Comments received on poems by Carmine



The Door
FredPeyer said:

k4, this is one of the most inventive and original poems I have read in a while. I like the door metaphors, could be anything. Love the structure!
Well done, Kudos!

December 11th, 2017 05:06

Change of pace
Asia_M0813 said:

I really enjoyed this it spoke to me ...

December 5th, 2017 01:37

Little Sailboat
poetboy123 said:

Wonderful piece!

December 3rd, 2017 13:41

The Bench
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 30th, 2017 09:34

The Moon and The Sun
Thegirlwhowrites said:

I love this one.

November 23rd, 2017 07:02

The Mad clock & Lonely Tick
kevin browne said:

great work for the tick of sad times.

November 20th, 2017 03:11

The Mad clock & Lonely Tick
b-LAH-que said:

What I get from this is that sadness from times of loneliness (the\"sad clock\") is both a cause and result of times of anger (the \"mad clock\"). Smile at the \"sad clock\" and he dies, for his sadness is for some time gone.

Even if my interpretation is off, this was an interesting way to express something that leaves a lot for contemplation. I like it.

November 20th, 2017 02:30

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