Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion
Something\'s Going On
sorenbarrett said:
I love the combination of the rhyme and message in this poem. I have felt it before an undistinguishable feeling that passes through and over a person. Well done my friend and a fave
October 29th, 2026 21:23
sorenbarrett said:
I love the combination of the rhyme and message in this poem. I have felt it before an undistinguishable feeling that passes through and over a person. Well done my friend and a fave
October 29th, 2026 21:23
Made Of Echoes
sorenbarrett said:
Creation and life itself encapsulated in this poem. Nicely written and a fave
October 28th, 2026 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Creation and life itself encapsulated in this poem. Nicely written and a fave
October 28th, 2026 09:41
The Raw Me
sorenbarrett said:
A great message Joseph. Nicely written if one is left with love one is rich.
October 27th, 2026 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great message Joseph. Nicely written if one is left with love one is rich.
October 27th, 2026 11:44
When one goes silent
Novaselic said:
The feeling of having that emotional turmoil exists that most people hide it well that you could never tell that they’re suffering. It’s very sad but I feel this poem brings light to that and I’d say it was well written. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2026 10:07
Novaselic said:
The feeling of having that emotional turmoil exists that most people hide it well that you could never tell that they’re suffering. It’s very sad but I feel this poem brings light to that and I’d say it was well written. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2026 10:07
When one goes silent
sorenbarrett said:
Deceived and terribly so. A poem of indecision that leads to silence and demise. Well done my friend
October 23rd, 2026 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
Deceived and terribly so. A poem of indecision that leads to silence and demise. Well done my friend
October 23rd, 2026 09:14
What Keeps Us Alive
sorenbarrett said:
An all encompassing definition of love. Nicely set in lines each defining another thing. Well done Joseph.
October 21st, 2026 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
An all encompassing definition of love. Nicely set in lines each defining another thing. Well done Joseph.
October 21st, 2026 12:30
A Few Who Watch
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite parts of this are the beginning and end they speak in such good rhyme and meter. Very nicely done Joseph
October 18th, 2026 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite parts of this are the beginning and end they speak in such good rhyme and meter. Very nicely done Joseph
October 18th, 2026 19:00
When the World Feels Heavy
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Some days\' I have felt too. Now the warm hand is there. Your poem is very relatable. Many thanks.
October 14th, 2026 16:15
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Some days\' I have felt too. Now the warm hand is there. Your poem is very relatable. Many thanks.
October 14th, 2026 16:15
When the World Feels Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels supportive and warm with support from the outside. Nicely done Joseph it speaks to me.
October 14th, 2026 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels supportive and warm with support from the outside. Nicely done Joseph it speaks to me.
October 14th, 2026 09:26
I\'m not okay
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a metaphor for the armor one feels when secure in a belief or faith of a higher power. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a metaphor for the armor one feels when secure in a belief or faith of a higher power. Nicely done
October 12th, 2026 19:35
When I am tired
Black Willow said:
Beautiful poetry! Thank you, this gives me so much hope.
October 8th, 2026 09:02
Black Willow said:
Beautiful poetry! Thank you, this gives me so much hope.
October 8th, 2026 09:02
I\'ve waited a thousand lifetimes
sorenbarrett said:
Gaia the Greek earth goddess all makes sense. Nicely done Joseph
October 2nd, 2026 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
Gaia the Greek earth goddess all makes sense. Nicely done Joseph
October 2nd, 2026 17:44
Thankful lesson of life.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of gratitude for all one has. Especially for love and a partner to share it with. Here gratitude is given to one\'s God. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2026 17:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of gratitude for all one has. Especially for love and a partner to share it with. Here gratitude is given to one\'s God. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2026 17:27
Blessed To Rise
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and a call to others to recognize and acknowledge gratitude for what we have and are. Well done my friend
September 22nd, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and a call to others to recognize and acknowledge gratitude for what we have and are. Well done my friend
September 22nd, 2026 12:58
We caused the Lord pain
2781 said:
Thou art worthy, O Lord, to receive glory and honour and power: for thou hast created all things, and for thy pleasure they are and were created.
September 19th, 2026 16:23
2781 said:
Thou art worthy, O Lord, to receive glory and honour and power: for thou hast created all things, and for thy pleasure they are and were created.
September 19th, 2026 16:23
We caused the Lord pain
Poeticdiplo said:
These lines are so impactful: \"But when the rain passes, how quickly we forget.
When blessing comes, we offer a hurried praise, a passing hallelujah, as if gratitude were something small, as if worship could be reduced to a moment instead of a way of life.
We ask Him for everything, then blame Him for the broken pieces. We call for His hand in our pain, yet ignore His presence in our peace.\"
Thank you for the timely reminder and challenge.
September 16th, 2026 14:07
Poeticdiplo said:
These lines are so impactful: \"But when the rain passes, how quickly we forget.
When blessing comes, we offer a hurried praise, a passing hallelujah, as if gratitude were something small, as if worship could be reduced to a moment instead of a way of life.
We ask Him for everything, then blame Him for the broken pieces. We call for His hand in our pain, yet ignore His presence in our peace.\"
Thank you for the timely reminder and challenge.
September 16th, 2026 14:07
We caused the Lord pain
sorenbarrett said:
Well written human nature is shameless and self centered. A call for becoming better. Nicely said.
September 16th, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Well written human nature is shameless and self centered. A call for becoming better. Nicely said.
September 16th, 2026 12:44
We caused the Lord pain
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem is to inspire a return to genuine faith and gratitude. I love your encouragement to us readers to recognize the blessings in our lives and to nurture a deeper relationship with God.
September 16th, 2026 11:40
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem is to inspire a return to genuine faith and gratitude. I love your encouragement to us readers to recognize the blessings in our lives and to nurture a deeper relationship with God.
September 16th, 2026 11:40
What Was Lost In A Lie
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of how words carry power and one should be careful of how they are used. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of how words carry power and one should be careful of how they are used. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 13:58
The Lord\'s Love Eternal
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words and a strong write. Nicely done Joseph
September 11th, 2026 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words and a strong write. Nicely done Joseph
September 11th, 2026 13:02
A Tearful Prayer Of Thanks
arqios said:
A very inspiring dedicatory prayer/poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 4th, 2026 06:46
arqios said:
A very inspiring dedicatory prayer/poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 4th, 2026 06:46
A Tearful Prayer Of Thanks
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of grateful thanks nicely penned
September 3rd, 2026 20:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of grateful thanks nicely penned
September 3rd, 2026 20:35
A Tearful Prayer Of Thanks
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around faith and gratitude. You express a deep reliance on God during difficult times, recognizing His mercy and strength as sources of comfort and hope. May your grandfather be at peace.🙏❤️🙏
September 3rd, 2026 18:29
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around faith and gratitude. You express a deep reliance on God during difficult times, recognizing His mercy and strength as sources of comfort and hope. May your grandfather be at peace.🙏❤️🙏
September 3rd, 2026 18:29
Unable to sleep
sorenbarrett said:
There are strong emotions in this poem, feelings of gratitude. It is very powerful.
September 2nd, 2026 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
There are strong emotions in this poem, feelings of gratitude. It is very powerful.
September 2nd, 2026 13:36
Wander why
sorenbarrett said:
There comes a time of enlightenment to many and you speak of it here. Nicely written
August 31st, 2026 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
There comes a time of enlightenment to many and you speak of it here. Nicely written
August 31st, 2026 20:25
Wander why
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem to me seems to explore the journey of self-discovery, spiritual awakening, and the quest for meaning in life. It reflects on the poet\'s evolution from a state of feeling out of place to finding peace and purpose through a deep connection with nature and spirituality.
August 31st, 2026 17:20
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem to me seems to explore the journey of self-discovery, spiritual awakening, and the quest for meaning in life. It reflects on the poet\'s evolution from a state of feeling out of place to finding peace and purpose through a deep connection with nature and spirituality.
August 31st, 2026 17:20
When I am tired
sorenbarrett said:
Stick with it. A poem of perseverance and continuing on. Well done
August 27th, 2026 19:06
sorenbarrett said:
Stick with it. A poem of perseverance and continuing on. Well done
August 27th, 2026 19:06
Touch by Grace
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute of gratitude displayed in this write. Nicely done
August 21st, 2026 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute of gratitude displayed in this write. Nicely done
August 21st, 2026 19:22
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