Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion



Pay Attention
Poetic Licence said:

Very nicely written warning to people to follow and adhere to the word of their Lord

October 11th, 2025 15:09

Pay Attention
sorenbarrett said:

A religious warning in poetic form admonishing all to adhere to the word of the Lord. Well written

October 11th, 2025 11:15

YOU
sorenbarrett said:



October 7th, 2025 16:44

YOU
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of gratitude and joy over another. Most lovely and well worded it cries out for others to hear. Well done

October 7th, 2025 16:44

Silent War
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write in metaphor of all that we fight and face each day. Nicely expressed in poetic form

October 7th, 2025 03:59

Silent War
David Welch said:

There\'s always the fight...liked it.

October 6th, 2025 21:55

Enchanting Call
sorenbarrett said:

So well rhymed and with such good flow this poem speaks of worship beyond love. Well done

September 15th, 2025 15:48

Birth of Mothergaia
Poetic Licence said:

A nicely crafted spritual write around the well being of this wonderful planet and all its life forms, enjoyed the read

August 18th, 2025 06:44

Birth of Mothergaia
sorenbarrett said:

A spiritual poem that embodies the health of the planet and its life forms. Nicely written it feels surreally green. Nicely done

August 18th, 2025 04:14

Deepest Confession
sorenbarrett said:

Fear a strong governing force pervades this poem. Lovely

August 10th, 2025 19:55

Without You
Poetic Licence said:

A heartfelt and passionate declaration of ongoing love for their wife, nicely expressed and written

August 5th, 2025 13:56

Without You
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of missing someone that is a part of life. A lovely write of need and desire for another. Lovely

August 5th, 2025 13:53

What I pray for
sorenbarrett said:

A highly religious piece it speaks to the heart of the believer. Nicely penned

April 5th, 2025 05:39

What I pray for
orchidee said:

Sounds like a prayer that will be answered. So too the somewhat shorter prayer \'Help, please Lord!\'

April 5th, 2025 02:17

I prayed
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

Amen!!!

April 3rd, 2025 13:43

I prayed
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of prayer, one of good wishes and faith. Nicely written

April 3rd, 2025 03:01

Set me free
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of faith and desire to be free, Lovely

February 23rd, 2025 08:18

Set me free
arqios said:

Yes, to be set free! Beautiful 🙏🏻🕊

February 23rd, 2025 07:47

I thanked him
Thomas W Case said:

Superb

November 19th, 2023 19:10

We all know
2781 said:

Amen.

July 21st, 2023 02:32

We all know
Joseph M Marion said:



July 21st, 2023 00:17

I want
orchidee said:

I want to say - good write J.

July 19th, 2023 01:52

Beyond Comprehension
Joseph M Marion said:



June 11th, 2023 16:07

God\'s plan
orchidee said:

Good write J.

January 28th, 2023 03:52

Can\\\\\\\'t sleep
L. B. Mek said:

\'And by the morning I\'m more tired than when I started\'
this is worded so relatable
I hope you find a solution
till then, remember
go easy on yourself
try to imagine
each and every
regret, event or happening
you experience
as one instance, of life
in and of itself
do not let them pile up
till, they become unmovable blockades
in your mind..
go easy on yourself, try to imagine
someone, somewhere
has experienced something similar
and survived...
stay strong! dear poet
thanks for sharing


January 27th, 2023 06:08

Can\\\\\\\'t sleep
Christina8 said:

Sounds like the horrors of PTSD, I have that too....probably why I\'m awake too...Hope you feel better! Christina

January 27th, 2023 03:21

Can\\\\\\\'t sleep
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

:( very intriguing poetry, \"Joseph\". > :(

January 26th, 2023 18:39

Truth to beauty
L. B. Mek said:

to utilise, eyes
that can identify, beauty
from the truth of that person
before you
is a gift of wisdom, we must
strive , hard
to cultivate
in every, shared moment
in every, shared conversation
in every, lingering
eye to eye, sharing of ourselves..
be it females, males or other
it makes little difference
the formula remains the same:
\'To be truly beautiful, to really surpass all others,
you must glance into her soul. Surrounded by her aura,
cradled in her essence, this is the place of true beauty.
Its reflection sharper then the calmest waters of a fountain.
A soul of true spirituality. Its here that beauty is truly found. Forever tranquil, in the endless memories that
each time you meet her impress themselves into your heart mind ,body, soul.\'
(really well written, thanks for sharing)
I read and learn

May 12th, 2022 03:40

Truth to beauty
voices of ghosts said:

very lovely full of wisdom
an amazing read, thanks for sharing ✌

May 11th, 2022 22:54

To my Father
orchidee said:

Good write J.

December 14th, 2021 02:31

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