Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion
Can\\\\\\\'t sleep
L. B. Mek said:
\'And by the morning I\'m more tired than when I started\'
this is worded so relatable
I hope you find a solution
till then, remember
go easy on yourself
try to imagine
each and every
regret, event or happening
you experience
as one instance, of life
in and of itself
do not let them pile up
till, they become unmovable blockades
in your mind..
go easy on yourself, try to imagine
someone, somewhere
has experienced something similar
and survived...
stay strong! dear poet
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'And by the morning I\'m more tired than when I started\'
this is worded so relatable
I hope you find a solution
till then, remember
go easy on yourself
try to imagine
each and every
regret, event or happening
you experience
as one instance, of life
in and of itself
do not let them pile up
till, they become unmovable blockades
in your mind..
go easy on yourself, try to imagine
someone, somewhere
has experienced something similar
and survived...
stay strong! dear poet
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 06:08
Can\\\\\\\'t sleep
Christina8 said:
Sounds like the horrors of PTSD, I have that too....probably why I\'m awake too...Hope you feel better! Christina
January 27th, 2023 03:21
Christina8 said:
Sounds like the horrors of PTSD, I have that too....probably why I\'m awake too...Hope you feel better! Christina
January 27th, 2023 03:21
Truth to beauty
L. B. Mek said:
to utilise, eyes
that can identify, beauty
from the truth of that person
before you
is a gift of wisdom, we must
strive , hard
to cultivate
in every, shared moment
in every, shared conversation
in every, lingering
eye to eye, sharing of ourselves..
be it females, males or other
it makes little difference
the formula remains the same:
\'To be truly beautiful, to really surpass all others,
you must glance into her soul. Surrounded by her aura,
cradled in her essence, this is the place of true beauty.
Its reflection sharper then the calmest waters of a fountain.
A soul of true spirituality. Its here that beauty is truly found. Forever tranquil, in the endless memories that
each time you meet her impress themselves into your heart mind ,body, soul.\'
(really well written, thanks for sharing)
I read and learn
May 12th, 2022 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
to utilise, eyes
that can identify, beauty
from the truth of that person
before you
is a gift of wisdom, we must
strive , hard
to cultivate
in every, shared moment
in every, shared conversation
in every, lingering
eye to eye, sharing of ourselves..
be it females, males or other
it makes little difference
the formula remains the same:
\'To be truly beautiful, to really surpass all others,
you must glance into her soul. Surrounded by her aura,
cradled in her essence, this is the place of true beauty.
Its reflection sharper then the calmest waters of a fountain.
A soul of true spirituality. Its here that beauty is truly found. Forever tranquil, in the endless memories that
each time you meet her impress themselves into your heart mind ,body, soul.\'
(really well written, thanks for sharing)
I read and learn
May 12th, 2022 03:40
Truth to beauty
voices of ghosts said:
very lovely full of wisdom
an amazing read, thanks for sharing ✌
May 11th, 2022 22:54
voices of ghosts said:
very lovely full of wisdom
an amazing read, thanks for sharing ✌
May 11th, 2022 22:54
My Squeek
dusk arising said:
The poetry of unconditional love. I\'m sure all fathers can relate to this emotional write.
February 5th, 2021 10:07
dusk arising said:
The poetry of unconditional love. I\'m sure all fathers can relate to this emotional write.
February 5th, 2021 10:07
Last quest
BoxMyHeart said:
What a beautiful poem showing your sisters strength and love until her Passover. stay strong, keep the family going. Very touching piece of writing here.
October 24th, 2019 09:08
BoxMyHeart said:
What a beautiful poem showing your sisters strength and love until her Passover. stay strong, keep the family going. Very touching piece of writing here.
October 24th, 2019 09:08
Last quest
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, she will always be looking over you from her New Home.
February 12th, 2019 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, she will always be looking over you from her New Home.
February 12th, 2019 01:03
My days quest
Goldfinch60 said:
All any of us can do is our best but knowing that God is there with us will make life easier.
February 11th, 2019 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
All any of us can do is our best but knowing that God is there with us will make life easier.
February 11th, 2019 01:52
Dedicated to my sister I\'m sorry my sister
Goldfinch60 said:
Many condolences Joseph but she is free of pain now and will be her loved ones and with you as she watches over you.
February 10th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Many condolences Joseph but she is free of pain now and will be her loved ones and with you as she watches over you.
February 10th, 2019 01:49
Dedicated to my sister I\'m sorry my sister
Joseph M Marion said:
God bless you and family
February 9th, 2019 14:55
Joseph M Marion said:
God bless you and family
February 9th, 2019 14:55
Dedicated to my sister I\'m sorry my sister
Joseph M Marion said:
Thank you so much
February 9th, 2019 14:55
Joseph M Marion said:
Thank you so much
February 9th, 2019 14:55
Your true angel
psychofemale said:
this is lovely, what a refreshing piece :)
February 7th, 2019 19:22
psychofemale said:
this is lovely, what a refreshing piece :)
February 7th, 2019 19:22
Your true angel
Neville said:
You most certainly have got it bad my friend.. again tho, good luck to ya, just be careful not to frighten her away.... N
February 7th, 2019 12:50
Neville said:
You most certainly have got it bad my friend.. again tho, good luck to ya, just be careful not to frighten her away.... N
February 7th, 2019 12:50
Your true angel
Caleb.A said:
This piece speaks of a love that is pure and true - great write.
February 7th, 2019 12:16
Caleb.A said:
This piece speaks of a love that is pure and true - great write.
February 7th, 2019 12:16
My core
Fay Slimm. said:
So very romantic and honestly written this read touches the core of true love and is a pleasure to read Joseph.
February 6th, 2019 14:51
Fay Slimm. said:
So very romantic and honestly written this read touches the core of true love and is a pleasure to read Joseph.
February 6th, 2019 14:51
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