Comments received on poems by k4nki3

Through the plagues and Hearts
Saxon Crow said:

Really like the poem K. Dnd rocks!

June 9th, 2021 00:44

Hour glass
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully envisioned and executed with subtlety
the poem itself is loud and brash
but the message it conveys
is so delicate and intricate
as if writing this, was an act of cathartic burial
like the poem itself is entwined in complexity
that\'s been dug six feet deep, on purpose
and the words are the earth, to comouflage
the last resting place, of a love
deemed so corrosive
it dared not be spoken or inked, accessible...

May 25th, 2021 04:21

Fear of Death
Lost at the beginning said:

This hits hard, I\'m in my feelings right now and this poem just hits me hard. Thank you so much for writing it.

January 3rd, 2020 21:02

Is it to late?
dusk arising said:

A shaggy dog story i guess.

January 24th, 2019 17:37

Necklace of thoughts
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Such a sad poem, but I only hope you continue to write, but messages from the heart that release your pain.

Keep writing and that will replace despair.

Nicely done!

September 24th, 2018 18:11

My girl
Clarita said:

Beautiful and heartwarming

May 24th, 2018 21:07

orchidee said:

Bit of a bad-hair day there - in the poem and pic?! heehee.

May 16th, 2018 01:49

Mene said:

Wow..amazing. Great write, you definitely have talent, and I can see you\'re using your feelings to create art, impressive.

May 15th, 2018 09:01

SLR said:

Powerful and definitely things to think on. I think you have an old soul. I use my writing as therapy and a way to work things out in my mind. That\'s what writers do. Keep writing. Healthy way to vent. I\'ll watch for your next post .:-)

May 13th, 2018 22:31

SLR said:

Just saw this one. This feels like a lot of heartfelt raging against the imbalances of the world. We all feel inadequate to handle stuff sometimes, especially if we\'re hearing everyone else\'s drama too. This piece is very thought provoking. Good post. I hope you\'ve gotten some sleep since then. :-) keep writing, keep posting.

May 13th, 2018 22:26

Life is a war
Lorna said:

Very good and powerful words and you are the future..... looks like the young are going to be the defenders of the earth if they don\'t want it to be destroyed by the old folks..... protect the environment, put down the greed, go for it! (But not with guns of course).........

March 27th, 2018 07:29

My name
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 5th, 2018 10:22

Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 30th, 2018 09:57

yellowrose said:


January 30th, 2018 06:18

yellowrose said:

amazing ... a really lovey read ..! :-) i love how you have used the rock and the ocean to describe your sense of loneliness and isolation and emptiness , first of all you breath in feeling nothing , then you start to hear and feel what is around you , then you see a ship and there are you .. rescued and no longer lonely ..brilliant , jsut brilliant .. i , myself have a poem were i also used the rock to describe my emptiness, i may share it on here one day

January 30th, 2018 06:18

yellowrose said:

\'\'i\'m empty

but you can fill me with anything even with your colors.\'\'

love this ending ! emptiness needs to be filled, sometimes we feel so empty inside its like we are a hollow well, nothing inside of ourselves , a gaping hole which we so desperately want to fill!

January 30th, 2018 06:13

Little Sailboat
yellowrose said:

really love this ! enjoyed reading ... nice work :-) he sounds like he needs to reach a place without loneliness..

January 30th, 2018 06:09

My heart
yellowrose said:

amazing ! :-) it sounds like to me like someone has ownership over your heart here and they have too much power over it... lol ! enjoyed readng this

January 30th, 2018 06:06

Family Tree
yellowrose said:

interesting , i enjoyed reading this , i also like how you have displayed each part in branches .. nice

January 30th, 2018 06:03

A book and a side
yellowrose said:

great piece of writing :-) i think you do need to understands both sides, their reasoning for behaving how they are , however sometimes there is not a valid reason and people/ villians in books are just the way they are , cruel and unfriendly and out to get and out to hurt.. and why would we want to associate with someone who is cruel or nasty or unkind , i know i wouldn\'t

January 30th, 2018 05:59

A friend
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 20th, 2018 12:37

Aislinn Wilson said:

Good freeform and unique fragmentation!

January 19th, 2018 13:58

Aislinn Wilson said:

I love your writing style

January 18th, 2018 10:19

Tony36 said:

Great write

January 18th, 2018 09:35

Ljuden och Tystnaden
seeker123 said:

I like your use of enjambment in the poem, it really accentuates the questions you have that expose the truth about the different angles life can be perceived as, I especially relate to these lines...

\"hearing the silence make me feel at ease

but lonely

hearing the noises make me feel insane

but yet company\"

The simplicity yet the intricate meaning of your words really distinguishes your style of writing.
Thank you I really enjoyed this write

December 22nd, 2017 22:33

The Door
FredPeyer said:

k4, this is one of the most inventive and original poems I have read in a while. I like the door metaphors, could be anything. Love the structure!
Well done, Kudos!

December 11th, 2017 05:06

Change of pace
Asia_M0813 said:

I really enjoyed this it spoke to me ...

December 5th, 2017 01:37

Little Sailboat
poetboy5454 said:

Wonderful piece!

December 3rd, 2017 13:41

The Bench
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 30th, 2017 09:34

The Moon and The Sun
Thegirlwhowrites said:

I love this one.

November 23rd, 2017 07:02

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