Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion
The awful grace of God
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief in a God and his place in life. Wonderfully rhymed and done
January 10th, 2026 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief in a God and his place in life. Wonderfully rhymed and done
January 10th, 2026 13:54
Fate
sorenbarrett said:
Choice of destiny is the old question and here there are many that have little faith in destiny. A lovely write
January 4th, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
Choice of destiny is the old question and here there are many that have little faith in destiny. A lovely write
January 4th, 2026 12:58
Her love His salvation
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of giving and saving so well written a poem of gratitude and a fave.
January 2nd, 2026 21:57
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of giving and saving so well written a poem of gratitude and a fave.
January 2nd, 2026 21:57
New year with new light with God who is our Lord
sorenbarrett said:
A good write for the season and a Happy New Year to you as well
December 31st, 2025 20:55
sorenbarrett said:
A good write for the season and a Happy New Year to you as well
December 31st, 2025 20:55
Fire in her eyes
sorenbarrett said:
Loved in so many ways by so many different people. Lovely
December 8th, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
Loved in so many ways by so many different people. Lovely
December 8th, 2025 15:07
Before Your Throne, I Humbly Kneel
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of the giver and relationship to them. Nicely crafted
November 26th, 2025 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of the giver and relationship to them. Nicely crafted
November 26th, 2025 15:18
Searched a thousand life times
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and with good flow this poem takes the reader on a journey already traveled and yet to be journeyed in search of the perfect person. Nicely written.
November 20th, 2025 21:36
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and with good flow this poem takes the reader on a journey already traveled and yet to be journeyed in search of the perfect person. Nicely written.
November 20th, 2025 21:36
Pay Attention
jarcher54 said:
I am not a believer, but there\'s much sincere beauty in your piece.
I appreciate that you don\'t threaten, only entreat, the reluctant reader. Way too much religious \"poetry\" becomes vain, aloof, and belittles the sincere wayward like me!
Carry on Joe. I am a fan.
November 14th, 2025 16:32
jarcher54 said:
I am not a believer, but there\'s much sincere beauty in your piece.
I appreciate that you don\'t threaten, only entreat, the reluctant reader. Way too much religious \"poetry\" becomes vain, aloof, and belittles the sincere wayward like me!
Carry on Joe. I am a fan.
November 14th, 2025 16:32
Time to pass away
NafisaSB said:
such a lovely message that is true , and yet we live as if our days are not numbered
November 11th, 2025 23:28
NafisaSB said:
such a lovely message that is true , and yet we live as if our days are not numbered
November 11th, 2025 23:28
Time to pass away
jarcher54 said:
An old, tired theme... You bring it fresh life through enchanting images and sublime simplicity. No big words, but big effects. Very nice.
One hopefully constructive observation: Your diction is very natural, very honest. But the line \"Their echoes in our souls will stay\" through its manipulated word order slightly breaks the spell. I bet you can find a better way to say it and save the rhyme scheme.
November 10th, 2025 22:52
jarcher54 said:
An old, tired theme... You bring it fresh life through enchanting images and sublime simplicity. No big words, but big effects. Very nice.
One hopefully constructive observation: Your diction is very natural, very honest. But the line \"Their echoes in our souls will stay\" through its manipulated word order slightly breaks the spell. I bet you can find a better way to say it and save the rhyme scheme.
November 10th, 2025 22:52
Time to pass away
sorenbarrett said:
It reels like time is shortening and time has recently changed, it grows darker earlier this season of the year. Well written with good rhyme
November 10th, 2025 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
It reels like time is shortening and time has recently changed, it grows darker earlier this season of the year. Well written with good rhyme
November 10th, 2025 18:31
Why Can\'t They Hear Me
orchidee said:
Good write J. Yes, and I asked myself \'Why can\'t they hear ME?\' Then. daft as a brush, I realised I was in a soundproof room. Doh! lol.
November 6th, 2025 10:55
orchidee said:
Good write J. Yes, and I asked myself \'Why can\'t they hear ME?\' Then. daft as a brush, I realised I was in a soundproof room. Doh! lol.
November 6th, 2025 10:55
Why Can\'t They Hear Me
sorenbarrett said:
A most religious poem calling out for people to listen to God and hear his word. Nicely written it speaks to those that will not listen to the universe itself. Well done
November 6th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
A most religious poem calling out for people to listen to God and hear his word. Nicely written it speaks to those that will not listen to the universe itself. Well done
November 6th, 2025 04:24
Shadows Of The Battlefield
NinjaGirl said:
They fight with everything they have for us and come back to mental illness and isolation. Well-written and an important message.
November 2nd, 2025 21:46
NinjaGirl said:
They fight with everything they have for us and come back to mental illness and isolation. Well-written and an important message.
November 2nd, 2025 21:46
Shadows Of The Battlefield
Doggerel Dave said:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
November 2nd, 2025 17:39
Doggerel Dave said:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
November 2nd, 2025 17:39
Shadows Of The Battlefield
sorenbarrett said:
A poem long overdue for those that suffered the wounds of war physical or emotional. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem long overdue for those that suffered the wounds of war physical or emotional. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 13:03
Amongst Us, Unseen
Bella Shepard said:
This beautiful poem speaks to me of all the guardian angels who walk among us, whom we probably never acknowledge, but are always there for whom ever is in need. It speaks of genuine love and caring for our fellow human beings. Priceless my friend!
November 2nd, 2025 09:31
Bella Shepard said:
This beautiful poem speaks to me of all the guardian angels who walk among us, whom we probably never acknowledge, but are always there for whom ever is in need. It speaks of genuine love and caring for our fellow human beings. Priceless my friend!
November 2nd, 2025 09:31
Amongst Us, Unseen
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a guarding angel. Nicely rhymed and metered this poem walks along side the reader
November 1st, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a guarding angel. Nicely rhymed and metered this poem walks along side the reader
November 1st, 2025 11:34
To Convince You of My Love
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love in this poem sweetly written.
October 31st, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love in this poem sweetly written.
October 31st, 2025 12:34
Freedom’s Debt
NinjaGirl said:
\"For those who fought for it--freedom has a flavor the protected will never know.\" So many fought and lost for it. How honorable is it to die for one\'s country when both sides send young teens to fight each other?
October 20th, 2025 21:02
NinjaGirl said:
\"For those who fought for it--freedom has a flavor the protected will never know.\" So many fought and lost for it. How honorable is it to die for one\'s country when both sides send young teens to fight each other?
October 20th, 2025 21:02
Freedom’s Debt
sorenbarrett said:
A write of soldier valor and gratitude due. Well done
October 20th, 2025 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
A write of soldier valor and gratitude due. Well done
October 20th, 2025 19:40
Pay Attention
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written warning to people to follow and adhere to the word of their Lord
October 11th, 2025 15:09
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written warning to people to follow and adhere to the word of their Lord
October 11th, 2025 15:09
Pay Attention
sorenbarrett said:
A religious warning in poetic form admonishing all to adhere to the word of the Lord. Well written
October 11th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
A religious warning in poetic form admonishing all to adhere to the word of the Lord. Well written
October 11th, 2025 11:15
YOU
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and joy over another. Most lovely and well worded it cries out for others to hear. Well done
October 7th, 2025 16:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and joy over another. Most lovely and well worded it cries out for others to hear. Well done
October 7th, 2025 16:44
Silent War
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write in metaphor of all that we fight and face each day. Nicely expressed in poetic form
October 7th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write in metaphor of all that we fight and face each day. Nicely expressed in poetic form
October 7th, 2025 03:59
Enchanting Call
sorenbarrett said:
So well rhymed and with such good flow this poem speaks of worship beyond love. Well done
September 15th, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
So well rhymed and with such good flow this poem speaks of worship beyond love. Well done
September 15th, 2025 15:48
Birth of Mothergaia
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted spritual write around the well being of this wonderful planet and all its life forms, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 06:44
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted spritual write around the well being of this wonderful planet and all its life forms, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 06:44
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