Comments received on poems by KR



Bleed
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

February 10th, 2018 13:47

Anorexia
trinhead said:

scary how accurate this is..beautiful

January 21st, 2018 18:00

Rapunzel
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write, I do hope you can find your way out.

January 21st, 2018 01:37

Rapunzel
FineB said:

Thank you KR.

An excellent write if a little bittersweet and sad.

Keep writing
FineB

January 20th, 2018 16:00

A Thousanf Splendid Suns
AlexHoy said:

Interesting, I enjoyed!

January 18th, 2018 13:42

A Thousanf Splendid Suns
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 18th, 2018 12:40

A Thousanf Splendid Suns
Aislinn Wilson said:

How cool to see your creative process!

January 18th, 2018 12:00

Happy
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 17th, 2018 11:35

Happy
Aislinn Wilson said:

Chillilng

January 17th, 2018 09:01

Roses
Resa71 said:

Even beautiful things, can bring us pain.

January 16th, 2018 12:24

Dilation
Aislinn Wilson said:

I really like the ambition in line 8, but I found it odd how you didn\'t keep consistency in how you communicated the feeling. The rythym is great. The comparison to self harm is provocative. This is a good piece.

January 15th, 2018 21:25

Dilation
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 15th, 2018 09:10

Creed
El_Pretzadente said:

This is beautiful.
Can anyone tell me how to make it a favorite?

January 13th, 2018 13:16

Winter Chills
Resa71 said:

If I’m understanding it correctly. Sounds like a poem about a heroine addict . At least that’s what I was picturing as I read it. Beautifully sad and disturbing .👍

January 13th, 2018 10:40

Creed
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 13th, 2018 09:52

Creed
orchidee said:

A fine write KR. But a very dangerous experimenting and exploring.

January 13th, 2018 09:45

Winter Chills
El_Pretzadente said:

Well done with the toxicity.


January 12th, 2018 01:17

Carcass
El_Pretzadente said:

Nice writing.
This would be delicious to a vulture.

January 11th, 2018 09:48

I\'m Aware
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Hate, pistols, knives, suicide ideations....please seek NAMI if it gets much worse.

January 10th, 2018 23:56

He Will Not
draculazy said:

Short but beautiful! Great work x

January 8th, 2018 11:14

Abuse #1
Shadowbox15 said:

😱
Wow. Chivalry’s not only dead, it’s being mocked and tortured in the grave!
These stories break my heart.

January 6th, 2018 23:55