Comments received on poems by PACollin
Depression and Fidelity
smallest_stars said:
At first I thought it was a literal story about a plane crash, but got to the \"keep the sharks of your soul from circling below\" part and realized it wasn\'t.
I love the imagery of it all and what a powerful poem. Awesome job.
June 15th, 2018 08:07
smallest_stars said:
At first I thought it was a literal story about a plane crash, but got to the \"keep the sharks of your soul from circling below\" part and realized it wasn\'t.
I love the imagery of it all and what a powerful poem. Awesome job.
June 15th, 2018 08:07
An April Snow
SLR said:
We\'ve had a bit of spring but summer is already pushing it away. We\'re having 90°f weather already! I want spring back too! Great descriptive write.
May 18th, 2018 19:02
SLR said:
We\'ve had a bit of spring but summer is already pushing it away. We\'re having 90°f weather already! I want spring back too! Great descriptive write.
May 18th, 2018 19:02
Sumon the Refugee
Laura🌻 said:
The hope is HOPE itself!
He’s optimistic and hopeful.
He will carve a better path
to a better tomorrow!
Love and prayers are with him!
October 26th, 2017 08:33
Laura🌻 said:
The hope is HOPE itself!
He’s optimistic and hopeful.
He will carve a better path
to a better tomorrow!
Love and prayers are with him!
October 26th, 2017 08:33
Sumon the Refugee
Verta said:
Very deep. Hopefully he\'s found his path to a better tomorrow
October 25th, 2017 23:34
Verta said:
Very deep. Hopefully he\'s found his path to a better tomorrow
October 25th, 2017 23:34
The Mountain
Christina8 said:
I\'ve been there for 15 years. An amazing write!
October 19th, 2017 19:42
Christina8 said:
I\'ve been there for 15 years. An amazing write!
October 19th, 2017 19:42
The Mountain
Laura🌻 said:
Been there...done that!
We’re still together...40 years later!
Wish you the best!
October 19th, 2017 14:36
Laura🌻 said:
Been there...done that!
We’re still together...40 years later!
Wish you the best!
October 19th, 2017 14:36
Mother\'s Day
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful write! Caring, sensitive, loving...Very relatable to me and my husband! I had to share it with him!
October 17th, 2017 14:29
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful write! Caring, sensitive, loving...Very relatable to me and my husband! I had to share it with him!
October 17th, 2017 14:29
Grief at the Door
Louis Gibbs said:
A tragic, well expressed poem of loss, PA! The reader shares the sad journey with you. Kudos!
October 15th, 2017 11:58
Louis Gibbs said:
A tragic, well expressed poem of loss, PA! The reader shares the sad journey with you. Kudos!
October 15th, 2017 11:58
Awe
MendedFences27 said:
I once said something to the effect that life is sorted into \"moments\" and \"memories.\" I could not agree more with the meaning of your poem. I believe you have expressed it most dramatically. A well written poem. - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 13:29
MendedFences27 said:
I once said something to the effect that life is sorted into \"moments\" and \"memories.\" I could not agree more with the meaning of your poem. I believe you have expressed it most dramatically. A well written poem. - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 13:29
#34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the streams of first love combine in your souls and you sail the oceans together.
Welcome to MPS.
October 13th, 2017 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the streams of first love combine in your souls and you sail the oceans together.
Welcome to MPS.
October 13th, 2017 00:25
