Comments received on poems by a potato
Visitor in my own body
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
good poem! powerful ending .. \'\' someone else has the key \'\' this speaks of a lack of control
\'\' I\'m a visitor in my own body
And somebody else has the key\'\'
sounds like there is a distance, a sense of distance from yourself
July 9th, 2018 02:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
good poem! powerful ending .. \'\' someone else has the key \'\' this speaks of a lack of control
\'\' I\'m a visitor in my own body
And somebody else has the key\'\'
sounds like there is a distance, a sense of distance from yourself
July 9th, 2018 02:37
Life The Video Game
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
such a great poem ! the levels in a game , comparing life to a game ... powerful ending!! so true, life is not a game but i like how you speak of levels of difficulty within this , so true, in life there are many difficulties and hurdles... more so for some ! not everybody gets it so difficult, do they ? some have an easy life.. its a sad thing when life makes you want to end your life.. great message in here
July 9th, 2018 02:24
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
such a great poem ! the levels in a game , comparing life to a game ... powerful ending!! so true, life is not a game but i like how you speak of levels of difficulty within this , so true, in life there are many difficulties and hurdles... more so for some ! not everybody gets it so difficult, do they ? some have an easy life.. its a sad thing when life makes you want to end your life.. great message in here
July 9th, 2018 02:24
I knew a boy who liked to draw - not one of my poems
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
great poem! self harm.... it makes us feel guilty and fills us with shame.. you worded this so very well..
July 9th, 2018 02:17
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
great poem! self harm.... it makes us feel guilty and fills us with shame.. you worded this so very well..
July 9th, 2018 02:17
I knew a boy who liked to draw - not one of my poems
sjc513 said:
This was deep I loved it good job 👍
July 8th, 2018 21:22
sjc513 said:
This was deep I loved it good job 👍
July 8th, 2018 21:22
Visitor in my own body
onepauly said:
every time something good happens
to me there\'s always a shadow on my back.
(creedence clearwater survival)
July 1st, 2018 18:42
onepauly said:
every time something good happens
to me there\'s always a shadow on my back.
(creedence clearwater survival)
July 1st, 2018 18:42
Visitor in my own body
The Poet Doctor said:
Quite explosive with truth. Good write
July 1st, 2018 08:19
The Poet Doctor said:
Quite explosive with truth. Good write
July 1st, 2018 08:19
Life The Video Game
sjc513 said:
This is Excellent great metaphor and choice of words love it!
June 27th, 2018 11:53
sjc513 said:
This is Excellent great metaphor and choice of words love it!
June 27th, 2018 11:53
My secret
Alexa Malyn said:
Deep, I\'m impressed with this work, as I can relate to it. very well done.
November 22nd, 2017 12:48
Alexa Malyn said:
Deep, I\'m impressed with this work, as I can relate to it. very well done.
November 22nd, 2017 12:48
