Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion



Her Names Was Suzane
Friendship said:

A lovely written poem. Your poem deals with themes of love, courage, and redemption. It portrays the transformative power of love in overcoming pain and adversity. I love how you emphasize how one person\'s steadfast presence can provide comfort and strength during the most challenging times.

August 4th, 2026 09:21

Her Names Was Suzane
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem of a person that gives to others and makes a difference. Well done

August 4th, 2026 08:10

One Last Time When A Person Dies.
sorenbarrett said:

The wording works so well in this piece. A lovely message that we all become what surrounds us as we pass. Very nicely written it is a fave

July 26th, 2026 14:26

One Last Time When A Person Dies.
Friendship said:

Well written, my friend. Your poem explores the lasting impact of a person\'s life, emphasizing that while the physical body may cease to exist, the traces left behind—through words, actions, and memories—continue to carry weight. It reflects on the nature of human relationships and the enduring influence of both positive and negative deeds.

July 26th, 2026 11:28

Ache No One Sees
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely rhymed and written. Well done

July 25th, 2026 20:57

Tribute to my hero Elon Musk I know him as my own brother
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the tribute to a rather famous and wealthy man. Nicely said

July 18th, 2026 09:55

And What\'s To Come ,Cannot Be Undone
sorenbarrett said:

This appears to be a prophetic write almost of biblical stature. Well done

July 15th, 2026 03:48

Lord\'s Call To Michael
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds very biblical in style and wording as well as subject matter. Nicely written

July 13th, 2026 04:01

In My Life Nobody Knows
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds like the love that only a mother can give. Moving and powerful a wonderful poem

July 10th, 2026 11:46

In My Life Nobody Knows
2781 said:

Insomuch as you have done it unto one of the least of these my brethren, you have done it unto me.

July 10th, 2026 10:28

My first light My guiding light
Friendship said:

beautiful written

July 9th, 2026 18:06

My first light My guiding light
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic tribute to a loving care giver that helped you through a difficult time. Lovely

July 9th, 2026 13:28

Revelations bring silence.
Friendship said:

Well written. Your poem\'s themes are timeless, addressing questions of human existence and understanding that have persisted throughout history.

July 5th, 2026 19:41

Revelations bring silence.
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful poem with such great descriptive images paired with great rhyme and flow. Very nicely done and a fave

July 5th, 2026 16:56

Not a revelation so I was told
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful and dream like in a surrealistic way.

July 4th, 2026 17:36

No more second chances
sorenbarrett said:

We all run into the future whether we want to or not. A good write my friend

July 3rd, 2026 12:28

Destiny Deemed Me Worthy
sorenbarrett said:

A proclamation of love through destiny and time. Well written

June 29th, 2026 18:54

Beauty like I\'ve never seen
ms.divine said:

Beautiful read

June 26th, 2026 01:13

Beauty like I\'ve never seen
sorenbarrett said:

A testament and a tribute well written

June 25th, 2026 16:41

Beauty like I\'ve never seen
Friendship said:

Lovely written

June 25th, 2026 12:36

To My Father The Greatest Man Who Ever Lived
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful tribute to a father that stood as an idol and anchor. Well written

June 20th, 2026 12:27

To My Father The Greatest Man Who Ever Lived
Syd said:

My condolences. What an incredible tribute poem to an incredible man.

-Syd

June 20th, 2026 11:24

Powerful Tribute
sorenbarrett said:

Poetic, patriotic, prayer for soldiers in battle. Lovely and nicely written in rhyme and good flow. Well done my friend

June 20th, 2026 03:40

ENOUGH!
sorenbarrett said:

A dark poem of death nicely written with several good lines that image the shadows and shades one awaits. Well written

June 16th, 2026 14:20

I am still here
sorenbarrett said:

A most dark poem that wends its way toward hope in the end. Very nicely written in rhyme and good flow. Well done

June 12th, 2026 02:46

Revelation of things to come
sorenbarrett said:

A story of beliefs. Well done

June 4th, 2026 13:06

Visions I see
sorenbarrett said:

Biblical in proportion, prophetic in style it speaks to the present state of the world and what needs to happen. Well done

May 31st, 2026 14:40

Heart Speaks What Lips Can Not
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful write most beautifully written. There are very pretty lines here.

May 27th, 2026 11:39

At The Edge Of Death
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful poem of death and its transition from this life to another. Well done

May 19th, 2026 13:53

At The Edge Of Death
Cindy said:

Well written

May 19th, 2026 13:22

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