Comments received on poems by beachbabe
I Lost You.
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem for two reasons: One, it is well written, two, it poses interesting questions. Can one lose something one never had? If you think you love a person you don\'t know, that love is only based on your own imagination. What if you meet the person and find out that he/she is totally different from what you imagined?
January 27th, 2018 21:26
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem for two reasons: One, it is well written, two, it poses interesting questions. Can one lose something one never had? If you think you love a person you don\'t know, that love is only based on your own imagination. What if you meet the person and find out that he/she is totally different from what you imagined?
January 27th, 2018 21:26
This Day
FredPeyer said:
All it takes to make a day count, it that one special person. I am one of the lucky ones. I had nearly 15,000 days now with my special person!
Love you poem, it even made me take out my calculator! :-)
January 16th, 2018 17:31
FredPeyer said:
All it takes to make a day count, it that one special person. I am one of the lucky ones. I had nearly 15,000 days now with my special person!
Love you poem, it even made me take out my calculator! :-)
January 16th, 2018 17:31
Hear Her
beachbabe said:
Guys, y’all are so awesome! Thank you so much! This is the first time I’ve wrote in years and it feels so good to do it!
January 16th, 2018 15:58
beachbabe said:
Guys, y’all are so awesome! Thank you so much! This is the first time I’ve wrote in years and it feels so good to do it!
January 16th, 2018 15:58
Hear Her
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is fantastic, I\'m in love with your poem
January 15th, 2018 21:47
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is fantastic, I\'m in love with your poem
January 15th, 2018 21:47
Hear Her
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BEACHBABE ~ Thanks for your first poem which leaves much to the imagination ~ as a good poem should ! To me it invokes a Mermaid ~ very ephemeral ! I have heard them but never actually seen one ! I have met the WIKI WAKI Mermaids in Florida and in the water they took my breath away ~ BUT ~ When we got to talk ~ they were just Ladies with plastic tails ! Maybe one day I will get to meet a real one ! \"Thanks for sharing\" Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.
January 15th, 2018 05:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BEACHBABE ~ Thanks for your first poem which leaves much to the imagination ~ as a good poem should ! To me it invokes a Mermaid ~ very ephemeral ! I have heard them but never actually seen one ! I have met the WIKI WAKI Mermaids in Florida and in the water they took my breath away ~ BUT ~ When we got to talk ~ they were just Ladies with plastic tails ! Maybe one day I will get to meet a real one ! \"Thanks for sharing\" Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.
January 15th, 2018 05:29
Hear Her
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, beachbabe! I have no idea about what you intended with this poem, but to me it is a wave. That one perfect wave on the north shore of Oahu, the one I have been waiting for! Very well penned!!!
January 15th, 2018 04:57
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, beachbabe! I have no idea about what you intended with this poem, but to me it is a wave. That one perfect wave on the north shore of Oahu, the one I have been waiting for! Very well penned!!!
January 15th, 2018 04:57
