Comments received on poems by Christopher Elwell
Old Man
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe old age and its slow unsure steps with poetic phrasing and good flow of scenic change which becomes laden with fearful dreams in this tale with a twist in its finalé Chris. First class writing and look forward to reading more of your work.
December 18th, 2017 14:23
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe old age and its slow unsure steps with poetic phrasing and good flow of scenic change which becomes laden with fearful dreams in this tale with a twist in its finalé Chris. First class writing and look forward to reading more of your work.
December 18th, 2017 14:23
Our love
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - now that is what easy love feels like methinks - - a powerful read Chris.
December 18th, 2017 14:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - now that is what easy love feels like methinks - - a powerful read Chris.
December 18th, 2017 14:11
Our love
Michael Edwards said:
Just found this - great write which I really enjoyed.
December 11th, 2017 02:48
Michael Edwards said:
Just found this - great write which I really enjoyed.
December 11th, 2017 02:48
Our love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write. No not too short at all, it says it all.
December 11th, 2017 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write. No not too short at all, it says it all.
December 11th, 2017 02:37
Our love
SorrowfullyHappy said:
as they say short and sweet just wish my love life was easy
December 10th, 2017 19:18
SorrowfullyHappy said:
as they say short and sweet just wish my love life was easy
December 10th, 2017 19:18
Matthew
Michael Edwards said:
I really like this and I don\'t know why. I have read it a couple of times and I\'m still unsure what the story line is (if any) and probably because it us so enigmatic I want to read it again. To engage the reader so is the mark of a good write and this is just that.
December 9th, 2017 12:15
Michael Edwards said:
I really like this and I don\'t know why. I have read it a couple of times and I\'m still unsure what the story line is (if any) and probably because it us so enigmatic I want to read it again. To engage the reader so is the mark of a good write and this is just that.
December 9th, 2017 12:15
How can I?
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Wow, I enjoyed your poem, i could picture how you felt. amazing poem. Keep up the good work.
November 27th, 2017 16:27
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Wow, I enjoyed your poem, i could picture how you felt. amazing poem. Keep up the good work.
November 27th, 2017 16:27
A Kiss
Laura🌻 said:
This reminds me of the classic movie CASABLANCA...
“A kiss is just a kiss,
a sigh is just a sigh”...
Thank you for the memories!
November 18th, 2017 17:53
Laura🌻 said:
This reminds me of the classic movie CASABLANCA...
“A kiss is just a kiss,
a sigh is just a sigh”...
Thank you for the memories!
November 18th, 2017 17:53
A Kiss
Christina8 said:
Really like this poem. Especially for a first kiss. Makes me nostalgic! Beautiful for a kiss that will live in your heart for a long time.
November 18th, 2017 17:51
Christina8 said:
Really like this poem. Especially for a first kiss. Makes me nostalgic! Beautiful for a kiss that will live in your heart for a long time.
November 18th, 2017 17:51
A Kiss
Moom said:
Very good. Right to the point but not missing a single detail.
November 18th, 2017 15:56
Moom said:
Very good. Right to the point but not missing a single detail.
November 18th, 2017 15:56
A Kiss
FineB said:
Thank you cbrisp.
That was beautiful.
The power of a kiss. One of my favourite songs is a Hall and Oates song Kiss on my List. This poem reminds me of that fantastic song.
Keep writing.
FineB
November 18th, 2017 14:10
FineB said:
Thank you cbrisp.
That was beautiful.
The power of a kiss. One of my favourite songs is a Hall and Oates song Kiss on my List. This poem reminds me of that fantastic song.
Keep writing.
FineB
November 18th, 2017 14:10
When
AustinMSZ said:
I think this was incredibly well written. I’m really impressed by your communication of such warmth and tenderness in a relatively short poem. Very good.
November 16th, 2017 18:41
AustinMSZ said:
I think this was incredibly well written. I’m really impressed by your communication of such warmth and tenderness in a relatively short poem. Very good.
November 16th, 2017 18:41
