Comments received on poems by Esala
THE STORMY WHISPER
Yorelzinala said:
Placing others before yourself is a virtue, but tread lightly, as some people will easily take advantage of you. Do share more of your words. Thanks for sharing.
May 21st, 2018 22:30
Yorelzinala said:
Placing others before yourself is a virtue, but tread lightly, as some people will easily take advantage of you. Do share more of your words. Thanks for sharing.
May 21st, 2018 22:30
THE BEAUTIFUL SIP
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
very lovely :-) very nice wording here ... beautiful :-) i love how you have ended this piece with reference to a cup of coffee bringing you back into reality , its almost like the sight of nature has made you dream and feel dreamy , and you are suddenly pulled back to the there and then .. i loved reading this
January 20th, 2018 06:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
very lovely :-) very nice wording here ... beautiful :-) i love how you have ended this piece with reference to a cup of coffee bringing you back into reality , its almost like the sight of nature has made you dream and feel dreamy , and you are suddenly pulled back to the there and then .. i loved reading this
January 20th, 2018 06:39
THE BEAUTIFUL SIP
pots-and-pans said:
A beautiful write! The words go together perfectly, I truly enjoyed it
January 15th, 2018 05:03
pots-and-pans said:
A beautiful write! The words go together perfectly, I truly enjoyed it
January 15th, 2018 05:03
DECEIT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ESALA ~ Thanks for you first Poem. I love the \"free verse\" style and the dynamic flow in the neat quatrains which describe and then destroy a phalanx of DECIEVERS we can all relate to and (sometimes) even identify with ! Offenders ~ Politicians ~ Students ~ Religious Leaders ~ We do indeed live in a False & Falsified Era ! There is much room for thought here ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
December 9th, 2017 05:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ESALA ~ Thanks for you first Poem. I love the \"free verse\" style and the dynamic flow in the neat quatrains which describe and then destroy a phalanx of DECIEVERS we can all relate to and (sometimes) even identify with ! Offenders ~ Politicians ~ Students ~ Religious Leaders ~ We do indeed live in a False & Falsified Era ! There is much room for thought here ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
December 9th, 2017 05:14
