Comments received on poems by Chloé
Am I alone?
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad write but the answer does not lie in a bottle of wine. Talk to him and make him listen.
March 28th, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad write but the answer does not lie in a bottle of wine. Talk to him and make him listen.
March 28th, 2018 00:51
Am I alone?
Nobody special said:
You should never let anyone treat you like that, you deserve respect from someone and if he does not give it to you, then he doesn\'t truly love you as someone else might.
March 27th, 2018 21:25
Nobody special said:
You should never let anyone treat you like that, you deserve respect from someone and if he does not give it to you, then he doesn\'t truly love you as someone else might.
March 27th, 2018 21:25
Homesick
Lorna said:
I felt every word........ when I was young I felt like I was being sent to purgatory when I had to leave home......... it\'s one of those \"losses\" that comes with growing up that no one talks about.... it ain\'t all great...........!
March 23rd, 2018 07:28
Lorna said:
I felt every word........ when I was young I felt like I was being sent to purgatory when I had to leave home......... it\'s one of those \"losses\" that comes with growing up that no one talks about.... it ain\'t all great...........!
March 23rd, 2018 07:28
Cranium
Lorna said:
This is what depression does isn\'t it - it cuts us off......... a real struggle not to seem \"selfish\"..... \"And some things need throwing away\" is a wonderful truth......
March 23rd, 2018 07:21
Lorna said:
This is what depression does isn\'t it - it cuts us off......... a real struggle not to seem \"selfish\"..... \"And some things need throwing away\" is a wonderful truth......
March 23rd, 2018 07:21
The vacancy filling my bed
Lorna said:
Yes painfully sad.... I felt every line......
March 21st, 2018 04:08
Lorna said:
Yes painfully sad.... I felt every line......
March 21st, 2018 04:08
Nutshell
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CHLOE ~ Thanks for sharing your first Poem ! I am sorry it is so so full of depression and personal sadness and self abnegation. However I always find sharing MY SADNESSES in a Poem is cathartic and I feel better for it ! I trust you will as well ! MPS is a very empathetic site so you will find comfort and not rejection ! It works on a share & care basis. If you comment on others Poems and request FRIENDSHIP ~ they will comment on your Poems and befriend you ~ OK ~ Every blessing ~ thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
November 16th, 2017 19:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CHLOE ~ Thanks for sharing your first Poem ! I am sorry it is so so full of depression and personal sadness and self abnegation. However I always find sharing MY SADNESSES in a Poem is cathartic and I feel better for it ! I trust you will as well ! MPS is a very empathetic site so you will find comfort and not rejection ! It works on a share & care basis. If you comment on others Poems and request FRIENDSHIP ~ they will comment on your Poems and befriend you ~ OK ~ Every blessing ~ thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
November 16th, 2017 19:13
