Comments received on poems by dtyrrell145



blind in my heart
Tony36 said:

Happy birthday, great write

November 9th, 2017 13:24

blind in my heart
myself and me said:

Happy Birthday to you. Today is your day.
You are at a special stage of your life, it is OK to feel the way you are feeling now, but keep a positive view on this world, giving up is never an option, living through it, you will be so proud of yourself. The darkness is not forever, it will be over for sure. You have such a bright future in front of you, go for it. Give yourself a big smile even if you do not feel so.

November 9th, 2017 11:19

tired of hurting
Primrose said:

It\'s a nice piece

November 7th, 2017 19:18

tired of hurting
Carmine Branco said:

It\'s a ritual common to many of all ages and gender. But the hurt won\'t take the hurt away. Your cry is the cry of a soul in search of love. Open your heart and let it flow. You belong to your humanity. Your best friend is your pen. She can ease the pain of many and yours as a consequence. Beautiful verses. Felt truly. A big hug and a thank you for sharing.

November 7th, 2017 19:15

You\'re not the one
olivergreenwood19 said:

Another sad but real poem! You aren\'t alone and you can get through. Just keep fighting

November 5th, 2017 11:50

You\'re not the one
Saima said:

I promise you you\'re not alone, I completely relate and I understand how you wanna cut everyone off, you just want to be by yourself, I understand how hard it is to stop cutting, you can talk to me anytime and I promise I don\'t judge sweetie x

November 5th, 2017 11:34

i\'m the one to blame
Saima said:

This is absolutely beautiful, the complete truth of depression, you\'re writing is so deep. Please continue writing more poems, I understand how you feel as well, having to act like everything ok, and everyone thinks you\'re alright but you put a mask on to hide the way you really feel. You can always open up to me about anything if you feel like talking x also you should read my poems I think you\'d enjoy reading them and you\'d relate x

November 5th, 2017 07:24

i\'m the one to blame
olivergreenwood19 said:

This is very deep and very dark but unfortunately I can relate. You depicted the feeling and condition perfectly and the entire piece was beautiful and moving. Many people never understand what its like, and for those who don\'t I would encourage them to read this!

November 4th, 2017 18:03