Comments received on poems by LeashaBear56
The Bath Tub
Syd said:
This wasn\'t what I was expecting when I clicked on the poem Bath Tub. Very good write, very dark. I hope it\'s not written from personal experience though. Take care - Syd
December 8th, 2017 07:06
Syd said:
This wasn\'t what I was expecting when I clicked on the poem Bath Tub. Very good write, very dark. I hope it\'s not written from personal experience though. Take care - Syd
December 8th, 2017 07:06
The Broken Fly
Edthepoet said:
Spider & Web rider is a genius rhyme! Awesome write.
December 7th, 2017 17:20
Edthepoet said:
Spider & Web rider is a genius rhyme! Awesome write.
December 7th, 2017 17:20
The Broken Fly
Noah said:
I like the rhyming. This makes me think of a flatline. Like, there\'s a noise, a plea, until there\'s nothing. Not the beeping, but the way it spikes on the monitor lol
December 7th, 2017 03:51
Noah said:
I like the rhyming. This makes me think of a flatline. Like, there\'s a noise, a plea, until there\'s nothing. Not the beeping, but the way it spikes on the monitor lol
December 7th, 2017 03:51
The Hole in My Soul
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LEASHA ~ Thanks for your first poem and your additional notes which are helpful. I was 18 a few years ago and your poem about coming to terms with Growing up & Life & Love ~ rang bells ! There are many gender differences in being a Teen (ME YANG ~ YOU YIN) but also similarities ! We all have muddled emotions ~ and too some extent we all suffer abuse ~ mental & physical. However acts Physical abuse of Male on Female are much more common than Male on Male and Female on Male very seldom and something I have never experienced. However Mental abuse (due to mobile phones & facebook etc is increasing for both genders and all ages. The physical experience you describe is very severe and can have a lasting effect. Sharing is cathartic and we can share your pain with you ~ to the extent that you are willing to share with us ~ OK ~ Thinking of you this is a very empathetic site ~ Thinking of you ~ Kisses ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 6th, 2017 19:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LEASHA ~ Thanks for your first poem and your additional notes which are helpful. I was 18 a few years ago and your poem about coming to terms with Growing up & Life & Love ~ rang bells ! There are many gender differences in being a Teen (ME YANG ~ YOU YIN) but also similarities ! We all have muddled emotions ~ and too some extent we all suffer abuse ~ mental & physical. However acts Physical abuse of Male on Female are much more common than Male on Male and Female on Male very seldom and something I have never experienced. However Mental abuse (due to mobile phones & facebook etc is increasing for both genders and all ages. The physical experience you describe is very severe and can have a lasting effect. Sharing is cathartic and we can share your pain with you ~ to the extent that you are willing to share with us ~ OK ~ Thinking of you this is a very empathetic site ~ Thinking of you ~ Kisses ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 6th, 2017 19:40
The Hole in My Soul
JayDleo said:
Wow. just wow. You should keep going. not that I can fully relate but I truly felt as though I was there. It was very immersive. I like it.
December 6th, 2017 18:19
JayDleo said:
Wow. just wow. You should keep going. not that I can fully relate but I truly felt as though I was there. It was very immersive. I like it.
December 6th, 2017 18:19
