave my friend.
November 4th, 2026 11:46
Loving SomeOme Well
sorenbarrett said:
Spoken from the heart and good advise well written my friend, would that more people felt the same and more so lived it.
November 1st, 2026 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
Spoken from the heart and good advise well written my friend, would that more people felt the same and more so lived it.
November 1st, 2026 13:35
Loving SomeOme Well
cully45 said:
Brilliantly put together and covers every aspect of what true love should be like. Great work.Regards Owen
November 1st, 2026 13:23
cully45 said:
Brilliantly put together and covers every aspect of what true love should be like. Great work.Regards Owen
November 1st, 2026 13:23
Loving SomeOme Well
Friendship said:
Lovely written, my friend. Your poem shows that true love is not merely a collection of perfect moments or grand gestures; rather, it is built through everyday choices, patience, and commitment. and the qualities and actions that sustain love, emphasizing honesty, respect, and the willingness to nurture one another through both good times and bad.
November 1st, 2026 13:03
Friendship said:
Lovely written, my friend. Your poem shows that true love is not merely a collection of perfect moments or grand gestures; rather, it is built through everyday choices, patience, and commitment. and the qualities and actions that sustain love, emphasizing honesty, respect, and the willingness to nurture one another through both good times and bad.
November 1st, 2026 13:03
2027 Revelation
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written, convincing and menacing it tells the story of technology gone amuck and people with perverse and greedy inclinations to use it for control and their own purposes. There is no value system with technology for machines hold no values or integrity. What is real must be distinguished from false and this requires the integrity of humans that can not always be trusted. Nicely written with a hopeful ending. Let us hope.
October 31st, 2026 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written, convincing and menacing it tells the story of technology gone amuck and people with perverse and greedy inclinations to use it for control and their own purposes. There is no value system with technology for machines hold no values or integrity. What is real must be distinguished from false and this requires the integrity of humans that can not always be trusted. Nicely written with a hopeful ending. Let us hope.
October 31st, 2026 13:23
Something\'s Going On
sorenbarrett said:
I love the combination of the rhyme and message in this poem. I have felt it before an undistinguishable feeling that passes through and over a person. Well done my friend and a fave
October 29th, 2026 21:23
sorenbarrett said:
I love the combination of the rhyme and message in this poem. I have felt it before an undistinguishable feeling that passes through and over a person. Well done my friend and a fave
October 29th, 2026 21:23
Made Of Echoes
sorenbarrett said:
Creation and life itself encapsulated in this poem. Nicely written and a fave
October 28th, 2026 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Creation and life itself encapsulated in this poem. Nicely written and a fave
October 28th, 2026 09:41
The Raw Me
sorenbarrett said:
A great message Joseph. Nicely written if one is left with love one is rich.
October 27th, 2026 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great message Joseph. Nicely written if one is left with love one is rich.
October 27th, 2026 11:44
When one goes silent
Novaselic said:
The feeling of having that emotional turmoil exists that most people hide it well that you could never tell that they’re suffering. It’s very sad but I feel this poem brings light to that and I’d say it was well written. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2026 10:07
Novaselic said:
The feeling of having that emotional turmoil exists that most people hide it well that you could never tell that they’re suffering. It’s very sad but I feel this poem brings light to that and I’d say it was well written. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2026 10:07
When one goes silent
sorenbarrett said:
Deceived and terribly so. A poem of indecision that leads to silence and demise. Well done my friend
October 23rd, 2026 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
Deceived and terribly so. A poem of indecision that leads to silence and demise. Well done my friend
October 23rd, 2026 09:14
What Keeps Us Alive
sorenbarrett said:
An all encompassing definition of love. Nicely set in lines each defining another thing. Well done Joseph.
October 21st, 2026 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
An all encompassing definition of love. Nicely set in lines each defining another thing. Well done Joseph.
October 21st, 2026 12:30
A Few Who Watch
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite parts of this are the beginning and end they speak in such good rhyme and meter. Very nicely done Joseph
October 18th, 2026 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite parts of this are the beginning and end they speak in such good rhyme and meter. Very nicely done Joseph
October 18th, 2026 19:00
When the World Feels Heavy
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Some days\' I have felt too. Now the warm hand is there. Your poem is very relatable. Many thanks.
October 14th, 2026 16:15
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Some days\' I have felt too. Now the warm hand is there. Your poem is very relatable. Many thanks.
October 14th, 2026 16:15
When the World Feels Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels supportive and warm with support from the outside. Nicely done Joseph it speaks to me.
October 14th, 2026 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels supportive and warm with support from the outside. Nicely done Joseph it speaks to me.
October 14th, 2026 09:26
I\'m not okay
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a metaphor for the armor one feels when secure in a belief or faith of a higher power. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a metaphor for the armor one feels when secure in a belief or faith of a higher power. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 19:35
When I am tired
Black Willow said:
Beautiful poetry! Thank you, this gives me so much hope.
October 8th, 2026 09:02
Black Willow said:
Beautiful poetry! Thank you, this gives me so much hope.
October 8th, 2026 09:02
I\'ve waited a thousand lifetimes
sorenbarrett said:
Gaia the Greek earth goddess all makes sense. Nicely done Joseph
October 2nd, 2026 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
Gaia the Greek earth goddess all makes sense. Nicely done Joseph
October 2nd, 2026 17:44
Thankful lesson of life.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of gratitude for all one has. Especially for love and a partner to share it with. Here gratitude is given to one\'s God. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2026 17:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of gratitude for all one has. Especially for love and a partner to share it with. Here gratitude is given to one\'s God. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2026 17:27
Blessed To Rise
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and a call to others to recognize and acknowledge gratitude for what we have and are. Well done my friend
September 22nd, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and a call to others to recognize and acknowledge gratitude for what we have and are. Well done my friend
September 22nd, 2026 12:58
We caused the Lord pain
2781 said:
Thou art worthy, O Lord, to receive glory and honour and power: for thou hast created all things, and for thy pleasure they are and were created.
September 19th, 2026 16:23
2781 said:
Thou art worthy, O Lord, to receive glory and honour and power: for thou hast created all things, and for thy pleasure they are and were created.
September 19th, 2026 16:23
We caused the Lord pain
Poeticdiplo said:
These lines are so impactful: \"But when the rain passes, how quickly we forget.
When blessing comes, we offer a hurried praise, a passing hallelujah, as if gratitude were something small, as if worship could be reduced to a moment instead of a way of life.
We ask Him for everything, then blame Him for the broken pieces. We call for His hand in our pain, yet ignore His presence in our peace.\"
Thank you for the timely reminder and challenge.
September 16th, 2026 14:07
Poeticdiplo said:
These lines are so impactful: \"But when the rain passes, how quickly we forget.
When blessing comes, we offer a hurried praise, a passing hallelujah, as if gratitude were something small, as if worship could be reduced to a moment instead of a way of life.
We ask Him for everything, then blame Him for the broken pieces. We call for His hand in our pain, yet ignore His presence in our peace.\"
Thank you for the timely reminder and challenge.
September 16th, 2026 14:07
We caused the Lord pain
sorenbarrett said:
Well written human nature is shameless and self centered. A call for becoming better. Nicely said.
September 16th, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Well written human nature is shameless and self centered. A call for becoming better. Nicely said.
September 16th, 2026 12:44
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