Comments received on poems by PACollin



Depression and Fidelity
smallest_stars said:

At first I thought it was a literal story about a plane crash, but got to the \"keep the sharks of your soul from circling below\" part and realized it wasn\'t.

I love the imagery of it all and what a powerful poem. Awesome job.

June 15th, 2018 08:07

Depression and Fidelity
Lisa Kibble said:

I love this.

June 15th, 2018 00:22

Depression and Fidelity
willyweed said:

quite the yarn you spin. write on ww

June 14th, 2018 18:22

An April Snow
SLR said:

We\'ve had a bit of spring but summer is already pushing it away. We\'re having 90°f weather already! I want spring back too! Great descriptive write.

May 18th, 2018 19:02

The Balloon
PACollin said:

Thank you for taking time to read and comment


November 13th, 2017 17:58

The Balloon
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed

November 9th, 2017 13:33

The Balloon
orchidee said:

Sensitive write.

November 9th, 2017 12:11

Sumon the Refugee
Laura🌻 said:

The hope is HOPE itself!
He’s optimistic and hopeful.
He will carve a better path
to a better tomorrow!
Love and prayers are with him!

October 26th, 2017 08:33

Sumon the Refugee
Verta said:

Very deep. Hopefully he\'s found his path to a better tomorrow

October 25th, 2017 23:34

The Mountain
Christina8 said:

I\'ve been there for 15 years. An amazing write!

October 19th, 2017 19:42

The Mountain
Laura🌻 said:

Been there...done that!
We’re still together...40 years later!
Wish you the best!

October 19th, 2017 14:36

Mother\'s Day
Laura🌻 said:

Beautiful write! Caring, sensitive, loving...Very relatable to me and my husband! I had to share it with him!

October 17th, 2017 14:29

Grief at the Door
Louis Gibbs said:

A tragic, well expressed poem of loss, PA! The reader shares the sad journey with you. Kudos!

October 15th, 2017 11:58

Awe
MendedFences27 said:

I once said something to the effect that life is sorted into \"moments\" and \"memories.\" I could not agree more with the meaning of your poem. I believe you have expressed it most dramatically. A well written poem. - Phil A.

October 13th, 2017 13:29

Awe
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 13th, 2017 13:11

#34
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, the streams of first love combine in your souls and you sail the oceans together.
Welcome to MPS.

October 13th, 2017 00:25