Comments received on poems by Esala



THE STORMY WHISPER
Yorelzinala said:

Placing others before yourself is a virtue, but tread lightly, as some people will easily take advantage of you. Do share more of your words. Thanks for sharing.

May 21st, 2018 22:30

MATRIMONY
Lorna said:

The lust is over, the truth begins............

March 19th, 2018 05:53

THE BEAUTIFUL SIP
Caring dove said:

very lovely :-) very nice wording here ... beautiful :-) i love how you have ended this piece with reference to a cup of coffee bringing you back into reality , its almost like the sight of nature has made you dream and feel dreamy , and you are suddenly pulled back to the there and then .. i loved reading this

January 20th, 2018 06:39

THE BEAUTIFUL SIP
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

January 15th, 2018 09:14

THE BEAUTIFUL SIP
pots-and-pans said:

A beautiful write! The words go together perfectly, I truly enjoyed it

January 15th, 2018 05:03

DECEIT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME ESALA ~ Thanks for you first Poem. I love the \"free verse\" style and the dynamic flow in the neat quatrains which describe and then destroy a phalanx of DECIEVERS we can all relate to and (sometimes) even identify with ! Offenders ~ Politicians ~ Students ~ Religious Leaders ~ We do indeed live in a False & Falsified Era ! There is much room for thought here ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

December 9th, 2017 05:14