Comments received on poems by Tom.H



I\'ll be waiting
Aislinn Wilson said:

Something about this sticks, but I can\'t pinpoint it. I was curious if the occasional uncapitalized first person pronouns \"I\" was intentional? I\'m also quite curious about the choice of \"dáy\"?
I really enjoy this though

January 15th, 2018 19:38

Regret
Resa71 said:

I think many people have a day that they wish could be undone. I certainly do. I really like your poem.

January 13th, 2018 18:29

He is just a little boy
Goldfinch60 said:

Good moving write, some people just do not know the damage they can create with their words not matter what the circumstance may be.

January 8th, 2018 01:54

My present future
space_girl said:

Beautifully written poem about love ❤️

January 5th, 2018 17:02