Comments received on poems by poetessdarkly
Twilight
Shadowbox15 said:
I love the darkness lurking in your poetry.
Well done.
December 26th, 2017 13:14
Shadowbox15 said:
I love the darkness lurking in your poetry.
Well done.
December 26th, 2017 13:14
Twilight
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ very GOTHIC ! I love the visual ~ I once did a project on GRAVESTONES ~ awesome places ~ I have always lived near one and walked through @ twilight ~ SPOOKY ! Your elegant poem is replete with Rhyme (alternate lines ababcdcdcefef etc) and Rhythm (good meter) easy to read excellent to recite ! Love the subject content of two Lovers ~ living & dying in LOVE ! Very GOTHIC ~ more please ! The way MPS works is you comment on the POEMS of others & vv. Always reply to comments ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my site ~ Thanks B.
December 26th, 2017 12:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ very GOTHIC ! I love the visual ~ I once did a project on GRAVESTONES ~ awesome places ~ I have always lived near one and walked through @ twilight ~ SPOOKY ! Your elegant poem is replete with Rhyme (alternate lines ababcdcdcefef etc) and Rhythm (good meter) easy to read excellent to recite ! Love the subject content of two Lovers ~ living & dying in LOVE ! Very GOTHIC ~ more please ! The way MPS works is you comment on the POEMS of others & vv. Always reply to comments ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my site ~ Thanks B.
December 26th, 2017 12:35
