Comments received on poems by Resa71
ANXIETY
Caring dove said:
hello resa , anxiety is a horrible feeling , i can relate in a way , i like how you can be relieved once you step back into your comfort zone , into your house .. the movement from anxiety to calm is displayed very well here \'\' i am safe inisde my dwelling, at peace with myself once more \'\' nice and the calm feeling returns .. a well written poem here
January 20th, 2018 04:55
Caring dove said:
hello resa , anxiety is a horrible feeling , i can relate in a way , i like how you can be relieved once you step back into your comfort zone , into your house .. the movement from anxiety to calm is displayed very well here \'\' i am safe inisde my dwelling, at peace with myself once more \'\' nice and the calm feeling returns .. a well written poem here
January 20th, 2018 04:55
“ Twisted Heart”
Caring dove said:
\'\' mind spinning , stomach sour\'\' nice wording here :-) you really convey well how much you try to love this person and the resistance they so readily emit . sometimes we can try and love someone , show them but trying to love someone when all they do is resist, i can understand would be quite painful , but sometimes two people are not meant to be together, i liked reading this poem
January 20th, 2018 04:52
Caring dove said:
\'\' mind spinning , stomach sour\'\' nice wording here :-) you really convey well how much you try to love this person and the resistance they so readily emit . sometimes we can try and love someone , show them but trying to love someone when all they do is resist, i can understand would be quite painful , but sometimes two people are not meant to be together, i liked reading this poem
January 20th, 2018 04:52
JULY 5th
ron parrish aka wordman said:
never feel guilt, for something you couldn\'t change,life is precious i know,
but we are just human
January 13th, 2018 15:39
ron parrish aka wordman said:
never feel guilt, for something you couldn\'t change,life is precious i know,
but we are just human
January 13th, 2018 15:39
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