Comments received on poems by Carmine
The Last Hello
Lil said:
I just love this truly I do it just explains a lot of things.
November 8th, 2023 16:17
Lil said:
I just love this truly I do it just explains a lot of things.
November 8th, 2023 16:17
The Last Hello
dtrusss said:
This is wonderful. If the world operated in this way, we\'d be able to constantly reinvent ourselves. This is why I love a poetic community. Social media has people tracking our every move, which removes the excitement of seeing someone with 10-years-absence. Here, strangers gather daily, seeking that reinvention. Hail poets (even though I struggle with the label at times)
November 8th, 2023 15:37
dtrusss said:
This is wonderful. If the world operated in this way, we\'d be able to constantly reinvent ourselves. This is why I love a poetic community. Social media has people tracking our every move, which removes the excitement of seeing someone with 10-years-absence. Here, strangers gather daily, seeking that reinvention. Hail poets (even though I struggle with the label at times)
November 8th, 2023 15:37
Finite Soul
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was deep. Your words were felt and the poignant images you portray are real and direct. Very well done!
March 16th, 2022 08:50
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was deep. Your words were felt and the poignant images you portray are real and direct. Very well done!
March 16th, 2022 08:50
Through the plagues and Hearts
Saxon Crow said:
Really like the poem K. Dnd rocks!
June 9th, 2021 00:44
Saxon Crow said:
Really like the poem K. Dnd rocks!
June 9th, 2021 00:44
Hour glass
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully envisioned and executed with subtlety
the poem itself is loud and brash
but the message it conveys
is so delicate and intricate
as if writing this, was an act of cathartic burial
like the poem itself is entwined in complexity
that\'s been dug six feet deep, on purpose
and the words are the earth, to comouflage
the last resting place, of a love
deemed so corrosive
it dared not be spoken or inked, accessible...
May 25th, 2021 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully envisioned and executed with subtlety
the poem itself is loud and brash
but the message it conveys
is so delicate and intricate
as if writing this, was an act of cathartic burial
like the poem itself is entwined in complexity
that\'s been dug six feet deep, on purpose
and the words are the earth, to comouflage
the last resting place, of a love
deemed so corrosive
it dared not be spoken or inked, accessible...
May 25th, 2021 04:21
Fear of Death
Lost at the beginning said:
This hits hard, I\'m in my feelings right now and this poem just hits me hard. Thank you so much for writing it.
January 3rd, 2020 21:02
Lost at the beginning said:
This hits hard, I\'m in my feelings right now and this poem just hits me hard. Thank you so much for writing it.
January 3rd, 2020 21:02
Necklace of thoughts
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Such a sad poem, but I only hope you continue to write, but messages from the heart that release your pain.
Keep writing and that will replace despair.
Nicely done!
September 24th, 2018 18:11
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Such a sad poem, but I only hope you continue to write, but messages from the heart that release your pain.
Keep writing and that will replace despair.
Nicely done!
September 24th, 2018 18:11
Insanity
orchidee said:
Bit of a bad-hair day there - in the poem and pic?! heehee.
May 16th, 2018 01:49
orchidee said:
Bit of a bad-hair day there - in the poem and pic?! heehee.
May 16th, 2018 01:49
Confused
swyndell said:
Wow..amazing. Great write, you definitely have talent, and I can see you\'re using your feelings to create art, impressive.
May 15th, 2018 09:01
swyndell said:
Wow..amazing. Great write, you definitely have talent, and I can see you\'re using your feelings to create art, impressive.
May 15th, 2018 09:01
Confused
SLR said:
Powerful and definitely things to think on. I think you have an old soul. I use my writing as therapy and a way to work things out in my mind. That\'s what writers do. Keep writing. Healthy way to vent. I\'ll watch for your next post .:-)
May 13th, 2018 22:31
SLR said:
Powerful and definitely things to think on. I think you have an old soul. I use my writing as therapy and a way to work things out in my mind. That\'s what writers do. Keep writing. Healthy way to vent. I\'ll watch for your next post .:-)
May 13th, 2018 22:31
Lyrics
SLR said:
Just saw this one. This feels like a lot of heartfelt raging against the imbalances of the world. We all feel inadequate to handle stuff sometimes, especially if we\'re hearing everyone else\'s drama too. This piece is very thought provoking. Good post. I hope you\'ve gotten some sleep since then. :-) keep writing, keep posting.
May 13th, 2018 22:26
SLR said:
Just saw this one. This feels like a lot of heartfelt raging against the imbalances of the world. We all feel inadequate to handle stuff sometimes, especially if we\'re hearing everyone else\'s drama too. This piece is very thought provoking. Good post. I hope you\'ve gotten some sleep since then. :-) keep writing, keep posting.
May 13th, 2018 22:26
Life is a war
Lorna said:
Very good and powerful words and you are the future..... looks like the young are going to be the defenders of the earth if they don\'t want it to be destroyed by the old folks..... protect the environment, put down the greed, go for it! (But not with guns of course).........
March 27th, 2018 07:29
Lorna said:
Very good and powerful words and you are the future..... looks like the young are going to be the defenders of the earth if they don\'t want it to be destroyed by the old folks..... protect the environment, put down the greed, go for it! (But not with guns of course).........
March 27th, 2018 07:29
Ocean
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
amazing ... a really lovey read ..! :-) i love how you have used the rock and the ocean to describe your sense of loneliness and isolation and emptiness , first of all you breath in feeling nothing , then you start to hear and feel what is around you , then you see a ship and there are you .. rescued and no longer lonely ..brilliant , jsut brilliant .. i , myself have a poem were i also used the rock to describe my emptiness, i may share it on here one day
January 30th, 2018 06:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
amazing ... a really lovey read ..! :-) i love how you have used the rock and the ocean to describe your sense of loneliness and isolation and emptiness , first of all you breath in feeling nothing , then you start to hear and feel what is around you , then you see a ship and there are you .. rescued and no longer lonely ..brilliant , jsut brilliant .. i , myself have a poem were i also used the rock to describe my emptiness, i may share it on here one day
January 30th, 2018 06:18
Empty
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
\'\'i\'m empty
but you can fill me with anything even with your colors.\'\'
love this ending ! emptiness needs to be filled, sometimes we feel so empty inside its like we are a hollow well, nothing inside of ourselves , a gaping hole which we so desperately want to fill!
January 30th, 2018 06:13
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
\'\'i\'m empty
but you can fill me with anything even with your colors.\'\'
love this ending ! emptiness needs to be filled, sometimes we feel so empty inside its like we are a hollow well, nothing inside of ourselves , a gaping hole which we so desperately want to fill!
January 30th, 2018 06:13
Little Sailboat
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
really love this ! enjoyed reading ... nice work :-) he sounds like he needs to reach a place without loneliness..
January 30th, 2018 06:09
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
really love this ! enjoyed reading ... nice work :-) he sounds like he needs to reach a place without loneliness..
January 30th, 2018 06:09
My heart
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
amazing ! :-) it sounds like to me like someone has ownership over your heart here and they have too much power over it... lol ! enjoyed readng this
January 30th, 2018 06:06
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
amazing ! :-) it sounds like to me like someone has ownership over your heart here and they have too much power over it... lol ! enjoyed readng this
January 30th, 2018 06:06
Family Tree
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting , i enjoyed reading this , i also like how you have displayed each part in branches .. nice
January 30th, 2018 06:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting , i enjoyed reading this , i also like how you have displayed each part in branches .. nice
January 30th, 2018 06:03
A book and a side
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
great piece of writing :-) i think you do need to understands both sides, their reasoning for behaving how they are , however sometimes there is not a valid reason and people/ villians in books are just the way they are , cruel and unfriendly and out to get and out to hurt.. and why would we want to associate with someone who is cruel or nasty or unkind , i know i wouldn\'t
January 30th, 2018 05:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
great piece of writing :-) i think you do need to understands both sides, their reasoning for behaving how they are , however sometimes there is not a valid reason and people/ villians in books are just the way they are , cruel and unfriendly and out to get and out to hurt.. and why would we want to associate with someone who is cruel or nasty or unkind , i know i wouldn\'t
January 30th, 2018 05:59
Ljuden och Tystnaden
seeker123 said:
I like your use of enjambment in the poem, it really accentuates the questions you have that expose the truth about the different angles life can be perceived as, I especially relate to these lines...
\"hearing the silence make me feel at ease
but lonely
hearing the noises make me feel insane
but yet company\"
The simplicity yet the intricate meaning of your words really distinguishes your style of writing.
Thank you I really enjoyed this write
-Seeker
December 22nd, 2017 22:33
seeker123 said:
I like your use of enjambment in the poem, it really accentuates the questions you have that expose the truth about the different angles life can be perceived as, I especially relate to these lines...
\"hearing the silence make me feel at ease
but lonely
hearing the noises make me feel insane
but yet company\"
The simplicity yet the intricate meaning of your words really distinguishes your style of writing.
Thank you I really enjoyed this write
-Seeker
December 22nd, 2017 22:33
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