Comments received on poems by olivergreenwood19



FUCK YOU
dusk arising said:

Good unpretentious writing.. no waffle, succinct. Gutsy.

November 5th, 2017 12:00

FUCK YOU
dtyrrell145 said:

this is so beautiful, you expressed your thoughts so vividly x

November 5th, 2017 11:02

Eden
Cranial Tapestry said:

I love this! the twist at the end was really cool (and true!). I really enjoyed this piece. Well done!

November 5th, 2017 09:40

Eden
dtyrrell145 said:

this is pure and s carefully written i am absorbed by how you you twisted the end, i totally understand the picture and love it x

November 4th, 2017 19:39

Eden
FredPeyer said:

Well written, with good flow.
Just look what one apple got us!

November 4th, 2017 19:39

Apple
gstoy said:

I honestly think you have such beatiful mind. Thanks for sharing (:

November 3rd, 2017 19:34

Apple
FredPeyer said:

Welcome to the wonderful world of technology, cyber media, and instant communication!
You wrote a very good poem, oliver!
I like \'fabricated lives of others\', \'likes stimulating our brain\', \'blinded by the blue light of our screens\'.
And the last two lines say it all!

November 3rd, 2017 12:52

Marble
Mugsdaddy said:

Amazing
Mugsdaddy

November 2nd, 2017 23:31

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