Comments received on poems by olivergreenwood19
InSaNiTy
GON said:
Meh. I doubt you\'ve lost your mind. Besides, true insanity, or at least the scary insanity, is the insanity that isn\'t even remotely self-aware.
February 20th, 2018 13:25
GON said:
Meh. I doubt you\'ve lost your mind. Besides, true insanity, or at least the scary insanity, is the insanity that isn\'t even remotely self-aware.
February 20th, 2018 13:25
Dreams
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes the dreams and memories are all we have. Well penned, Oliver!
February 15th, 2018 16:29
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes the dreams and memories are all we have. Well penned, Oliver!
February 15th, 2018 16:29
Dreams
Resa71 said:
I really like your poem!
It gave me chills when I read it because, I relate to it so deeply.
If you get a chance, read my poem tittled “Real “ and a couple others.
You’ll see what I mean. :)
February 14th, 2018 13:57
Resa71 said:
I really like your poem!
It gave me chills when I read it because, I relate to it so deeply.
If you get a chance, read my poem tittled “Real “ and a couple others.
You’ll see what I mean. :)
February 14th, 2018 13:57
3:34 A.M.
orchidee said:
Erm, more like about 6.34am for us in the UK at the moment - the dawn!
February 9th, 2018 09:41
orchidee said:
Erm, more like about 6.34am for us in the UK at the moment - the dawn!
February 9th, 2018 09:41
3:34 A.M.
orchidee said:
Good write Oliver. Doh! I missed all that. I was asleep. I must wake up at 3.34am. Will it still be there at 3.35am?! heehee.
February 9th, 2018 09:41
orchidee said:
Good write Oliver. Doh! I missed all that. I was asleep. I must wake up at 3.34am. Will it still be there at 3.35am?! heehee.
February 9th, 2018 09:41
Forget
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, Oliver! But why is it that we forget things we should remember and remember things we should forget?
January 18th, 2018 16:33
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, Oliver! But why is it that we forget things we should remember and remember things we should forget?
January 18th, 2018 16:33
L-O-V-E
Aislinn Wilson said:
The emotions are positively flagrant. Very affecting piece
January 16th, 2018 12:22
Aislinn Wilson said:
The emotions are positively flagrant. Very affecting piece
January 16th, 2018 12:22
Monster
dusk arising said:
Yep, the world doesnt look too kindly on monsters does it? Adolf Hitler, Idi Amin, Josef Stalin etc.
Are you really such a monster? They were real monsters and didnt look for excuses.
So just what are you? Other than a good poet who writes provocative verse.
Good writing.
January 9th, 2018 16:55
dusk arising said:
Yep, the world doesnt look too kindly on monsters does it? Adolf Hitler, Idi Amin, Josef Stalin etc.
Are you really such a monster? They were real monsters and didnt look for excuses.
So just what are you? Other than a good poet who writes provocative verse.
Good writing.
January 9th, 2018 16:55
Dying in the Wind
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Oliver, with an incredible metaphor.
December 16th, 2017 03:51
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Oliver, with an incredible metaphor.
December 16th, 2017 03:51
Fuck The Game
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes all it is is a game, and you either play, win or lose, or you get out.
Well written poem, Oliver!
November 22nd, 2017 13:00
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes all it is is a game, and you either play, win or lose, or you get out.
Well written poem, Oliver!
November 22nd, 2017 13:00
I hate you
FredPeyer said:
Most people remember only the bad. I like this turn-around to remembering the good! Well written!
November 15th, 2017 18:25
FredPeyer said:
Most people remember only the bad. I like this turn-around to remembering the good! Well written!
November 15th, 2017 18:25
Scars
SorrowfullyHappy said:
the story of my life great write but please dont cut ive found it fixes nothing
November 13th, 2017 14:25
SorrowfullyHappy said:
the story of my life great write but please dont cut ive found it fixes nothing
November 13th, 2017 14:25
Rain
Christina8 said:
Great poem, Oliver! Very heartfelt and well written. I find rain is comforting too. The last two lines revealed how you were truly feeling--I hope that changes soon. I hope you continue to write!
November 10th, 2017 18:12
Christina8 said:
Great poem, Oliver! Very heartfelt and well written. I find rain is comforting too. The last two lines revealed how you were truly feeling--I hope that changes soon. I hope you continue to write!
November 10th, 2017 18:12
Rain
orchidee said:
Good write Oliver. I better sing in the thunder then, so no-one will hear me. Can anyone bear to hear me?! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:54
orchidee said:
Good write Oliver. I better sing in the thunder then, so no-one will hear me. Can anyone bear to hear me?! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:54
Rain
FredPeyer said:
oliver, I really like your use of the rain metaphor to touch on all our emotions, our problems, and moods. Did not expect that last line, but understand it.
Good poem, Kudos!
November 10th, 2017 00:45
FredPeyer said:
oliver, I really like your use of the rain metaphor to touch on all our emotions, our problems, and moods. Did not expect that last line, but understand it.
Good poem, Kudos!
November 10th, 2017 00:45
Canvas
FredPeyer said:
I concur with your conclusion, Oliver! It is never about us.
November 6th, 2017 16:48
FredPeyer said:
I concur with your conclusion, Oliver! It is never about us.
November 6th, 2017 16:48
FUCK YOU
FredPeyer said:
See what a title can do? It brings in a lot of readers!
And it was worth reading!
Love that last line!
November 6th, 2017 02:56
FredPeyer said:
See what a title can do? It brings in a lot of readers!
And it was worth reading!
Love that last line!
November 6th, 2017 02:56
FUCK YOU
Alex Howell said:
I really like this poem. I was drawn to this because of the title. I agree betrayal is bad and it is hard to mend.
November 6th, 2017 01:49
Alex Howell said:
I really like this poem. I was drawn to this because of the title. I agree betrayal is bad and it is hard to mend.
November 6th, 2017 01:49
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