Comments received on poems by Sugar Suicide

We\'re meant to be, so why do I feel so?
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great feeling well expressed
Something change has to come form us
Be the change

May 26th, 2019 03:14

We\'re meant to be, so why do I feel so?
dusk arising said:

OK plain speaking. It reads like you are being taken for granted. If you want to continue that way just continue. If you dont then get out now. Don\'t try to change your partner, waste of time, they dont really want to listen do they. You\'re giving them something which they are using/abusing as a habit. Thats all u have become.
I\'m being cruel to be kind.

May 25th, 2019 18:41

Chapter Two
Nicholas Browning said:

Go get em\'!

March 16th, 2019 01:37

Panic attacks
orchidee said:

I mean - me singing is enough to make anyone panic. It\'s the threat of it you see, when I say \'An now a song...\'! That\'s all folk got to worry about - on here, anyway! lol.

March 14th, 2019 07:17

Panic attacks
orchidee said:

They\'re not pleasant - the panic attacks I mean, not your poems!
But OK - I shall not threaten to sing, if it brings on your panic attacks! heehee.

March 14th, 2019 02:49

Panic attacks
Night Owl said:

Ohhh I know all to well what these devils are like... It\'s great your able to express it in this form... For me, they were like buried emotions burning to get out... I really felt that falling feeling through your poem.

March 13th, 2019 20:32

Panic attacks
Nicholas Browning said:

Seen people have these before. Not a pretty sight. Best regards.

March 13th, 2019 20:02

Poetic Dan said:

Then spit it out, all over the page
Filled with sadness or your rage
Don\'t just let it sit and rot
In your words you\'ll never be forgot!

Thank you for inspiring theses thoughts

March 8th, 2019 04:03

Incident Report
laurenroe said:

Very creative, and conveys such a strong message, I love this.


February 23rd, 2019 02:15

o h
laurenroe said:

SO short but so powerful!


February 23rd, 2019 02:13

Goldfinch60 said:

We have a cupboard like that.

February 18th, 2019 01:15

DannyBoi said:

🍵Got to love it. Nice words

February 17th, 2019 16:26

kevin browne said:

I wonder how the judgement well pan out. Let me know some day when it happens. Will be interesting to see!!!!

October 9th, 2018 02:28

Yorelzinala said:


October 1st, 2018 23:20

sylviasearcher said:

Want someone to listen?

I like your use of empty space. Made the statement so powerful. Like when you are in a room full of people but it is empty.

August 23rd, 2018 01:47

Incident Report
sylviasearcher said:

I think I know a little of this feeling. I hope getting it out helped a little?

If only we could file it away on a database somewhere.

I liked your creative way of expression.

August 7th, 2018 03:16

Incident Report
orchidee said:

If It was not so serious I would say: By the time we\'ve messed about getting started with some files, etc, we gotta stay alive long enough to do that. We\'ll have forgotten why we were depressed. doh!

August 7th, 2018 01:44

Noni said:

I feel this so much.

April 12th, 2018 20:04

coffee stained bones
blast219 said:

simply written but very complete in thought

April 12th, 2018 06:55

coffee stained bones
Nicholas Browning said:

If I could sleep for two years straight I probably would. Best get on that school work!

April 12th, 2018 03:32

coffee stained bones
onepauly said:

simply put. very likable

April 12th, 2018 02:21

larosamarchitada said:

Love how blunt this is

April 10th, 2018 00:55

Nicholas Browning said:

This rocks.

April 9th, 2018 23:55

I was
Dysthymia said:

Well written.

March 1st, 2018 04:00

I was
Lorna said:

Well described wisdom Sugar...... a thoughtful poem!

March 1st, 2018 02:42

I was
Michael Edwards said:

An engaging write - good work SS.

March 1st, 2018 01:29

running from, or being kidnapped by?
Burning Crow said:

Really well written I think you have a really intelligent way of looking at your problems, although you should always remember that you can be stronger than them and you can take control, great writing and hope you find away to conquer your demons.


February 8th, 2018 03:24

Shadowbox15 said:

Hello darkness, my old friend.

December 17th, 2017 16:18

orchidee said:

Erm, yes, it\'s the season you see - longer darkness! heehee.

December 14th, 2017 02:18

orchidee said:

On a light note - Oohh, don\'t go anywhere. Stay and write good poems like this!
Yet it\'s your progress, minor or major. Some aim for perfectionism, or expect it of others.
I told a \'not-a-people-person\' something good about me. They slagged me off. I didn\'t say much to them afterwards. I had two words in mind though, one of which was \'off\' (ooh).

December 12th, 2017 07:02

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