Comments received on poems by karen
someone someone alone
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Very sad poem, would like to work on it as a fusion poem; it has lots of promise if rewritten; I would like to do so if you don't mind. And then we could kick it back and forth and when finished you can post it as fusion. BWP... James... I like the realization in this work; because the realization is what makes this poem work.
March 11th, 2013 16:19
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Very sad poem, would like to work on it as a fusion poem; it has lots of promise if rewritten; I would like to do so if you don't mind. And then we could kick it back and forth and when finished you can post it as fusion. BWP... James... I like the realization in this work; because the realization is what makes this poem work.
March 11th, 2013 16:19
Live in Success
Dolphine29 said:
Interesting poem, what I can see is a reflection of authenticity and that will always lead the way to make our dreams come true.
Best,
February 29th, 2012 14:40
Dolphine29 said:
Interesting poem, what I can see is a reflection of authenticity and that will always lead the way to make our dreams come true.
Best,
February 29th, 2012 14:40
Confusing Poems
Cheeky Missy said:
An interesting reflection, offered as a private little muse. After all, it is apparently commonly believed that poetry is essentially nonsense. And from such an assessment some folk seem inclined to write unintelligibly, persuaded that they have written a wonderful piece of art. That folly seems all part and parcel of modern thought and the tendency to throw out all rules and redefine truth and right until we imagine that the mere essentials to make art are art in themselves. Interesting discussion and provocative.
February 2nd, 2012 20:45
Cheeky Missy said:
An interesting reflection, offered as a private little muse. After all, it is apparently commonly believed that poetry is essentially nonsense. And from such an assessment some folk seem inclined to write unintelligibly, persuaded that they have written a wonderful piece of art. That folly seems all part and parcel of modern thought and the tendency to throw out all rules and redefine truth and right until we imagine that the mere essentials to make art are art in themselves. Interesting discussion and provocative.
February 2nd, 2012 20:45
What do I want to be?
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, excellent tribute to the dilemma set before youngsters, presuming that we have any real choice in the affair anyway. Who doesn't know the scenario well? Beautiful. Maybe you'll be granted to achieve what you set your desire upon, and maybe not. May you at least be blessed by the Lord with salvation.
February 1st, 2012 14:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, excellent tribute to the dilemma set before youngsters, presuming that we have any real choice in the affair anyway. Who doesn't know the scenario well? Beautiful. Maybe you'll be granted to achieve what you set your desire upon, and maybe not. May you at least be blessed by the Lord with salvation.
February 1st, 2012 14:44
