Comments received on poems by Carmine
The Door
FredPeyer said:
k4, this is one of the most inventive and original poems I have read in a while. I like the door metaphors, could be anything. Love the structure!
Well done, Kudos!
December 11th, 2017 05:06
FredPeyer said:
k4, this is one of the most inventive and original poems I have read in a while. I like the door metaphors, could be anything. Love the structure!
Well done, Kudos!
December 11th, 2017 05:06
The Mad clock & Lonely Tick
kevin browne said:
great work for the tick of sad times.
November 20th, 2017 03:11
kevin browne said:
great work for the tick of sad times.
November 20th, 2017 03:11
The Mad clock & Lonely Tick
b-LAH-que said:
What I get from this is that sadness from times of loneliness (the\"sad clock\") is both a cause and result of times of anger (the \"mad clock\"). Smile at the \"sad clock\" and he dies, for his sadness is for some time gone.
Even if my interpretation is off, this was an interesting way to express something that leaves a lot for contemplation. I like it.
November 20th, 2017 02:30
b-LAH-que said:
What I get from this is that sadness from times of loneliness (the\"sad clock\") is both a cause and result of times of anger (the \"mad clock\"). Smile at the \"sad clock\" and he dies, for his sadness is for some time gone.
Even if my interpretation is off, this was an interesting way to express something that leaves a lot for contemplation. I like it.
November 20th, 2017 02:30
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