Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion
We caused the Lord pain
Poeticdiplo said:
These lines are so impactful: \"But when the rain passes, how quickly we forget.
When blessing comes, we offer a hurried praise, a passing hallelujah, as if gratitude were something small, as if worship could be reduced to a moment instead of a way of life.
We ask Him for everything, then blame Him for the broken pieces. We call for His hand in our pain, yet ignore His presence in our peace.\"
Thank you for the timely reminder and challenge.
September 16th, 2026 14:07
Poeticdiplo said:
These lines are so impactful: \"But when the rain passes, how quickly we forget.
When blessing comes, we offer a hurried praise, a passing hallelujah, as if gratitude were something small, as if worship could be reduced to a moment instead of a way of life.
We ask Him for everything, then blame Him for the broken pieces. We call for His hand in our pain, yet ignore His presence in our peace.\"
Thank you for the timely reminder and challenge.
September 16th, 2026 14:07
We caused the Lord pain
sorenbarrett said:
Well written human nature is shameless and self centered. A call for becoming better. Nicely said.
September 16th, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Well written human nature is shameless and self centered. A call for becoming better. Nicely said.
September 16th, 2026 12:44
We caused the Lord pain
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem is to inspire a return to genuine faith and gratitude. I love your encouragement to us readers to recognize the blessings in our lives and to nurture a deeper relationship with God.
September 16th, 2026 11:40
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem is to inspire a return to genuine faith and gratitude. I love your encouragement to us readers to recognize the blessings in our lives and to nurture a deeper relationship with God.
September 16th, 2026 11:40
What Was Lost In A Lie
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of how words carry power and one should be careful of how they are used. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of how words carry power and one should be careful of how they are used. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 13:58
The Lord\'s Love Eternal
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words and a strong write. Nicely done Joseph
September 11th, 2026 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words and a strong write. Nicely done Joseph
September 11th, 2026 13:02
A Tearful Prayer Of Thanks
arqios said:
A very inspiring dedicatory prayer/poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 4th, 2026 06:46
arqios said:
A very inspiring dedicatory prayer/poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 4th, 2026 06:46
A Tearful Prayer Of Thanks
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of grateful thanks nicely penned
September 3rd, 2026 20:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of grateful thanks nicely penned
September 3rd, 2026 20:35
A Tearful Prayer Of Thanks
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around faith and gratitude. You express a deep reliance on God during difficult times, recognizing His mercy and strength as sources of comfort and hope. May your grandfather be at peace.🙏❤️🙏
September 3rd, 2026 18:29
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around faith and gratitude. You express a deep reliance on God during difficult times, recognizing His mercy and strength as sources of comfort and hope. May your grandfather be at peace.🙏❤️🙏
September 3rd, 2026 18:29
Unable to sleep
sorenbarrett said:
There are strong emotions in this poem, feelings of gratitude. It is very powerful.
September 2nd, 2026 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
There are strong emotions in this poem, feelings of gratitude. It is very powerful.
September 2nd, 2026 13:36
Wander why
sorenbarrett said:
There comes a time of enlightenment to many and you speak of it here. Nicely written
August 31st, 2026 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
There comes a time of enlightenment to many and you speak of it here. Nicely written
August 31st, 2026 20:25
Wander why
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem to me seems to explore the journey of self-discovery, spiritual awakening, and the quest for meaning in life. It reflects on the poet\'s evolution from a state of feeling out of place to finding peace and purpose through a deep connection with nature and spirituality.
August 31st, 2026 17:20
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem to me seems to explore the journey of self-discovery, spiritual awakening, and the quest for meaning in life. It reflects on the poet\'s evolution from a state of feeling out of place to finding peace and purpose through a deep connection with nature and spirituality.
August 31st, 2026 17:20
When I am tired
sorenbarrett said:
Stick with it. A poem of perseverance and continuing on. Well done
August 27th, 2026 19:06
sorenbarrett said:
Stick with it. A poem of perseverance and continuing on. Well done
August 27th, 2026 19:06
Touch by Grace
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute of gratitude displayed in this write. Nicely done
August 21st, 2026 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute of gratitude displayed in this write. Nicely done
August 21st, 2026 19:22
Held Through The Dark
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief well written
August 18th, 2026 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief well written
August 18th, 2026 12:02
She stood at The rim
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful tribute to a noble soul, well written with great images and allegory and a fave
August 11th, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful tribute to a noble soul, well written with great images and allegory and a fave
August 11th, 2026 08:42
Her Names Was Suzane
Friendship said:
A lovely written poem. Your poem deals with themes of love, courage, and redemption. It portrays the transformative power of love in overcoming pain and adversity. I love how you emphasize how one person\'s steadfast presence can provide comfort and strength during the most challenging times.
August 4th, 2026 09:21
Friendship said:
A lovely written poem. Your poem deals with themes of love, courage, and redemption. It portrays the transformative power of love in overcoming pain and adversity. I love how you emphasize how one person\'s steadfast presence can provide comfort and strength during the most challenging times.
August 4th, 2026 09:21
Her Names Was Suzane
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of a person that gives to others and makes a difference. Well done
August 4th, 2026 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of a person that gives to others and makes a difference. Well done
August 4th, 2026 08:10
One Last Time When A Person Dies.
sorenbarrett said:
The wording works so well in this piece. A lovely message that we all become what surrounds us as we pass. Very nicely written it is a fave
July 26th, 2026 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
The wording works so well in this piece. A lovely message that we all become what surrounds us as we pass. Very nicely written it is a fave
July 26th, 2026 14:26
One Last Time When A Person Dies.
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend. Your poem explores the lasting impact of a person\'s life, emphasizing that while the physical body may cease to exist, the traces left behind—through words, actions, and memories—continue to carry weight. It reflects on the nature of human relationships and the enduring influence of both positive and negative deeds.
July 26th, 2026 11:28
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend. Your poem explores the lasting impact of a person\'s life, emphasizing that while the physical body may cease to exist, the traces left behind—through words, actions, and memories—continue to carry weight. It reflects on the nature of human relationships and the enduring influence of both positive and negative deeds.
July 26th, 2026 11:28
Tribute to my hero Elon Musk I know him as my own brother
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tribute to a rather famous and wealthy man. Nicely said
July 18th, 2026 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tribute to a rather famous and wealthy man. Nicely said
July 18th, 2026 09:55
And What\'s To Come ,Cannot Be Undone
sorenbarrett said:
This appears to be a prophetic write almost of biblical stature. Well done
July 15th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
This appears to be a prophetic write almost of biblical stature. Well done
July 15th, 2026 03:48
Lord\'s Call To Michael
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds very biblical in style and wording as well as subject matter. Nicely written
July 13th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds very biblical in style and wording as well as subject matter. Nicely written
July 13th, 2026 04:01
In My Life Nobody Knows
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like the love that only a mother can give. Moving and powerful a wonderful poem
July 10th, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like the love that only a mother can give. Moving and powerful a wonderful poem
July 10th, 2026 11:46
In My Life Nobody Knows
2781 said:
Insomuch as you have done it unto one of the least of these my brethren, you have done it unto me.
July 10th, 2026 10:28
2781 said:
Insomuch as you have done it unto one of the least of these my brethren, you have done it unto me.
July 10th, 2026 10:28
My first light My guiding light
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic tribute to a loving care giver that helped you through a difficult time. Lovely
July 9th, 2026 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic tribute to a loving care giver that helped you through a difficult time. Lovely
July 9th, 2026 13:28
Revelations bring silence.
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem\'s themes are timeless, addressing questions of human existence and understanding that have persisted throughout history.
July 5th, 2026 19:41
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem\'s themes are timeless, addressing questions of human existence and understanding that have persisted throughout history.
July 5th, 2026 19:41
Revelations bring silence.
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem with such great descriptive images paired with great rhyme and flow. Very nicely done and a fave
July 5th, 2026 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem with such great descriptive images paired with great rhyme and flow. Very nicely done and a fave
July 5th, 2026 16:56
Not a revelation so I was told
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and dream like in a surrealistic way.
July 4th, 2026 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and dream like in a surrealistic way.
July 4th, 2026 17:36
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