Comments received on poems by KoKoRosie
Down & Out
FredPeyer said:
I like your \'out\' poem. So when you hit that bottom, you have to shout OUT, to be heard and taken OUT of your misery. And then, life will be again OUT of this world!
December 30th, 2017 19:54
FredPeyer said:
I like your \'out\' poem. So when you hit that bottom, you have to shout OUT, to be heard and taken OUT of your misery. And then, life will be again OUT of this world!
December 30th, 2017 19:54
ACHE
FredPeyer said:
KRM, it sounds like you had to give away a baby, and my heart goes out to you. Don\'t change anything!!!
It is raw, emotional, from the heart. A very difficult theme, but very beautifully written.
While they say that good writing is good re-writing, sometimes something appears on paper (or the screen) that is just perfect the first time. And in my humble opinion, this is one of them.
December 3rd, 2017 23:04
FredPeyer said:
KRM, it sounds like you had to give away a baby, and my heart goes out to you. Don\'t change anything!!!
It is raw, emotional, from the heart. A very difficult theme, but very beautifully written.
While they say that good writing is good re-writing, sometimes something appears on paper (or the screen) that is just perfect the first time. And in my humble opinion, this is one of them.
December 3rd, 2017 23:04
Used
FredPeyer said:
You go girl!!! Very well written, good rhyming again, and a very powerful message.
BTW, I am sure you WILL find the man of your dreams!
November 28th, 2017 11:59
FredPeyer said:
You go girl!!! Very well written, good rhyming again, and a very powerful message.
BTW, I am sure you WILL find the man of your dreams!
November 28th, 2017 11:59
Demon of Love
FredPeyer said:
Very powerfully written, well rhymed, a great poem, KRM!
I don\'t know how you did it, but letting go of love and drugs is a double whammy! Am happy for you!
November 28th, 2017 11:57
FredPeyer said:
Very powerfully written, well rhymed, a great poem, KRM!
I don\'t know how you did it, but letting go of love and drugs is a double whammy! Am happy for you!
November 28th, 2017 11:57
Roaming
FredPeyer said:
Well written, KRM! It is not always easy to find oneself, and/or the place one wants to put down roots. I emigrated twice in my life (Switzerland / Canada / Hawaii), but have been here now for over 30 years. So, do not despair, take life as it comes, and sooner or later you will find that very special person/place where you want to be. :-)
November 28th, 2017 11:53
FredPeyer said:
Well written, KRM! It is not always easy to find oneself, and/or the place one wants to put down roots. I emigrated twice in my life (Switzerland / Canada / Hawaii), but have been here now for over 30 years. So, do not despair, take life as it comes, and sooner or later you will find that very special person/place where you want to be. :-)
November 28th, 2017 11:53
Used
FineB said:
Thanks KokoRosie.
That was powerful and awesome.
Good stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
November 28th, 2017 09:39
FineB said:
Thanks KokoRosie.
That was powerful and awesome.
Good stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
November 28th, 2017 09:39
Roaming
KoKoRosie said:
Thank You Brian! Glad you have found what you were looking for! :) Hopefully my time will come soon. Thanks for reading!
November 26th, 2017 00:05
KoKoRosie said:
Thank You Brian! Glad you have found what you were looking for! :) Hopefully my time will come soon. Thanks for reading!
November 26th, 2017 00:05
Roaming
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KO KO (GREAT NAME) Thanks for your first Poem \"A Wanderer long for a niche !\" When I was Young (under 25) I roamed free and took my chance with Lie & Love ! Now I\'m 30+ I have my own FLAT a regular Lady Friend (ANGELA) and (at last) a Job with tenure ! I\'ve dropped my ANCHOR ~ but I often pull it up and become as free as the Sea again ! Thinking of you and praying you will find your NEST real soon ! Love DENVER and the Aspens in Colorado ~ in the Fall ~ are a glimpse of Heaven ~ Great State to be in ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 25th, 2017 04:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KO KO (GREAT NAME) Thanks for your first Poem \"A Wanderer long for a niche !\" When I was Young (under 25) I roamed free and took my chance with Lie & Love ! Now I\'m 30+ I have my own FLAT a regular Lady Friend (ANGELA) and (at last) a Job with tenure ! I\'ve dropped my ANCHOR ~ but I often pull it up and become as free as the Sea again ! Thinking of you and praying you will find your NEST real soon ! Love DENVER and the Aspens in Colorado ~ in the Fall ~ are a glimpse of Heaven ~ Great State to be in ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 25th, 2017 04:51
