Comments received on poems by clair jane

all i\'ve ever wanted
Goldfinch60 said:

With words like these you should already be proud of yourself Clair. Your life in front of you will be wonderful.

March 11th, 2020 01:04

night troubles
dusk arising said:

Consider the life of a Butterfly, from maggot, thru pupae to a beautiful winged thing.
You are on your way to your beautiful life, but passing through less beautiful parts is something we\'ve all had to do. Stick with it and try your best to be as good as you are able in what you do. The future will be yours, you have as much right to it as anyone else.

I\'m going to misquote from a famous piece called Desiderata by Max Ehrmann (worth a read if you google it) and this applies to every one of us human beings \"for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the trees and the stars\".... makes you think a bit doesn\'t it?

May 30th, 2019 09:42

night troubles
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Fear not... it\'s all absolutely normal
That doesn\'t make it any less scary
Great to write it out!!!
Hey you\'re a poet
With a pen beyond your years keep it up

May 30th, 2019 03:08

night troubles
orchidee said:

Some of this, or a lot of it, is teenage fears, I think, as you find your way in life.

May 30th, 2019 02:55

shoreline in the moonlight
daydreaming said:

The images and sensations I captured while reading your verses were so moving and sincere. Beautiful work. Thank you for sharing.

May 25th, 2019 22:33

bitter-sweet love
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful love lorn write.
Welcome to MPS.

March 12th, 2019 01:42