Comments received on poems by a potato



Visitor in my own body
yellowrose said:

good poem! powerful ending .. \'\' someone else has the key \'\' this speaks of a lack of control

\'\' I\'m a visitor in my own body

And somebody else has the key\'\'

sounds like there is a distance, a sense of distance from yourself

July 9th, 2018 02:37

Life The Video Game
yellowrose said:

such a great poem ! the levels in a game , comparing life to a game ... powerful ending!! so true, life is not a game but i like how you speak of levels of difficulty within this , so true, in life there are many difficulties and hurdles... more so for some ! not everybody gets it so difficult, do they ? some have an easy life.. its a sad thing when life makes you want to end your life.. great message in here



July 9th, 2018 02:24

I knew a boy who liked to draw - not one of my poems
yellowrose said:

great poem! self harm.... it makes us feel guilty and fills us with shame.. you worded this so very well..

July 9th, 2018 02:17

I knew a boy who liked to draw - not one of my poems
sjc513 said:

This was deep I loved it good job 👍

July 8th, 2018 21:22

I knew a boy who liked to draw - not one of my poems
Candlewitch said:

WOW!

used to draw, too.

*hugs, Cat

July 8th, 2018 11:54

Visitor in my own body
onepauly said:

every time something good happens
to me there\'s always a shadow on my back.

(creedence clearwater survival)

July 1st, 2018 18:42

Visitor in my own body
The Poet Doctor said:

Quite explosive with truth. Good write

July 1st, 2018 08:19

My secret
sjc513 said:

Very relatable you have a way with words!

June 27th, 2018 11:54

Life The Video Game
sjc513 said:

This is Excellent great metaphor and choice of words love it!

June 27th, 2018 11:53

My secret
upinmyfeelings_ said:

very well done sis!

November 23rd, 2017 13:11

My secret
Tony36 said:

Great wr

November 22nd, 2017 17:22

My secret
JC said:

Melancholy seeps from this poem. Well done!

November 22nd, 2017 16:11

My secret
Alexa Malyn said:

Deep, I\'m impressed with this work, as I can relate to it. very well done.

November 22nd, 2017 12:48