Comments received on poems by Joseph M Marion



Why Can\'t They Hear Me
orchidee said:

Good write J. Yes, and I asked myself \'Why can\'t they hear ME?\' Then. daft as a brush, I realised I was in a soundproof room. Doh! lol.

November 6th, 2025 10:55

Why Can\'t They Hear Me
sorenbarrett said:

A most religious poem calling out for people to listen to God and hear his word. Nicely written it speaks to those that will not listen to the universe itself. Well done

November 6th, 2025 04:24

Shadows Of The Battlefield
NinjaGirl said:

They fight with everything they have for us and come back to mental illness and isolation. Well-written and an important message.

November 2nd, 2025 21:46

Shadows Of The Battlefield
Doggerel Dave said:

https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343

November 2nd, 2025 17:39

Shadows Of The Battlefield
sorenbarrett said:

A poem long overdue for those that suffered the wounds of war physical or emotional. Nicely done

November 2nd, 2025 13:03

Amongst Us, Unseen
Bella Shepard said:

This beautiful poem speaks to me of all the guardian angels who walk among us, whom we probably never acknowledge, but are always there for whom ever is in need. It speaks of genuine love and caring for our fellow human beings. Priceless my friend!

November 2nd, 2025 09:31

Amongst Us, Unseen
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem of a guarding angel. Nicely rhymed and metered this poem walks along side the reader

November 1st, 2025 11:34

To Convince You of My Love
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October 31st, 2025 12:34

To Convince You of My Love
sorenbarrett said:

A pledge of love in this poem sweetly written.

October 31st, 2025 12:34

Freedom’s Debt
NinjaGirl said:

\"For those who fought for it--freedom has a flavor the protected will never know.\" So many fought and lost for it. How honorable is it to die for one\'s country when both sides send young teens to fight each other?

October 20th, 2025 21:02

Freedom’s Debt
sorenbarrett said:

A write of soldier valor and gratitude due. Well done

October 20th, 2025 19:40

Pay Attention
Poetic Licence said:

Very nicely written warning to people to follow and adhere to the word of their Lord

October 11th, 2025 15:09

Pay Attention
sorenbarrett said:

A religious warning in poetic form admonishing all to adhere to the word of the Lord. Well written

October 11th, 2025 11:15

YOU
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October 7th, 2025 16:44

YOU
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of gratitude and joy over another. Most lovely and well worded it cries out for others to hear. Well done

October 7th, 2025 16:44

Silent War
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write in metaphor of all that we fight and face each day. Nicely expressed in poetic form

October 7th, 2025 03:59

Silent War
David Welch said:

There\'s always the fight...liked it.

October 6th, 2025 21:55

Enchanting Call
sorenbarrett said:

So well rhymed and with such good flow this poem speaks of worship beyond love. Well done

September 15th, 2025 15:48

Birth of Mothergaia
Poetic Licence said:

A nicely crafted spritual write around the well being of this wonderful planet and all its life forms, enjoyed the read

August 18th, 2025 06:44

Birth of Mothergaia
sorenbarrett said:

A spiritual poem that embodies the health of the planet and its life forms. Nicely written it feels surreally green. Nicely done

August 18th, 2025 04:14

Deepest Confession
sorenbarrett said:

Fear a strong governing force pervades this poem. Lovely

August 10th, 2025 19:55

Without You
Poetic Licence said:

A heartfelt and passionate declaration of ongoing love for their wife, nicely expressed and written

August 5th, 2025 13:56

Without You
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of missing someone that is a part of life. A lovely write of need and desire for another. Lovely

August 5th, 2025 13:53

What I pray for
sorenbarrett said:

A highly religious piece it speaks to the heart of the believer. Nicely penned

April 5th, 2025 05:39

What I pray for
orchidee said:

Sounds like a prayer that will be answered. So too the somewhat shorter prayer \'Help, please Lord!\'

April 5th, 2025 02:17

I prayed
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

Amen!!!

April 3rd, 2025 13:43

I prayed
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of prayer, one of good wishes and faith. Nicely written

April 3rd, 2025 03:01

Set me free
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of faith and desire to be free, Lovely

February 23rd, 2025 08:18

Set me free
arqios said:

Yes, to be set free! Beautiful 🙏🏻🕊

February 23rd, 2025 07:47

I thanked him
Thomas W Case said:

Superb

November 19th, 2023 19:10

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